I'm not sure what more there is to write... for me personally, ending it with Bryan seemed the most apt thing to do. What other parts do we still need to address?
Answering my own question I suppose, there is still the matter of what happens to Steven.
There's also the question on what happens to Jeff in school as a giantess clockwork, and if she will ever grow up. I could picture her marking her height on a tree, and coming back to it periodically to check.
Anneza and Astra are going to be quite happy together (though Anneza will need another job to get a house as her parent's place would be too small to add her in it. Still, she's a heroine now.. I'm sure the government will provide. She is after all an instant space shuttle. (Anneza has one desire still though... and I'll address it in the sequel if I write it.)
Thing seem settled in Jon's immediate family.
Lilly is settled as an apprentice to Jon and is a new magic girl initiate.
There is still the issue of the fused magic girl one... not my cup of tea, but I didn't write it so I'll leave that alone.
Oh, and the sequel needs more of that cow-girl postman. I think it's quite a funny idea.
