To Paradox
So we are both writing the hell out of this thing, but I see something in how we are writing. You are writing mainly Plot related pieces, and I am writing Character focused entrees which expound on those plot developments. I think those are both of our strengths, not saying that my parts don't have some plot in them or that yours don't have some character development, but I think those two things are our strengths.
From this I have an idea, lets use this, you write plot, throw curve balls, keep the story moving forward, and as you do that I will write little sidebars off of each which tell the story of what's happening to character. This is what we've already been doing and I think if we include a little note at the beginning of the whole branch that all these things are to be read, side branches and the main story making a whole, we could have something really great eventually.
What say you? I await your next entry, and am really digging on this story.