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Seeing Jon totally regressed, even for a few minutes, made me think that a scenario of an adult baby totally permanently regressed might be an interesting addition to this story. Maybe not with Jon nor Trevor, cause I think the essence of them both living in this sorta intermediary world of being a teenage boy and yet sometimes going full baby mode, I think this duality really suits their character development.

But, like, in the same way that Trevor is taking advantage of his new mother, maybe a new character might appear in this story. Maybe one of Jon's female school friends from his old life might appear in the kindergarten as "the new baby", but she – unlike Jon and Trevor – doesn't know anything is wrong, she acts like a little baby and truly believes it. I think it would be fun the idea of Jon "taking advantage" and being naughty with her, it's not fair that Trevor and Biff are the only ones here having some fun with their new lives. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Maybe, to make this more of a "Jon thing", the new baby might be the child of some of Biff's work friends, to give Jon and her some privacy, I don't know... some situation excluding Trevor, so that Jon and his new friend might have some fun alone all by themselves. Maybe some other mom at Biff's work brings her daughter to a child play date at Biff's house?

Anyway, again thank you very much for writing this story I'm loving to read it, I come here every day looking for new chapters. And honestly, at this point, I already consider it one of the best ABDL stories I read on the internet on all these years. I like it because most stories end up being heavily pornographic and neglect other elements of the story, but yours, there are obviously erotic elements, but you don't go overboard, and you know to measure hints of arousing scenes, without making it to sound "that dirty", if that makes any sense. Like when Trevor was having an erection while exploring his mom's body and you described how in the same scene a part of his mind was afraid of him being a bad baby and making his mommy angry.

This duality and fine-tuned between erotism and innocence I think you really nailed it.

Nice seeing Jon getting frustrated and being forced to communicate through the most basic words ever ◕‿◕ More scenes of frustration and Jon, getting embarrassed, please !

I have been reading a lot on this artificial intelligence art creation, images and videos and visual depictions – very interesting subject by the way, DALL-E, and deep learning and so on, and this scene you described of this teenage boy being breastfeed in the middle of the mall, I wish I am alive in the day that machines will be able to create a visual depiction of this scene you so beautifully described. A beautifully arousing moment.

Not only that but... the contrast you created, I mean Sharon was like "oh, I will cover my boobs because I don't want some horny perv erection-driven man, maybe even an erection-driven teenage boy staring at my breasts" and this is honestly brilliant to me. Like, she covered her boobs, probably indicating that she is more of a traditional inclined woman, as I understand some more modern women nowadays don't cover her breast while breastfeeding, but not Sharon.. meanwhile... well there is a "fucking perv erection-driven teenage boy" trapped in the life of her daughter who is not only staring at her boobs but actually touching and breastfeeding out of it while gets a violent erection.

And Sharon can't even imagine what she is doing, like she is inadvertently and by no fault of her own doing things that people in our real reality would only do in porn movies or in the privacy of their own bedroom and SHE IS DOING THOSE THINGS IN PUBLIC!

The shear absurdity of this new reality, the contrast between a scene that for anyone who isn't under this freakish spell would sound absurd and freak, for those people who are under such spell it is just..... normal, just a mommy nursing her baby, as innocent as it can get.

Well done, well done.

I'm enjoying seeing Jon sorta humiliation, it would be nice more scenarios of Biff forcing Jon to act as the baby that he is now

>In his old life Jon and Karyn had both been aware of a certain unspoken sexual tension between them. On Karyns side that was replaced with parental love for Jon but Jon still had enough self awareness to notice that he was sitting right next to Karyn's boobs

I find it amazing this sort of weird "love triangle" between two teenage boys trapped in the life of two females and an actual female, well done on exploring this idea.

Christmas came earlier :)

This storyline seems pretty interesting.

Glad you're back ◕‿◕

Also, i was wondering if Traver has a daddy. It would be quite fun the idea of seeing a teenage boy, who everbody treats like a little girl, being changed by a man. Hell, there is some many scenarios to explore!

Seems promising, write more, please :)

There an old story called "A Whole New World" by Bfboy, also about reality alteration and ABDL, where a group of young adults are teleported to an alternate reality where they are treated like babies, you and your readers might like reading it as well:

https://web.archive.org/web/20220618045724/https://paste.ee/r/WyIWL

I really like Jon being embarrassed, I think there is many scenarios work exploring, like he being changed naked in publicly and so on. Keep up the good work 👌

Please dude, write more of it!

