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Did she call Zoe Mrs and Linda Ms? Or is it just fast paced?

2025-04-20 21:50:52

On ZLGT - stuck for the forseeable



I was thinking something else, but I want to see where you take this.

2025-03-08 01:45:07

On Sarah's New Part is Thea Woods



Love the addition

2025-03-07 01:21:19

On Sarah is Joined By Nadine



Theodore? I'm still trying to figure out the method behind the swaps, but I liked this.

2025-01-31 16:40:27

On Friends and Crushes



Actually, in other branches he is older.. in this one he is 6ish. In most branches I write him as 10... but in most branches Jon's mom is Linda, not Laura. We live on the multiverse I guess.

2024-10-11 14:08:56

On Jon Starts the Day



I think there are some fun differences I tried to add between the two.

2024-10-06 16:42:18

On Day 4 Begins



Yes... versus the other branch where she kept the blonde hair... but wishes can only be reinterpreted...

2024-10-03 14:57:12

On Karyn



Welcome back

2024-08-17 18:07:43

On DMU - the boys react



Me too. Not that I don't have an idea... but sometimes someone else posts something and I go off in a different direction with them. Advantage of the site. But what do you think?

2024-07-24 20:25:29

On The Hacker



They definitely are. Thinking of pivoting

2024-07-19 17:40:17

On Karyn's Friend is Sabrina, Not Jon



If Jon is also affected, and he seems to be anxious around people, would he end up as Yuki's friend?

2024-07-19 07:27:00

On Karyn's Friend is Sabrina, Not Jon



Well, on the first part, you actually read my mind. I was going to have his words vanish after 4AM.

2024-07-15 07:29:20

On Jon Makes a List (Alt)



I love blogs. And webrings. And guestbooks. I miss the classic web.

2024-06-10 18:17:15

On Jocelynne's Blog



I'm happy to know in Lake Point, people still blog.

2024-06-09 14:34:21

On Jocelynne's Blog



I'm going in another direction, but please continue this.

2024-06-04 00:05:29

On Do you Speak The Language?



Since I wrote this...a novel and a TV show are now named Dark Matter.

2024-06-01 23:55:07

On Zoe (2)



A4 equivalent in the US is letter sized paper.

2024-05-17 11:53:47

On Back with Black



A4? Where is this set?

2024-05-16 18:38:40

On Back with Black



Please don't see it as a criticism, it was more of a hot take. I enjoyed the branch overall, although I still to intend to try and bring my version to a conclusion (along with years of other unfinished storylines) at some point.

2024-04-24 19:44:27

On DMU - Ruby’s proposal



Feels like a choose your own adventure.

2024-04-24 14:49:02

On DMU - Ruby’s proposal



So, how are unchanged people picking up on the changes?

2024-04-16 18:51:06

On DMU - catching up



Curious if we'll visit the Meshidas story.

2024-04-12 16:50:01

On DMU - More guests arrive



I think the names at this point are getting a bit confusing.

2024-03-15 10:13:44

On DMU - the Gibsons arrive



Gives me an idea for something I was pondering for the 122 variation.

2024-03-12 15:41:09

On DMU - Buster gets a phone call



I'm curious about the two dogs and how they are doing.

2024-03-12 10:32:49

On DMU - Lydia and Max



Welcome back, missed this

2024-02-22 12:33:44

On DMU - Day 4 starts off well



Wasn't that the name of the doctor in Dark City?

2023-12-26 11:41:19

On An (Possible) Ally



I second missing your contributions. Hope life allows.

2023-12-13 22:39:44

On DMU - a break before the party



This appears to be my branch, https://www.cyoc.net/interactives/chapter_212264.html, from another site. Is there a particular reason you are reposting it without attribution? Would you mind removing it and not copying my content in future?

2023-12-10 08:55:45

On She decided to take a picture of her with her family



Thanks for adding. You're #1

2023-11-02 11:37:42

On Someone Looking For Beff?



I hope this isn't an Alive situation...

2023-10-04 13:27:13

On plane crash



I'm eager to see about the main continuity. I've been paralleling it.

2023-09-22 12:03:50

On DMU RB Andrews - outfits for the 2nd day



If you ever want to talk,. I'm in the Discord.

2023-09-22 12:02:11

On DMU RB Andrews - outfits for the 2nd day



Glad to see you back.

2023-09-22 11:52:40

On DMU RB Andrews - outfits for the 2nd day



Yes, but sometimes they like to hang around Hot Topic at the mall...what corporate sellouts.

2023-09-01 17:08:44

On The Witch's Brew



Best branch ever.

2023-08-15 17:29:00

On You Are What You Wish



I find upvotes motivate me to continue because I know people made an effort, but if you look at my work, I keep going regardless sometimes. I'd rather have some thoughtful comments

2023-08-12 19:29:53

On you should change the system



If I continue, we'll see Rebecca again. But my sentiments exactly. I want Karyn to remain unpredictable.

2023-08-12 19:24:45

On What about Karyn?



It was 11 years ago. Do you have any suggestions? I could always be convinced for a reboot.

