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28. Mm...

27. its okay

26. Well

25. No

24. Just to make sure

23. Yeah

22. Will do

21. on caring gods..

20. Well

19. its cool

18. Well

17. well..

16. And, well

15. And

14. Uhm

13. one small concern

12. Clarification

11. Yay! :D

10. Go ahead

9. Chompy! Chompy! CHOMPY!!!

Mm...

on 2012-08-04 07:44:39

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I'm kinda with chompy on this one; I loved the chapter on its own merits, but it does seem like it'd be much more in keeping with Melanie's themes to have it be more about her own discovery of things than someone dropping by to explain it to her.




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