"I called cut...Look...you were really in the zone there...but the character just isn't working as is...so I want to try something."
"What are you talking about?" Sarah demanded. "What is this place?"
"I know you were in character..but that's the problem. We need to change that. Bridget..."
A twenty-something woman came over, moving to his side. "Yes, boss?"
"You were a teenage girl once...is this what teenage girls are like?"
"Well..." Bridget thought about it. "Are people supposed to like her as a character? I mean...she's the antagonist, but they can sometimes have more depth to them, maybe even turn over a new leaf later."
"Exactly...we need to start showing she isn't just two-dimensional...we need to give her something the audience can relate to. Some kind of secret..."
The assistant seemed to nod. "How about..."
