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Hot! Hot! Hot! I know it's probably not your favorite kind of scene, but would be awesome to see the transformed guys get into action in their new roles with some of the former girls transformed into guys or even other regular guys (maybe the likes of Biff or Seteve Farber?). Lot's of potential in seeing a former frat guy acting like a milf or teenage slut and seducing other straight and even homophobic guys to sexual activities. Bonus points if they got some of those guys to "lick their pussies" ;)

That was a nice twist. They will be trapped in the penthouse and will experiment more with the clothes. Since they are trapped with each other, I guess more sex between them will be on the books, and the fact that Zoe is subtly taking control in most of the dominant actions (getting the phone call, leading the action) can lead to a permanent swap of roles and anddynamics in their relationship from now on. Excited to see what you have in mind for them.

Hmmm.... I guess the plot is also getting deeper. Zoe has already been calling her mother Linda and most like don't see her as her mother in the traditional sense anymore. However, that blank out moment is hinting us that those experiences are somehow twisting her minds in a more permanent way.

Oh yes! I love storylines where actions have consequences and the subplots return to the main story somehow. Seeing the former four guys end up in a mother/daugther dynamic (just like Linda and Zoe) is really nice and I wonder if some of the former girls will also return to the plot and getinto this mix again.

Gosh, that sequence alternating the real Linda and her perceived image of the hot teenage body was one of the hottest things I've seem in this site. It worked amagzingly well with the flow of this chapter :)

I noticed that Zoe already started calling her mom Linda and not mom, even in her "normal" self. That was great. Also, I am sensing that this young Linda can be a closeted lesbian. Wonder how this scenario will develop. :)

That was nice. Wonder if Bro-Alice will hook up with one of the new cougars and have the reversed gender sex experience that you write really well

It's so hot to see not only Zoe and Linda transformed and ready to play with new boytoys but also how the previous events (Linda and Sierra meeting and the transformation of Rayne) are also part of the plot. I also like the fact that Linda and Zoe, eve if they are immersed in their new roles, are still aware of everything, including seeing Rayne and Alice as the girls they are instead of the frat bros.

That's interesting. They got naked, returned to the apartament and even after choosing new clothes they remained with the same role? Maybe they will only be able to revert to normal after having sex inside the apartment? That would be very clever and would add up to the plot.

Loving the Cougar approach and it will be grear to see Zoe seducing "younger studs". Gosh, I really want to see them bring new people to their room and swapping their lives too until someone takes Linda and Zoe's original clothes. So hot

Its really clever. And I wonder if a bunch of delicious chapters someone they will bring to their room will leave with the original Linda and Zoe clothes, basically forcing Linda and Zoe to choose new clothes for a new life :)

Wonderful frat night for Linda and Zoe. They both scored. Wonder how things will be in the morning for both of them and for the new girls. Excited to see what you have in mind fir the new set of clothes.

Hot, hot, hot!!! Wonder if Zoe will realize how much Alice looks like the valley girls that she despises in her real life and if it will only fuel her new dominant instincts.

Oh, Writing.com is really a wasted potential. Great stories and interactives, but a pain in the ass to deal with membership and free access.

Oh! I love how you managed to advance the plot in the middle of a hot sexy chapter. Sierra is keeping the boxers and asked Linda to came back tomorrow? Something is in motion here and I like it!

OMG! You truly nailed it. Sierra is making Linda feel like a boytoy. Wonder how things will go with Zoe. It will be interesting if after all that bragging Linda gets dominated while Zoe exerts dominance.

Nice! A great choice of using F/F sex scenes in this new concept. It's girl on girl action, but both of them thinks it's F/M action. Hot.

Superb writing here. You managed to give them some mother-daughter time, showing glimpses of their real selves in a new context. Fantastic.

Once again, you've delicious use of images. It's funny to see Zoe gawk for girls that she would despise in her normal life:)

Also loved the twist and agree with Sje's observations. They appear to be embracing the changes faster this time and I am curious to see how Sierra will fit in this plot. Either way, really nice choice in making Linda and Zoe frat bros. A wonderful scenario, especially for me because I love ftm transformations and role reversals. Thanks for writing

Curious to see what will happen after they undress. Will they return to normal or stay trapped in their new personas? If they return to normal, they will be aware of the experience and afraid but also excited to try on new clothes? So much potential here. Loving it.

Another delicious storyline that you've created here. Already excited to see how far this one will go. Lot's of potential here and it gets even better since the Linda/Zoe taboo pairing is seldom explored. Maybe while they are adjusting themselves before doing it like rabbits we can see more of the cast checking in this hotel too. Thanks fkr writing

Loved the development and how you tied up this story. Congratulations, I enjoyed every chapter a lot.

