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On re-writing

on 2013-09-01 03:01:59

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Things will have to be rewritten, a tad. Too say the least. Exactly what, I'm not sure. I know going from prose to visual allows me to crops some adjcetives and verbs, but gandose speeches like lucas tends to make is called a "Wall of Text" in comics and is frowned upon.

I'll also be breaking things more into chapters and clumpng related stories that may be out of cannonical order. Chapter 1 is firmly about Jon, a bit about Karyn and Sarah, briefly hits Mikey, and, honestly, might see the deletion of Zoe.

Lucas will probably have several chapters dedicated to her. She arcs quite well. But she'll be abridged rather frequently, me thinks




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