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Don’t worry, I picked up on that. Feeling like I’m in the final stretch for this now too.

I see what you mean! Just wanted to leave it open for anyone else to add should they want lol

All should be explained soon

I do have it planned out, and I will get round to doing their little roll-back, just want to get the mainline branch finished first now, before I hit another burnout with it.

Ah brilliant, thanks very much, looks like I’d just copied the wrong link.

They’ll be settled again within the next few chapters.

Guest: just covered them in the next chapter

Eleanor: Thanks very much. I have also have stuff on Writing.com if you’re on there if you want more of my stories. Link to my page is in my bio, always glad for any GPs on there :)

I am floating around, been having some troubles lately, and been sucked in by another project. Will be returning to this soon.

Thanks, had a bit of a tough time lately, trying to get myself back into this cause I don’t want to leave it hanging

I love the way you write your interaction. Keep up the great work.

I was planning on addressing this in a later chapter involving the medical team so keep an eye out. Apologies for not making it clearer that it wasn’t the whole town. As for Biffs parents… I may have forgotten about them

Tiffany was never changed, the only ones in Jon’s grade that had been mixed up were Jon, Karyn, Sarah, Biff, Abby, Yuki & Steve

Yeah, I’d initially only had them as side characters, but after seeing what you’d done with them my gears started turning. I like the direction you’ve taken them too.

Thanks, glad you’ve been enjoying it so far

Thanks glad you’ve enjoyed this one, was worried I was rushing their transformations a little so I’m happy they worked well

Thanks, always appreciate your kind comments. I’m glad the pictures work well. You wouldn’t believe how long I spend looking for the right ones sometimes.

Liking this branch already!

I really like the spin you’ve put on Lydia and Buster, and where you’ve taken Abby and her dad, especially seeing as I just added them as side characters. I must admit it’s inspired me to work on them some more

Thanks, appreciate you comments. Rest assured I’m not quite done with Jon and Laura yet, and I have a few other bits planned. Wasn’t intending to do a massive chapter dump, but the flow hit and before I knew it, here we are.

Can’t wait to see where this goes

I’m really enjoying the direction you’re taking this in. Keep up the good work.

Ah brilliant! Thanks for your help. I’ll keep that in mind in case it happens again

Thanks, glad you’re enjoying. I always planned to go the Athena/Zoe route as I felt Zoe/Simon would just be too similar to Jon/Laura. Don’t worry, I have plans for Simon too now though.

Thanks glad you enjoyed. I’ve been a little sidetracked lately, so it feels good to get this story rolling again.

“Prime Version” love it. Love the direction you’ve run with this as well

Thanks, it’s bee n hard to find a balance for the changes, want to keep bringing more in, but the more subtle ones are my favourites. Im planning on building towards to a massive get together, but I kinda pictured this first one to just be Jon, Laura, Lucy, and Sarah

Thanks, it’s bee n hard to find a balance for the changes, want to keep bringing more in, but the more subtle ones are my favourites. Im planning on building towards to a massive get together, but I kinda pictured this first one to just be Jon, Laura, Lucy, and Sarah

Love where you’re going with this

Thanks, glad you’re enjoying. I’m glad the explanation came across well. Was struggling a bit with a way to put it into words. And yeah, I’ve been itching to get to this point, that’s why I’ve been worried about the previous chapters pacing.

Ah thanks, means a lot, been doubting myself a bit recently, and I’ve been worried I’ve been moving things a little too slowly, or too fast at some points

Thanks, it’s one of my favourite types of transformation, especially when they don’t realise it happening

Is that a good or a bad thing? I’m enjoying the direction you’re taking the story, I’ve just got a good plan of where I want this to go.

Nice angle, I was just viewing Abby and her dad as side characters, but I like how you’ve fleshed them out.

Does sound kinda suspect doesn’t it? Not my intention lol

I like the direction you’re taking this

Ah yes, I’d forgotten I’d given her a surname. Just gone back and retconned that. I just used the puns sign cause I’m from the UK so force of habit really.

He might be getting a slight accent, whether he notices or not is another matter

I’m loving what you’re doing with this. Keep up the good work.

I will be, life has gotten in the way the last few weeks

Wow, you must be a mind reader. Love what you’re doing with this, more or less the direction I was thinking of.

Thanks for the addition, love what you’ve done. Don’t worry about derailment. I’m not going for a full outfit swap just yet, but I can carry on my own thread (that’s what I love about this site) Feel free to add more of your own spin, and I look forward to seeing what you can do with it.

I had planned out all their dreams, but wasn’t sure if I should include them all to keep the pacing up, but I don’t see why I cant add them in while I plan the next chapters.

Oh, I hadn’t actually thought of going for that angle. I might try and work it into a later chapter though. Thanks :D

Thanks. I’ve got a lot of ideas for this story so stay tuned

Stay tuned cause I did have something like this in mind

Thanks, I’ve got big plans for this story, but I’d be interested to see what others think/want to add