I don't know what you still have in mind for this story, but I would be happy to see more of all those characters settling down inti their new lives for good and how Ruby will be conceived in that night ;)

Don't worry about pace, dear. I also enjoy the things that you are doing with the names. May be a little confusing, but it fits within the story and thw own characters confusion about their new beings and roles. Thanks for writing this.

Wow! Just... wow!!! Might have been the hottest chapter of this website story. Amazing work with the pics and loved "slutty Biff" seducing the new Molly who is still adjusting to her new reality as a jock and testing her dominance. Thanks so much for writing this :)

Lucy and Sarah sex scene was great. I wonder if Lucy will try her luck with Robert in his new outfits too. It would be interesting.

Loved Mickey's new appearance! Wonder how Simon in Karyn will mix with Zoe in Jon. For now, Zoey is happy with his girlfriend Athena, but I guess Simon will soon get some desires of the old Karyn. Maybe not toward Zoey, but a lesbian crush ?

Hey. I missed you and this storyline. Hope everything is well with you, dear. And once again nice chapter with the great pics to go with the plot. So, I guess that the only thing lacking in the transformation now is the voice and a little bit of mental/relationship changes, right? That's cool. Waiting for see what you have in mind.

Hey. Sorry if I took to long to catch up and review all those previous chapter, but once again I want to say that I am totally hooked in this story. I didn't expect that Jason transformation would end up being the most interesting. I simply loved seeing him dressing up nicely and give in to the new desires, and both sex scenes and pics with him and Emma were really hot. Also really enjoyed the way you described Stevie falling further into the ultra feminine role with the description of his new girly things and clothes and how Anne embraced the stallion role during the day. I think you would go for lesbian Simon route, but I am really interested to see Anne and Simon meet up in those new roles and start a thing, while Karyn and Stevie in their new roles would find it "disgusting and gross" while they play together with Stevie developing a crush. Would also be nice to see Anne's attitude towards the new Biff and Karyn. I will wait for Day 4 and the party but will also be happy if you want to explore further characters the way you did for the Farber family, since I loved the transformations of this arc :). Thanks for writing.

Yes. But I am loving it in this branche. Can't wait to see Anne in action :)

This is turning into my all time favorite branch. You already nailed it in the last chapter with Anne calling Steve "monster", but this scene with Emma and Stevie in the bath really was something unique that I enjoyed so much. Everything worked really well here, with the roleplay and the bath speeding up the transition of Emma and Stevie in such a cute, hot and heartwarming way. I know that you already have the plot planned and it's probably way better than anything that I can imagine, but I can see a follow up Jason praising Emma for being such a "good fat... sister"to Stevie as he continue to play "princess" with him while Emma and Anne will go to a workout session at the gym, and maybe Anne being able to score with some chicks ;)

Lovely dream sequences. Can't wait to see more of Anne transformation (the girl on the mall is the new Simon, maybe?) and maybe Jason will be the one who will bath Emma today, with some very interesting results :)

Love the thought of Steve Farber as a little girl (and playing with Karyn, maybe?). Little Emma growing to be a dominant man is also delicious :)

Great idea! It's the ideal spot of the story do go back and develop other branches :)

Another perfect day. The Sarah and Lucy arc was wonderful, going from Sarah's realization about Biff and Mollie to a extremely delicious taboo play (going from "mommy" to "Daddy"). Also, excellent work with the images: it takes talent and effort to find the right pics that fits well with the halfway transformations and you nailed it. Those images really add a lot to the storytelling. Curious about Lydia and Max night/next day and also Buster and Penny. Simply delicious. Wonder what you will have in mind for the party, where all those characters will interact with major changes already concluded. I only know that I will for sure love it :)

Delicious and masterfully executed. I wasn't expecting that much updates at once and was in doubt about reviewing all the chapters or just leave a big one here, and finally decided to do this. I loved this Laura and Jon arc that you did there. The whole thing about the wedding ring and they teasing and acting flirty around at each other still dealing with the arousal and confusion was really really well delivered. It was a slow burn that made the actual sex scene felt earned and extra hot. With Jon and Laura definitely adjusted (even though there might be something more to develop in they arcs, especially Jon and Sarah), I wonder how the others will adjust. I loved the arc with Lydia and Buster (genderswap animal role reversal was a thing that I didn't expect that I would enjoy so much) and curious about how the McMillans are adjusting (as well as Zoe/Athena and Simon's new mindset). So much potential here and I am loving everything about that. Thanks for writing this :)

