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I've been thinking up ideas and twists for another day based on the options. I can see some possibilities with families changing to match the daughters they are getting, like with Jon becoming Black from Aisha joining the family. There are some fun options I can think of for the older cast changing in some unexpected ways, and possible combinations

I want to thank you and The Guest for building upon the premise I had established 12 years ago and taking it in directions I could never have foreseen.

I’d love to see continuations of all four of The Guest’s branches, but if I have to choose only one, it would be “ Tiffany and All The Female Students are Unchanged” which shows something we’ve never seen before: the families (and Jon) swapped but not the girls.

Wow, this is a very interesting alternate storyline. Love how Jon is going off the deep end. Heh, was surprised he didn't get hit with a change of gender since he forgot to exclude himself. Happens so often in these situations. Sorry for not commenting on the other recent posts, I need to read them still. Right in the middle of a move and have been too distracted to read anything lately.

I've always loved your writing, Pro, and remember us corresponding a long time ago. I am contemplating returning to writing and would be interested in talking with you. My email is in my FM bio.

Love this branch! The stuck is very hot. "transformation masochism" theme, very hot. Hope to see more.

Hah, thanks aashen! I don't think I can offer much quality in writing when it comes to plot of dialogues, but I do put great care in making my writing descriptive for the specific purpose of people being able to picture well what the main character is going through.

Some of the best writing I've seen on here in years. Please keep up the great work!

Hey what the fuck is this

Hey what the fuck is this

Well things are spilling deliciously into the unexpected. Nicely written DW.

Hell, after all this excitement I totally even forgot that Sarah at one point ended up two torso conjoined. I wonder if she is fated to end up back in a similar situation.

Holy crap. I mean, I won't lie and say that I didn't think she might clone herself, but I could have never expected all of this. That is one huge new scenario born of the cloning machine. Really hot read. I have a whole new view of Zoe I've never had in any of the other story lines before. This was great. Loved it all and really have to wonder where this will go next. A lot of situations that have to be remedied by the stone, and a whole lot of potential more changes that might happen because of it too. Will Zoe get her wish of finding out what it is like to have two heads? Will the original Karyn get changed too? What will happen to the two two-headed Karyn clones now that all three Karyns love Jon? Hell, will more people end up getting cloned? Will Jon end up with some conjoined or TGed fate himself? So many questions.

Visuals for the top (https://www.pinterest.com/pin/659284832928461323/) and bottom (https://www.aliexpress.com/i/32818466668.html) of Karyn/Karli's outfit.

Well hell. Looks like conjoined fetishes run in the family now. This can only go up from here. Loved the chapter.

I don't mean to pick on this particular author, but I really need to say something about octaves. I keep seeing stories where they say the guy's voice went up many octaves. Here's the thing… the average male and female voices are about a half octave apart. A good singer is lucky if their highest and lowest notes that they can make are two whole octaves apart. If Alex had a super deep bass voice, and it raised up three octaves, his new voice would be far above the high soprano range. Some women have very deep voices. Listen to Cher talk. But no one could ever accuse her of sounding like a man. This is why voice changers suck. They never make a guy sound like a girl. They make a guy sound like a high pitched guy. Pitch is a very small part of the real difference. Most of it is timbre.

Why did she get such big feet? Size 8 would be massive on someone who is 4'9".

I don't really have anything as such planned other than just taking it in the general direction of what I'd wish for to realise my own "masochistic transformation" fantasies...

Would be quite happy for other people to chime in and start contributing!

I like the direction you’re going with here! Definitely curious to see if you have anything planned.

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Meant to post a picture but totally forgot

Expect lots of purple prose and unserious plot; this storyline is my attempt to deal with writer’s block, so I’m really just doing whatever feels fun (though I might throw in random ideas people throw at me). Also! Special thanks to Perri for coming up with the name.

Thanks for cleaning up

I like this start quite a bit, it makes me wonder what you got in mind next.

Been some time since I had seen a body part swap story. Was fun to read, hope to see more on this one in the future. Whole world is going to have some new and very different outlooks on life soon. Jon definitely ended up in a very fun situation himself.

Cleaned up a duplicate posting.

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Tried three times to get the image to show, and it's not worked.

