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@Nora Lua, Ask away. Given the state of mind I was in while writing this I was wondering what the first question would be anyway, haha

Yeah… I got many questions…

Do you have any plans of Jon copying from his family?

Thank you!

Honestly, I had this idea for a means of things impacting Jon and Karyn for a little while, but while I know which direction I'm taking this, other people should feel free to deviate off in any direction at any point themselves if they want to!

This is ready for Hollywood

So, my flight home was delayed due to maintenance. That meant I missed my connection, had to rebook a flight the next day, and then THAT flight was delayed. But hey, lemons from lemonade, right? Tradition is to write an episode if you've nothing to do but wait at an airport, so I turned my brain off and wrote whatever came to mind. "Something interesting" indeed!

Feels like a missed opportunity that no one made the "I am 2 inches taller than Karyn!" make Karyn 2 inches shorter then Jon.
So he'd have the issue of staying as small as he currently is, getting his initial wish of making Karyn "petite" and he's probably in another mess because she'd now remember being this small and to get perission from her to be taller again he'd probably need to fess up, which my cause further retaliation instead.

I wonder what he will actually get from Karyn

I wonder if Karyn would be compelled to let him borrow something since she seemed unaffected by the last wish.

Great read so far!

Ah! Thank you for your kind comment! I was actually just contemplating which story I should continue. I was leaning towards Strange Summoning to lean into the smuttier elements, but I really like this one too. It has an element of whimsy that I think is fun, but I was a bit worried that I'd lost the vibe. I've also been struggling with putting characters that are adults, but basically highschoolers, in sexual situations. I'm not sure which I'll work on. 😕

I loved where this was going. I hope to see you continue it. I would contribute, but a lot of the lore is outside my wheelhouse. It’s really enjoyable stuff!

This sounds like it has the potential to be a fun storyline.

wondering how long it will take for jon to copy something mental/physical off of somebody

This is one of the series that I always wish would get another update!

If it's like your other stories. I can't wait to see how this turns around for Jon. turning out good with him and Karyn in a relationship in someway

Great bit of writing! Love shorty Jon and can't wait to see how he fumbles his revenge. Really excited to have another talented storyteller around!

:) my first post on this site! I hope you enjoy :D

Awesome!
Let's hope for Johns sake his duties aren't too girly and that at least some of the suitors are girls...
Excited to see where this goes

Been a little bit since I've touched this one

If Karyn gets the stone, can she keep herself from wishing Sarah into her girlfriend?

Jon gets the one wish willow lol

oh my goodness ekempo, i just came to check if there was a new chapter yet. Thank you for the response!

These past 2 days have been going on for a really long time. I'm amazed you're keeping track of what's happened. It's so confusing for me, but really fucking hot!

I had been hoping there would have been some residuals left where Sarah was at least attracted to Karyn, if not in full girlfriend mode and Biff would get over his anger at Jon, and start treating him as a friend with possibilities.

Hope for good news and good luck in the future thank you for stories

And in no way is Biff being a cinnamon roll a bad thing here. I kinda love the direction this is heading!

I've said it before, but this paths Biff is really a cinnamon roll.

As someone who's faced that existential dread and tried to do ANYTHING during it you have my highest respect for trying to keep up with writing while doing so.
I was unable to, and found that the only solace I could find was getting out of the house and being with other people.
Whatever you need to do to find a little peace of mind, do so. You're an amazing author, I love when a story you write updates, I find your ideas and paths engaging and intriguing, but none of that is more important than your mental and physical health.
Wishing you the best of luck through what sounds like a harrowing time.

Hope everything come out fine. Here's wishing you all kind of good luck.

Are we ever going to cut to our missing character?

The subtle and shifting juxtaposition -- and the layers left behind each time -- is great. Solid work -- it's hard to stop reading once one starts, and the urge to go back and re-read to make sure nothing was missed is as strong.

Seriously, this is wonderful and intensely clever.

Oh boy! What an unambiguous and well-worded wish we have here that surely won't lead to any serious or unexpected consequences later in this branch! I love chapters that display as much cleverness as this one!

Lol, I wonder if we'll ever hear the original wish and see how Jon f*ed up.

Super fun. Always love wardrobe shenanigans

Thanks!! I need to set aside some time to keep diving through this. I really liked the Wish Editor concept, and figured a lot of delightful mayhem could fall on Jon & Karyn with this.

Really fucking good. Can't wait to read more.

@Nora Lua
Me: what are you talking about?
...!!!
Oh, hoh, very clever.

+2 lol

I can’t believe Karyn met famed fictionbranch’s moderator The Guest!!!

Wow! One of the hottest chapters in the history of this site! I love how you are nailing it with Karyn FtM transformation, with her tomboyish nature enjoying Biffs jock nature and her old feelings toward Sarah being channeled into sexual desire and submission. That works really well because you are also writing a very nice and sexual version of Sarah here. Thanks for writing.

I want to write a good mix of both physical and non physical swaps. That said, most of the swaps I have in mind right now are non physical

That's a fun premise. I'll have to see if I have something fun to contribute

I'll get back to the regularly scheduled programming, just wanted to put this down while I had it kicking around.

Protect the cinnamon roll! Back off Jon! Let Karyn-Biff enjoy their new hair care obsession, without your heavy wish-handed interference! 😤

Lol. Biff has somehow turned into an incredibly sweet cinnamon roll.

This is actually a gently neat story.

Sget will you lean more towards physical swaps or non physical swaps?

High praise. For what it's worth, an old story of yours indirectly but traceably influenced my Kamiéra story.

I am really excited to see this continue