I'm really falling in love with this story more and more with every new chapter. One thing I was wondering, I think the same way reality was bend to make Traver and John as lightweight as actual babies, maybe reality was also bend so that whenever Biff tried to use the bathroom, the pee just go downwards, like defining the law of gravity, I think it would be a funny concept.

Also, maybe you're not into it, you are the writer here, but I really think that in the same way Karen is stuck living the life of a woman, it would be somewhat funny to have some woman living the life of a little boy?

Although there isn't much difference in the life of a baby boy and a baby girl, so maybe it won't be interesting to simply put a woman in the kindergarten being treated as a baby boy...

So maybe, I don't know, showing a girly girl stuck in the life of a 10 years old boy or so (which obviously starts to differ from the life of a 10 years old girl and so on). I just found the concept of a girly teenage girl, who are into pretty stuff, having to be a "disgusting" little boy who plays in the mud and do other disgusting little boy things, absolutely HATING to not be able to wear her pretty dresses and doing ballet, and maybe even being bullied because of showing any behaviour that is not the expect from a teenage boy. The idea of one, instead of falling into their roles like all the previous characters, just feeling miserable and hopelessly, and straight out hating their new lives seems interesting, although somewhat dark, obviously.

Maybe a teenage girl switched lives with her young brother, but, like, she remembers what happened, but he doesn't, he just thinks he was always a young teenage girl. I find amazingly dark the idea of a teenage girl feeling envy of her young brother cause now he is living her life and doing ballet and wearing her pretty dresses anda yadda yadda, while she has to play stupid child games and stuff.

Also, another reality alteration that would be interesting, in the sense of preventing people from getting out of their roles is: in the same way that Trevor and John aren't able to tell others what is going on (people just hear nonsense baby noises), maybe, if we are talking about a person stuck in the life of anyone who isn't a baby, that person simply not being able to tell others, like whenever they tried... they simply can't form the words and speak out.

>Thus gentle touch from Sharon's hand was all it took to send Trevor over the edge and he exploded with an orgasm

I'm so glad I find this story! You are a LEGEND, dude! I love this, I don't know even know how to describe, like he is pervert but no matter what he does, people just see a baby girl. I wish I was a billionaire to make a movie out of this story 👌 Thank you so much. Those sort of stories, involving role swap/ABDL with reality alteration are somewhat to come by, so I just to thank you so much, cause you are very gifted author written an amazing story.

>Without even thinking he had reached out and grabbed one of her breasts and started to paw at it
>He stood up, now wearing only a small vest with ruffled edges on the straps, a pair of tights and a sagging diaper between his legs
>Trevor looked down at what he was wearing. The front of the night dress said "cutest little princess" but he couldn't read it. It was bright pink and the neckline and sleeve ends had frilly lace all around them.

Best story ever 👌

I miss the story so much :( If possible don't abandon it, it could go through so many paths, so many things could be explored :)

I wish I was Trevor :(

>His baby instincts kicked in and he subconsciously started to paw at the front of Biff's dress, instinctively wanting to feed from Biff's breasts
That is so cute! ◕‿◕

Glad you are back, this is story is so goddammit sweet. Personally I loved Trevor showing up, maybe you could do a chapter about him and his routine with his mom, like how it is when they are alone. Again, thank you very much, you are doing an amazing here.

I'm still here, I'm still reading your wonderful stories. Whenever you feel like, please come back.

Hell, a bunch of chapters. You are on fire! I will read them later, also, loved that detail of Trevor long being tied up in two pigtails •ᴗ•

I'm loving it more and more to see Jon decent into being nothing but a toddler, not only that the sheer boundless intimacy between him and Biff. Also, that the detail of Jon and Biff wearing matching dress was really icing on the cake. I also enjoyed the scene of Jon being putting into a pushchair. Keep up the good work. You are writing an ABDL classic. It reminds me a little bit of "Changing Reality" by "toddlergirl", if you never heard you might like or take some inspiration. Again, thank you very much. If I was a millionaire I would buy the movie rights and make a film of your story, cause it's THAT GOOD.

Absolutely adorable.

Hi again, I just read your new chapters, I like to read them before going to bed, they are a like a fine wine. I'm finding pretty interesting to see Jon regressing more and more (maybe you could write more scenes describing how he is getting used to wear toddler clothes, maybe now he even prefers to wear baby's clothes even when he is alone with Biff, maybe he find tights comfier now, also he doesn't even know how to tie his shoes anymore) . Also, it just interesting to see Biff and Karyn romance.