I am glad that you have something planned for Simon too and I liked how Zoe was able to stand up for him. Biff is on the path to be an even sluttier and sex-obsessed Sarah and he will for sure give Molly very pleasant sexual experiences that would form a great contrast to what she had before. The mall arc was delicious and now I thnk that the hottub will do wonders for the new adult couples there. Maybe preceeded by a Jon and Sarah re-acting what their mothers did in those tapes to get their new hubbies in the mood ;)

Ooooooh, I love where this is going. The scene between Molly and Biff on the last chapter was brilliant and really hot - nice usage of pics too - and I love Biff's internal struggle and justification to act like Sarah ("it's not gay/cheating if it's my cock, right?") and I can't wait to see more of those two in action. About the current scene, I am confused now. I would love to see Simon and Zoe develop that taboo feelings and attraction, but the way you wrote Zoe and Athena here was soooooo cute and heartwarming that I can't help, but root for them. Maybe an awkward love triangle between the three of them would be interesting to explore and test the limits of the experiment (free will x determinism) . Also looking forward to see Jon/Karyn mom/son moment before Jon gives in to his urge and get with Laura. And, of course, Sarah and Lucy intense lovemaking session, but that will also leaving Lucy interested into making a visit to Richard's room... Thanks so much for writing this.

I love the directions you are going. The work with Lydia arc was really good and even if I am not a furry person, I found all the scenes extremely hot. I like that you decided to let "the adults" in this bathtube scene and the videos were an unexpected, but really interesting addiction to the plot, especially because it involves Sarah and John character development in a nice way. I hope you will let us see "the kids" at the mall, notably Zoe deciding to spend more time with Simon and Mickey starting to hang out with Athena. Curious to see what Athena will think about this situation. And, of course, it would be really nice to see Molly and Biff finally going at it with Richard just watching from distance (and maybe exploring his new assets too).
Once again, thanks so much for writing this.
The use of the pictures also adds a nice flavor :).

Oh yes!!! I loved this chapter. You've been doing a really nice job into making their slow transition and you nailed Sarah's changes in this one. All the gang gathered together in the hot tub? In their swimming outfits and all those hormones running? Nice. Lucy and Laura conversations, as well as Jon and Sarah's will be interesting, especially about their newfound lust. Will Biff and Molly "slow-bully" Simon and Zoe? I got a feeling that things will heat up and this night will be a memorable night for many of them. Really looking forward to Laura/John, Lucy/Sarah and Molly/Biff hot action, and curious about how Zoe will deal with Athena, now that she is becoming more attached to Simon. Thanks for writing.

Wow, a bunch of chapters in a row :). That's really nice. I loved the scene with Jon and Karyn and also the nice use of pic to depict Laura's bath. Lydias transformation is also very interesting! This chapter, however, was arguably the most important one, because now you revealed to us, readers, what is really happening and what is you plan. And I think it was the most clever path to follow: making them switch roles, wih a full transformation, but keeping some aspects of their former selves is way more interesting than the full body swap that would return us to the status quo. The fact that they all will sleep "in the proper beds" will lead to some very hot scenes, right? ;) Can't wait :)

This pace certainly feels really good to me ;)

It's one of my favorite too and what I love most about this site. And you are really talented in delivering that with your writing. Not everybody can pull it off and few can write them in such a high level, advancing the plot and delivering hot and subtle slow changes each chapter.

I wonder if Karyn and Simon are having similar struggles about not being able to relate with Laura and Jon. And also Simon/Zoe interactions in the bathtub. Either way, I guess this will be an interesting night for all of them :)

Very nice approach of highlighting Jon's maturity with his insight of "you have to find people who can relate to their situation", as it can be a nice way to develop the development of both houses, with John/Sarah, Linda/Susan. It might be a problem when cheerleader Biff starts to bully Zoe and Simon :)

Ooooh... fun time for Laura and Jon. I can only imagine Zoe and Simon's interactions too, especially in the tub. Wonder if they will do awkward dance "will them, won't them" that original Jon and Karyn had, especially giving the fact that Zoe is apparently more confident and likely to use her new tool than the old John :)

Love the "removing wedding rings scenes". You are really nailing it in terms of slow, but sure, changes for everyone :)

I just love those branches. You two are awesome!!! Thanks so much for writing !

Excellent scene! Wonder if we will be able to see other scenes like this for the rest of the gang. The way you are developing those subtle changes is really good!

Loved Simon calling Zoe "Zo-girl" and I would love to hear Lucy and Mollie conversation :)

Ow, thanks for the follow up :)

It was really great, loved Molly's dream and Buster arcs sounds interesting too. Don't worry about pace, write when you can and I will be glad to follow. Xoxo

Loved that!!! Now I want to see the other's dreams too. Especially Sarah's dad acting like Molly and Simon and Zoe dreams. Maybe they will have the same dream, making it extra taboo, since Jon and Karyn's parts have a thing for each other?