2023-08-12 02:08:46

On A Call from Karyn



This gives me an idea for my version of this... love the chat feed.

2023-08-11 13:17:59

On Reactions to the Revamp



I figured he's himself.. but living the life he'd have lived if born instead of Karyn...and as a girl,. but I left it open for other interpretations. I figured in this version girl Jon..as yet unnamed(but not Karyn...too confusing) just didn't choose a path that led to being in the bedroom with male Karyn)

2023-08-09 00:55:38

On A Whole Different Life



I'm sure she's not the only licensed driver...besides she might not have gotten a license and makes Biff pick her up.

2023-08-07 11:51:34

On The Details of a Lifetime



I did that in my fork..but Zoe is being repurposed as an upgraded Zoe...in yours she could be elsewhere.

2023-08-06 19:08:08

On It All Comes Together



Sarah is definitely going to be driven crazy by her.

2023-08-06 02:06:53

On Meet Mackenzie



Well, the director is also an AI, I'd imagine.

2023-08-05 10:13:46

On Ellis Tries a New Model



The irony...I was writing an alternate branch before I read this, and I was going to put in a line saying, "One of the programmers wanted to make you Australian."

2023-08-05 01:53:24

On Program J Gets Her New Character Model



I just wonder what everyone will be thinking as the days progress....after all...they are becoming new selves.

2023-07-11 09:09:30

On DMU RB Andrews - Abby keeps her head



I commented in the Discord yesterday that I was wondering if I'm qualified to write a scene where two women who used to be friends who have suddenly swapped reproductive systems with their husbands rekindle their friendship.

2023-06-28 12:59:11

On Lucy and Laura Chat



Sometimes, I like to write Biff and Sarah as a couple who has had several public breakups during the course of the year.

2023-06-21 23:40:24

On Five Families Will Become Like the McMillans



I sort of liked the idea of Zoe being a socialite.

2023-06-21 18:29:01

On A Little More Mixed Up



Wonder what happens to the real McMillans.

2023-06-20 23:35:39

On Five Families Will Become Like the McMillans



Whatever happened to Biff's parents?

2023-06-16 18:02:49

On DMU RB Andrews - Landons choice and Abby’s idea



I have more to come.

2023-06-16 14:52:51

On DMU RB Andrews - Landons choice and Abby’s idea



Your Andrews are very different from mine.

2023-06-16 13:20:51

On DMU RB Andrews - Landons choice and Abby’s idea



I actually was working on a branch where it worked and it didn't, you beat me to that.

2023-06-08 17:45:15

On Fortunately, Myka Wasn't Holding the Stone



I'm just bringing back all the characters...

2023-06-06 22:42:33

On Feeling Better



Steve seems even a worse womanizer than ever here

2023-06-05 18:03:22

On DMU RB Farber - Housecall



Well, he's a travelling salesman... and Linda is an ambitious career woman... maybe he left one wife for another

2023-06-04 18:56:01

On Stephanie Offers Myka a Ride Home



Well, think of it on a timeline level. Jon left the house, and it is established it was after school when he left, and he was gone for at least an hour. Let's assume Stacy went into the house right after Jon declined to play with her. Not that much time has passed, so assume we still have time till Jon returns. In the other branch, I had him come back immediately, but that contradicts the idea he just left.

2023-05-27 12:59:10

On The Little Witch



I'm trying to decide if I should revisit Steve...in my branch, the last we saw him, he was saying he had nothing to say and didn't want to talk.

2023-05-05 08:40:09

On DMU RB Farber - Steve’s day at school



I couldn't think of a better thing to call it. But I tried to make mine distinctive.

2023-03-27 14:56:26

On Day 2 Ends in the Gibson Household



Why does she keep missing?

2023-03-07 18:16:25

On Another Miss?!



Suspense...

2023-03-07 16:49:41

On DMU - waking up on day 3



No problem with your way... just while I keep using inspiration from your branch, I think we'll continue to diverge.

2023-03-03 18:03:32

On DMU - Robert learns his lesson.



I think I'm going in a somewhat different direction than you are.

2023-03-02 16:35:14

On DMU - Robert learns his lesson.



Glad to have you back.

2023-02-28 13:40:32

On DMU - the final chore



Do kids like hot tubs? I don't know anyone with a hot tub and kids to ask.

2023-01-24 13:32:35

On DMU - Simon’s frustration



Didn't even consider introducing another dog situation. Curious where it will go.

2023-01-23 09:46:45

On DMU - Back to Lydia



I know that....I just said that is where my mind went.

2023-01-22 19:41:28

On DMU - a new offer



I love fleshing out side characters

2023-01-21 08:22:47

On The English Teacher



I figured it wasn't.

2023-01-21 08:22:06

On DMU - a new offer



Why, when someone in a story smiles and says, "Do you know your moms maiden name?" I think identity theft...she isn't going to open up a credit card in Jon's name is she?

2023-01-20 16:09:36

On DMU - a new offer



Lots of people being surprised today. Wonder who.

2023-01-19 15:58:39

On DMU - Meanwhile at school



I pivoted a bit based on your version.

