Faster is never better broomB, I write quick but I feel like I've reached a plateau in my writing. To surpass it requires more time in a day then I have. That's why write quick. But I'm sure with time you would write something far superior.
And yes that was the undeniable horror I was digesting with this situation. I made the wish vague so it could be open to interpretation. But as Nathan was changed by his wish and reality is so changed... He is as he always has been except to himself and Jon as she was in earshot. His sister entered that aquarium alone and will leave thinking nothing amiss.
Pretty horrific...
I really enjoy the observation of fish biology in your chapters. Making males the attractors is subtle genius.
