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9. Peeping Jon

8. Real correction

7. Visibility

6. Jon's Turn

5. Reader assumptions

4. Successful test.

3. A small test.

2. The next day after school.

1. You Are What You Wish

The downside of being invisible

on 2005-04-03 22:32:12

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"Really? I'm invisible?" Karyn looked into the mirror again. "I can't believe I didn't notice that." She sat down and looked at her floating clothes. "This is weird"

"Yeah it is" It was then that Karyn noticed that Jon was looking at her funny. Well not her of course. But then what was he staring so intently at? She looked at her clothes again and gasp.

If Karyn was visible, Jon would be able to see her midriff. But since she was invisible...

Jon felt a sudden pain on his cheek. "How dare you Jon. How dare you look through me at my underware!"

"What?" said Jon. "I was doing no such thing"

"Oh yeah..." replied Karyn "Well your crotch says something different" Jon embarressedly began to cover up his bulge. Karyn sigh "What was the time limit that you put on this anyway?"

"2 hours"

"2 HOURS! I'm stuck like this for 2 Fricking HOURS?" Karyn let out a sigh of exasperation. "I can't believe that I am going to have to stay like this while you stare at my clothes from whatever angle you want"

"Geez" said Jon. "I wish you'd at least be happy with this situation until the time runs out."




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