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Hi Everybody, I have some idea for continuation for this cool branch, but probably won't be able to submit updates regularly. Sorry! Also sorry if my English is far from perfect, but doing my best here! Any remarks will be appreciated!
On a side note: I know that in parent story Karyn's surname is Johnson, but somehow the surname "Blacks" fits better for me. For now let's assume that her mother had kept her maiden name, and we will see if I will have to refer to Karyn by her surname later on...
Such a classic first quest. Reminded me of fighting rats in Candlekeep in original Baldurs Gate game ;)
I also highly enjoy this thread. Thank you for the hard work! I may be wrong, but I think there may be one inconsistency with wishes introduced in "Jon wishes to be a video game protagonist" episode: Jon made a wish "I wish my life would become more like the life of a protagonist from a video game I would enjoy!". If the game does not consider Emily to be the same person as Jon, then this wish might not have been granted. After all, Jon referred to his life in the wish. Of course you may have plans to explain that down the road. I have some suspicions, as it seems other wishes: about not modifying mind, or having way out, also have not worked. And even if not, and this is inconsistency, I believe that it does not impact the current story in any considerable way. Thanks!
Just wanted to let you know that I feel as if this branch has a potential to become a great story. It's very enjoyable so far! Thank you for your work!
Also, my english is far from perfect, but it seems that you might have missed a word in magic mirror description... If I'm right, could you post the corrected description in comment?
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