I had previously posted this but it was on the wrong branch.

After reviewing the story layout, I noticed this episode was in the wrong place, so I've reproduced the original and put it in the right branch. I changed this episode to reflect that.

If Morgana the witch can transform teenage boys and girls, what's to stop her from transforming Gary?

Great storyline! I would keep the sexy voice to match the body, but drop the valley girl talk.

Well the three Karyn sisters turned out hot as hell in the end. Heck even the Jon's/Jill's body turned out pretty hot. Wasn't expecting him to get turned into a girl and conjoined as well in the end. Nice turn of events, though heh could have maybe done without the poop. Nice stories Different Writer. Will you do more conjoined and multi body part stories in the future?

Such a great body for sure. Well written and enjoyably read. Love how addicting that body appears to be. What a great form you have given them.

Haha, two torso is a great conjoinment option for sure. Funny as well to see Sarah just continue to be a bitch to her bodymates.

Hey, you on the Discord at all? This is definitely different but it's enjoyable.

Going to leave an actual branching spot here for it people want either to have Karyn accept her copies and fuck over Jon together, or have her freak the fuck out and have the copies take out their mommy issues on Jon.

Yeah, this deviated away from the norm a bit. I couldn't really see any path in which the clones found out about what Jon was like without them turning on him.

Once they realize that they can just wish that Jon can't undo the wishes without their permision, he's probably going to spend his life as a sextoy.

Jesus, what's better then one two headed Karyn with an extra sexy body and awesome amounts of twin play? Well two two headed Karyn's with extra sexy bodies and filled to the brim with twin play of course. That was awesome, and the prospect of them hiveminding themselves together sounds even better not to mention depending on how it ends up worded the original Karyn might also be pulled into the new three bodied five headed new Karyn filled with desire for Jon.

As for continuing it at this time before the girls get access to the stone again. I'm imagining there is probably a lot going on in Jon's head about what he is going to do to take care of the whole real Karyn clone Karyn situation. Now that is if he is thinking rationally, and well we know Jon, he's probably letting his arousal addled mind wander in many ways while daydreaming through the school day. I wonder if he's gained a kink for multi-limbed and headed girls now.

Not entirely sure how to continue this. I guess Jon at school, trying to take care of her perverted urges, before returning him to find two two-headed Karyns.

The twin play in this was awesome. Jesus, so well written. Loved the whole thing and all of the interplay she had between her heads and all the twin talk.

Yes. This is everything I was hoping this chapter would be. So insanely perfect. Loved it all for sure, and loved the choice of giving her a second vagina. Well written and well planned.

I wanted to comment on the first posts you put up but I'll put it here instead. Holy cow how crazy awesome this is to see. Didn't think I would see much of any new conjoinment content coming out. Has been fantastic to read and such a awesome scenario. The whole thing is hot as hell and this is just getting more exciting now playing into not just conjoinment but also multi-head with Karyn now having two heads and two brains to think and do things with. Thank you so very much for making this all. I hope you keep on making more. This stuff is great.

I'm not on Discord. What can I fix to make this less confusing?

I was probably just tired, but I couldn't really figure out what I wanted to do with this chapter. I knew the beats I wanted to include, but I don't think it worked.

Great start. Maybe a different branch for each person's box? And of course something unexpected has to happen.....

If it helps any, I was just making stuff up as I went along. I figure as long as everything's internally-consistent, it's not too important how well my made-up magic system tracks with real-life traditions.

Really enjoying this branch from Cork. Had some ideas of my own - I don't normally go for the "realistic" wiccan-style magic stuff so hopefully this sort of fits.

how to ruin an exciting story...

Thanks! Your encouragement is very motivating, and I'm really glad you enjoy my stuff. :) I've actually been around. I post a bit on chyoa.com, and I recently published a game on tfgs. I still keep up with FB, I just don't post as much as I used to. I'm looking forward to your own additions!

Nice to see you back Perri. I enjoy your work a lot. Hoping to be able to add to some of it when college is finally finished in a few months. Keep up the great work!

Yeah that helps Claire. Will this be a story line you will be continuing?

Added a few chapters to what you requested for Anna and Amy. I hope you like what I wrote.