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This was a fun read! Great work :D
I loooove the oblivious changes!!! Keep it up! :D
I’m LOVING this idea so far! I think the way they are forced to speak yet keeping what they want to say above it is perfect! Along with that, how they control their body, yet can’t do anything out of character, it’s a very enjoyable concept ^^ Keep up the good work!
Thank you for the feedback!!!! I'll try to improve as I go, and plan on writing more!!!
Again a really fun and enjoyable chapter to read!
This branch is over 19 years old, and I’m the first comment >:3
@chicha Mainly the pacing. I think the changes are definitely going at a great pace! Also the length of the chapter!
A bit new to the website, but I’m in love with this branch! Please continue ^^!
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