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This is some damn good writing.

Reading positive comments about your writing on a fetish porn site is a weird feeling, but an enjoyable one. Thank you both very much, the idea that people care about this is part of what makes it so fun.

I can only wholeheartedly second DreamerDreaming's comment. We're lucky to have someone so talented write this type of rare stuff.

Fantastic work as always. Your ability to describe such an alien experience in such clear detail is nothing short of amazingly talented. And to leave us on such a cliffhanger, Karyn isn't the only one being a tease.

I find his perspective hotter as well, but I wanted to give this a try. Though, I hope you both like the next chapter better ;)

happy this is back

Thanks for mentioning that, I missed it. I made the edit.

You say the Lower the number the weaker they are but in fact the reverse is true

Magic. The neck was erased yet Lucy talks. Therefore the mechanisms must be in her body too

Great story so far! I've also been eagerly watching for new additions. Your descriptions of Jon's POV have been excellent, though I'm also glad that we get Karyn's perspective and that she's enjoying this as much as he is.

Good thing nobody's relying on Lucy for precise anatomical expertise ;)

I don't want to be Pedantic Pete here but the voice box is in the throat, not the chest

I mean, from his perspective is what I'm saying

Awesome chapter as always. Personally I would prefer to have Jon's perspective depicted like the first and second time he wished to be a pussy, it's what makes the whole thing really hot imo

thx for the chappie

thx for the heads up

Apologies, my dad has been in the hospital so I haven't been up to writing. I know what is coming next though. <3

I do intend to continue all of my threads, I had a week off work which was why I exploded into activity, now I am back at work I'm tired all the time so that is cramping my inspiration a bit. I have a continuation of MMS right now being worked on which I should post tomorrow, after which I shall see what takes my fancy

Hope you going to continue and make a full story for any of your threads, would love to see jon changing and becoming a fae in mind and body.

Thanks for staying with me, part of the reason I'm writing this is that I've been through everything on your list too many times!

I've been looking forward to these updates every week. I love the way you write Jon and Karyn, you make them feel very real!

you stuck now boy!

Twinning stories for the win!

Hey looks good! I was tempted to do something similar. Trying to figure out a way to get his head stuck on another body ;)

'stole' a bunch of Chompy's episode for this, but i had to take it in this direction, i am planning on adding to Chompy's one though

@Sage, I'm planning that for when they meet.

This is great, why was it not continued?

More ! More! :)

I wouldn't mind a more detailed description of Aiko and Jon(Junko?)

I've been thinking about this and I am inclined to agree, especially as I intend on playing with this idea in my Zoe branch ( given her twin and her lover are both Goth that is going to seriously influence Chloe)

Love the story for now and really curious to see how Jon will react when "she" see her new sister.

Look, I know.
Rowling and I are from the same city and I hope she doesn't mind me playing with something inspired by her novels, don't worry it won't outright be a rip off of the Potterverse.

Thanks Ormosier, that really means a lot to me

thx for the chapter, love your branches

Please note, clearly known IP are used in this and consequent episodes, I , in no way, claim ownership of these names, consider names of real world creatives to be an homage to those than made the comics I love and the names of fictional characters to be just representative of how comic mad teens might talk.

Also, clearly this is an homage to Whately Academy and the original sources that inspired that, enjoy :)

Thank you Mira, it makes a big difference when my crazy sexy stuff gets some love, this one is my favourite too

Stay Tuned :)
I can say their connection has gone VERY deep

You've got me wondering just how deep their connection has become, can they do twin speech or is it even more where they can actually feel each other desires and thoughts?

A+ for best choice in sexy twinification, god I hope they fall for one another :D

Just throwing it out there. Jon and Karyn could have forgotten to fix reality, they may have been so focused on getting the mess undone that they didn't realize the original wsih made it so that Karyn doesn't have parents anymore (why would a penis have one)?

The wish was pretty simple, "I wish Karyn was my penis", so thus her family wouldn't know of her as a daughter, she wouldn't have a room, etc...

It's not like you have to stick to one storyline, Fiction Branches gives you the option to split the story here, imo just continue writing and if you dislike the outcome, start another branch from here

Yeah... and completely intentional! Not like I didn't know where to go from here or anything.

The absolute cliffhanger, Jesus

If there's one thing more dangerous than the pull out game, it's being at peak arousal with a wishing stone in your hand. Really hope this doesn't go south for Jon. At least not permanently, heh

Also,

"Also, being Goth isn't genetic, it's cosmetic so Zoe would have been disappointed anyway, unless she could use the Psychic bond to influence the Zoefied Jon to trying out the Goth look. I am enjoying your contributions though, keep 'em coming, it encourages me to write more knowing how much of a kick folks get out of this."

I was thinking about this but forgot to address it when I first replied.

I feel it is a question of Nature vs. Nurture but in this case we have both. John's nature would have changed to match Zoe's; maybe not 100% but probably 80%+. Genetics influences everything. With Zoe manipulating him along the proper lines I don't doubt he would become a Goth Girl. If he'd contracted it as an adult with a more firmly developed identity the odds would start swinging against Zoe but as a teenager going through massive changes I don't see much resistance being mounted.

Aiko is still around, at least in my version of events. If she weren't I'd be writing myself into a corner pretty hard given the stone's range limitation.

Also, thanks for the compliment. =-)

Also, being Goth isn't genetic, it's cosmetic so Zoe would have been disappointed anyway, unless she could use the Psychic bond to influence the Zoefied Jon to trying out the Goth look. I am enjoying your contributions though, keep 'em coming, it encourages me to write more knowing how much of a kick folks get out of this.

Ah Gawd, that made me laugh out loud! Poor Zoe. Is Aiko still around or has she left for Japan? This is going to cause psychological stress for them both until they can be together

lol this is cascading wonderfully out of control.

Hahaha, poor John, doomed by triple whammy.