2023-01-18 18:02:58

On Dressing



Also, this isn't important, but wanted to ask...what country does this take place in? I saw the pound symbol earlier for paying for the magazine, just wondering. The town has been in various different imagined places.

2023-01-16 13:05:19

On DMU - The visitor



Wasn't it Ruby Fletcher earlier?

2023-01-16 13:03:21

On DMU - The visitor



Sadly? Is she realizing why?

2023-01-11 13:49:15

On DMU - back with the Gibsons



Is he muttering in a French accent?

2023-01-09 13:26:23

On DMU - Robert gets dressed



Interesting contrast...in my version, he just sort of drops into breakfast and the rest of the day is questionable...in your version, Lucy does it intentionally.

2023-01-01 15:14:49

On DMU - Robert’s punishment



I may use some of your description as I had a few scenes before arriving at a similar scene.

2022-12-29 17:41:10

On DMU - Lydia’s Wardrobe



This is Miss Fine unaffected by a wish...In other branches, a wish made her something else.

2022-12-03 11:20:44

On Group Session



That's similar to my original version, where it is Jon who is the breakout star, the actresses playing Sarah and Zoe are the nice ones, Shannon is a prima dona who thought she was supposed to be the star...and if they do end up in rewrites...what does that do to Jon's original life? If he gets back to it?

2022-11-24 00:46:04

On Sarah ... But who am I?



Might inspire me to add to one of the other branches. Bringing back old ideas.

2022-11-24 00:02:14

On Sarah ... But who am I?



I want to know...what was the plot of the episode that required this? Episode 1, where the main character wishes themselves into a girl and that's the series? If it is more than 1 episode, there's the issue of the opening credits...especially if its an old school opener. Also, this is more curious...do people use the word Starlet?

2022-11-23 23:45:13

On Sarah ... But who am I?



Still hoping you'll come back to it.

2022-11-21 13:17:27

On McMillan Heart to Hearts



I very carefully set my breakpoints to allow for multiple directions.

2022-11-12 12:56:05

On Mom Comes Home



I remember RS232, and PS/2 mice and keyboards very well. I just figured I wouldn't change that. I'll go for the 2002 option.

2022-10-22 02:50:54

On Chronivac: The Next Generation



I wasn't either.... I saw it as equivalent to what Lydia was wearing.

2022-10-11 08:52:07

On Karyn Wakes Up



What are Mikey and Karyn up to I wonder.

2022-10-09 09:49:34

On DMU - Dream On



I predicted this all wrong... I thought his reaction was because he was feeling what would be felt if an adult hit on a teenage girl....

2022-09-12 15:14:35

On DMU - Simons new feelings



I updated the newspaper story in this branch to the headline that did appear in April of 2020.

2022-07-23 10:30:27

On 2020



Well, I figured it was a good compromise between the two. So, if you were literally acting, and playing older, you might make your hair look white. In movies, they might use prosthetics. So, this is magical acting. So, Linda isn't going to become a carbon copy of Leonard...but she has to look the role. Zoe has probably changed the least, because she's able to pull off the role, with her outfit, of a more mature woman. Although I'd imagine she will be able to avoid killing any of her patients.

2022-07-07 00:48:14

On Surprise Visit



He's overwhelmed.

2022-05-22 00:40:40

On Jon Gets Something



To be honest, I've never met a pimp in person. We established that Deshan has a temper...in one branch I described him as almost sweet at times...although that was from the perspective of someone who may have had an abusive relationship with him. So, I was picturing him as good to his people unless they do something stupid or someone crosses him, then he'd have no mercy. So, paying the fine to him is just the cost of business unless he thinks they messed up. So, why would someone like that dress in that way...based on his previous descriptions...he's taunting the police.

2022-05-21 23:53:48

On Taunting the Police



Congratulations #1 from a significantly trailing #2.

2022-05-19 14:42:01

On The Woman is Laura's Lesbian Girlfriend Angela



She's one of those people who isn't comfortable going to the bathroom in other people's houses?

2022-02-10 22:05:29

On To the Brewers' house



Not necessarily no McMillans...they just don't live in that house. As for Jon...he's commenting on the fact he's figured out he doesn't know how to stop these guys from doing their work...but he didn't actually try to get Sarah to remember being Sarah McMillan...to snap her out of it.

2022-02-06 21:22:18

On Teamwork



This one said it is female? https://www.peanut-app.io/blog/korean-baby-girl-names I admit, my Korean is nonexistent.

2022-02-03 22:45:49

On Jon and The Kim Girls



Well, I did some googling, not exactly extensive research. It depends on how sophisticated your thief is. Athena isn't....she just knows enough to get to it before it locks. They'll turn off mobile and wifi so you can't find it or wipe it. Sometimes they'll put it in a signal blocking pouch if they can't yet turn it off. It is easy enough to force it to wipe and then repurpose it. But if there is someone more savvy, they can do other things...not everyone protects their phone well.

2022-01-31 23:26:43

On A Little Petty Theft



I have it in my phone as a preset for Google Maps navigation.

2022-01-31 18:23:11

On Where will Jon go?




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