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That got dark a lot faster than expected.
Really interested to see where this is going.

I can understand why DevArt needs something like that. There are thousands of new additions per day and for artists offering commissions gaming the system means more money coming their way.

Here, the community is small enough you quickly learn to recognize authors by name for good or for ill. And awesome stuff like the "Iridescent Sun"-story predate the whole upvote-system and are literally underrated as a result. So checking out zero-upvote additions to branches you like the concept of, is a good policy anyway.

Upvotes seem more of a way to pat the author on the back for work well done, without jumping the hurdle of composing an original sounding comment.

Looking great. Loving the balance of worldbuilding and Tf content so far.

Let's see if Karyn handles the card better than Gary ^^

Wooohooooo new Episode!!!

I'd like to join in on the praise. Really enjoying this branch.

As always, well worth the wait.

Color me intrigued.
Lots of ways interesting ways that sibling might come about.

Entertaining as usual

I'm looking forward to see how Sarah reacts to the new (and probably slightly nerdy/tomboyish) addition to the cheerteam.

Thank you for the critique and the kind words.
I shared the feeling that the intro was too long. I had a shorter one already written up, but wasn't sure how to make alternate intros work with he structure of this site.
Did some rearranging that will hopefully offer a smoother experience.
I'll go over the long intro in the next few days and see what belongs on the cutting room floor.