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What does sample of innocence mean?

There was good stuff in "Brave," but it was basically three different movies struggling to figure out which movie they were actually gonna be. Apparently there was a bunch of behind-the-scenes drama and it was "noted" to death by studio executives several times over, which explains a lot.

Plus, anything with Mumford & Sons on the soundtrack is my eternal sworn enemy.

Urgh had to update. Mixed up Greg with Adam. Adam was the initial name I had in mind but Gregory makes a better werewolf name :)

Yeah I wasn’t the biggest fan of brave.

For me brave is in the heart of the simpsons syndrome of tv. You could replace that characters with the simpsons and it might even work better. The way they treated male characters was awful.

I liked Brave as well. Transformation movies are always better then if they did not have transformtion.

Possibly, I'd have to go back and try to remember where I was heading with it.

Heh, considering how hard you're ragging on it, it seems you're not a big fan of Brave, huh. Honestly, I personally like the movie myself.

Any interest on continuing this branch @Gooose ?

@Gooose well you could always write it down on a note on who is swapped with who if you decide on a rotation.

Not a fan of how cruel this has become.

My thought was Shivani, but I wasn't sure if it would be simple one to one swaps, or if there would be some sort of rotation, like, Jon's in Shivani, Shivani's in Jon's dad, Jon's dad is in Lillian, Lillian is in Mikey, etc. Not sure if I'll continue this branch anytime soon, managing massive swaps is kind of hard to keep track of.

You, uh, you wrote the same paragraph ("Linda quickly realized that") twice, only the first time starts with "Seeing his reaction". 😅

So if im guessing correctly Mikey becomes the father or rather a father figure
and Jon the mother?

This was a fantatic chapter and was really happy there was so much to read here. Love how the wishes and the situation seems to be snowballing out of control. Cannot wait to see how Mikey tries to come up with a way to cover this up with Jon. Always very excited to see your posts!

This one seemed a lot smaller when writting and a lot bigger when posting.
Anyways should be the last one for a good while, most of the "recent" chapters have been written a few weeks ago and since then my life has been Factorio only, and with Space Age, it probably won't change for a while.

using stairs like that doesn't seems smart... what could happens, I think, is Mark ends up falling, hits her head, amnesia and/or shakes loose that girl's personality - or thinks she's her

Very fun. I love a good life-swap story!

Who did you have in mind that would swap with Jon @Gooose ?

@Endless Yeah, Gus is wearing a protective charm out of habit that has protected his memories somewhat from all the changes so far. That said, he didn't know Stephanie or Esme or Richard McMillan, so he really didn't notice any of those changes.

No firm idea, no. Just a handful of notions. I think Edgar would swap his role with someone that would have the knock on effect of Tiffany no longer being a cheerleader, to clear the way for Karyn discovering she's somehow the head cheerleader of the new reality with Sarah as her deputy, despite never being swapped directly. Other than that, nothing concrete.

Do you already have in mind who to swap them with or are you still thinking about it?

@Gooose with original do you mean when Esme was still Stephanie?

Ack! I have been summoned! Guess I'd better get to writing...

This was going somewhere interesting. Hope to see more.

Love these kind of stories, can’t wait to see what you come up with

Loving this!

Nothing like a good costume story, do you have ideas on the costumes yet!

Curse your sudden but inevitable disappearance!

Thanks! I don’t write a lot of stories but I do love a good costume story.

Always love a good costume story and this is wonderfully set-up! Really like how you're writing Karyn so far and looking forward to seeing what sort of trouble they get cornered into! Great work!

He more or less remembers the original reality, but also has an entire new set of memories for the new changing reality, and they're battling it out in his head. Athena and Zoe slept in their little protective circle, so won't have had their memories tampered by any wishes that happened the previous night, but will be vulnerable to any that get made once they leave it.

This series is great, I hope you keep adding to it

Nice I love this branch Gooose

True, I wonder if Jon and the rest of the family still perceives him as the younger brother or if that’s changed too

Well Mikey wish was “I wish I didn’t have to go to school”, so I don't think they percieve him as a kid, since that was kinda a specific wish, but not sure how they will percieve him.

So would everyone else perceive Mikey still as 10 year old kid but with an adult body or would they think Mikey is an adult with a childish mind?

I like where you’re taking this!

In any case, this is inspired by the site "TV Tropes" and its listing of tropes in entertainment. The Alpha Bitch is one such trope, as the character is an archetype of several stories set in high school. You see this sort of character in several movies and TV shows, usually as an antagonist.

I assure you, this is NOT written with some program. Every word was typed by a human being.

Interested to see more of this branch

Interesting. So he will join Athena and the group into figuring who is behind this. How much does he remember from the old reality?

More!

Thanks to Perri for help with some of the Korean translations. If I have still managed to get it wrong let me know and I will go back and fix it.

have played hs girl fantasy story enough w gpt to recognize this style

Children are also much more difficult to write just in general, honestly.

Actually, in other branches he is older.. in this one he is 6ish. In most branches I write him as 10... but in most branches Jon's mom is Linda, not Laura. We live on the multiverse I guess.

It doesn't seem to matter what branch I read Mikey is always established as being 9 or 10yo but authors always write him as being treated like is 5 or 6yo

I am loving your additions, and the changes are fantastic

Very interesting concept, wouldn't mind seeing more of this

This is a fun idea!

Congratulations! What a great achievement!