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on 2016-10-13 16:24:38

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Making Jon a priestess of bast is... kinda interesting with some caveats. I guess the issue I see is what to do after? Forcing Jon to do things he doesn't want to isn't fun (at least to me- I'm in the minority, people seem to think it's erotic) coreced or out right blackmailed sure but this paints a negative view to bast and I don't think she would do that. It just doesn't fit with the characters.

Personally, I would tempt Jon with a problem that only bast can help with and make her a teaser rather then outright sexualised. Maybe she can help Jon control the stone? Make another stone? Bring his grandfather back? Make her human again? The danger of inviting godly forces is the removal of agency and investment to the reader so gods have to be constrained in some way.

Then again all I manage with my ideas is a rating of 9 compared to a lot of the 'perfect' chapters , so maybe I'm still missing a trick with writing an actual plot :p

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