Hey, I just saw this posting now.
Firstly, seems we both posted something at the same time earlier, and I really liked the idea of Ms. Holloway and Sarah discussing their plan, so I kind of adapted it to fit into the plan time frame of the others experiencing how changed their lives are.
I did leave out the bits about Karyn being connected to magic, because I figured the stone is the pinnacle of magic in the story. No one's really sure how powerful Ms. Holloway is, but Jon/Jen and Karyn are banking on the stone being stronger.
As of right now, my plan is to show how the characters lives have been changed, and as my latest addition insinuates, Sarah is sort of the linchpin in all of it.
Like I said, I do enjoy going back and forth on this site. It seems you have your own ideas, though, which is great. If you want to just focus on that, I'd understand as well. But either way, if you're up for it, so am I.