And lastly, I think it would be cool to add a new character on the story, maybe one of their high school female friends is now trapped in the life of a baby boy, something like, or maybe trapped in the life of a cat or a dog. I think this would be a nice add-on, since there wasn't any story of people trapped in the life of animals in this story yet. But unlike Karyn, this person knows she is trapped in the life in else's role, but they can't do anything about.

All in all, I'm anxious to see what is next.

"Jon stood before now wearing only a pink diaper but still crying. Biff easily picked him up and held him to his chest. Jon started to calm down, enjoying being comforted like this. He wrapped his arms around Biff's neck and nuzzled his face into Biff's chest. He could feel the soft, empty cups of Biff's bra through the light material of his dress"
Also, the last thing, I loved this scene so much, the sheer vulnerability and helplessness is pretty cute and somewhat arousing.

Hey! I'm so glad you are back!

I'm liking a lot. I think it's about time for Biff and Karyn meeting each other ◕‿◕ It will be pretty interesting when Biff realises that "his" ex husband is a girl that thinks she's a man.

Glad you are back :) Happy new year.

Keep the good work, continue writing •ᴗ•

I'm liking this story lot. Curious to how will Biff encounter with Karyn will play out.

I enjoyed all the pantyhose mentions XD

Man, I'm really liking this story so freaking bad. I just loved the thing, of Jon "father" being actually a girl. If I may, here are some suggestions (please, don't feel compel to add them though, they are just ideas, maybe some of them aren't even that good).

More scenes describing the character clothing, especially Jon? Maybe he complaining about wearing tights? XD
Until this moment Jon hasn't been, like, physically confronted with his utter helplessness, like, a scene showing him not wanting to do something and just being FORCED, like physically forced into doing it. Maybe he throwing a tantrum or something and being spanked or so?
Maybe describing Biff day at work as well? He struggling with his new found womanhood?
When you described Karyn it would have been interesting to have mentioned that her body was hairy, since she doesn't shave her legs since she believes she is a man. Maybe a scene of her shaving her face (despite the fact that she will never have a beard, obviously)?
Also, maybe in the same way Jon is being forced into being a little girl, maybe some character should be put into the role of a dog or cat? Although, I don't know what character would that be? Like his father, or mother, or, I don't know, maybe his little sister (although this last one might be a little controversial... although it would have been so interesting). Maybe Jon "father" could decide to go there and adopt a cat or dog and then Jon realises the pet is one of his family members. And, much like him, every time that person trapped in the role of an animal speaks no one can't understand anything, but Jon and Biff can. Maybe the person is like "I have been here on this dog kennel for the last 2 weeks, and no one could understand me, I was going crazy!!!"

You are on fire! I'm loving this stuff XD Keep up the nice work.

I find pretty creative the way how it was revealed that people simply couldn't understand what Jon was saying, like that thing of him grabbing the phone and recording he talking and then listening to it, I think it was a pretty creative well-thought-out idea and I wasn't expecting it. It would be interesting if, among the reality alterations – despite he having his adult body – had the strength of a little girl and any adult could, like, move him around, hold him and so on as if he was an actual toddler. Actually, I suspect that this might be already the case, although isn't that clearly stated you see people moving him around and changing his diapers, things that if he weight the same as a normal adult would make the whole process a little trick... anyway, just my two cents.

It would be nice a scene explaining how the physics work in this alternate reality, and, honestly, it would be just nice to see him realizing he had the strength of a little girl and seeing his utter total helplessness XD Like Biff holding him in his arms and so on.

When you finish this story you really should post it on Fictionmania so that more people could appreciate it! XD Also thank you very much for going in this direction. You have a writing style that I find very appealing and very hard to bump into, most of these stories end up being too much focused on sex and folks making out rather than telling the people's day to day life and how they deal and struggle with their new lives. It reminds me a little of Itsme from Fictionmania and the old (now deleted, sadly) stories from SandySeeker on writing.com.

Hi I created an account just to comment about your story I liked it a lot, especially that hey have to pretend to be mother and daughter. The only thing it put me a little off was the body modifications, I think the story would have been more interesting if there were no body modifications/shrinks only maybe mental ones, and so on. But, as they say, to each their own. It's your story.

Also, the scene Jon being changed by the mother of his little friend was EPIC. Also, taking into account how big this story is, you probably should post it on Fictionmania, it would definitely reach more people, since not everyone end up going down the story paths here on fictionbranches, sometimes it's hard to find these hidden jams.