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I don't plan on stopping, but there have been a lot of change in my life right now and I have less time to write. I'll try to get the next episode ready soon, but I can't promise anything.

Thank you. I replaced brittle by fragile, but I'm not sure if it's better.

A little of both. I still plan on continuing, but I don't think I'll be able to make a new chapter every day like I did before.

You're right. Thank you for pointing it out

Thank you ! :)

Thank you! I'm trying to do the best I can and I'm glad you like it! :)

I even asked on the discord for the plurial of AI before posting, but I guess it would be better to just make it singular whenever I can, thanks.

(Also, I think you placed the "the" in the wrong place in your first correction)

Thank you! I made the corrections you pointed out. I know I can make a lot of errors and I really apprectiate what you did.

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoy it.

For what you mentionned, it's not an inconsistancy, I don't know if I will do something with it in the future so... Maybe spoiler ahead? It's nothing major anyway.

Jon and Emily are the same person, but for the game, Emily is the main character of the game and it can't treat her like a player, but it needs to have a template for what Jon as a player would like, and so, they are treated like 2 different persons. (That can change later if I have a better idea, but that's how I see it right now)

Thank you. As for Karyn, I'm not sure where this will go. I tend to let the characters write themselves, so I don't know in advance how they will turn out from here, but I do intend to have her abuse her power at some point, even if she might regret it later.

Thanks! I'm glad you like it!

Thank you. I'm happy you like it!

I edited the chapter to change the description, thanks for pointing it out.

Thank you. I'm trying to make the characters more realistic than in most other branches, the slow burn is more a consequence of that than something I planned.
For the mind change, it's mostly a personal preference. It's not something I enjoy very much and I couldn't justifie the characters not using it unless it was explicitly forbidden. But as I said before, if you still want to add your own chapters, you're more than welcome to do so.

Thank you, I am glad you like it. I have to say I never considered someone would want to contribute to this story. I always thought of it as something I would write alone, and I planned a lot of things I want to do with it that I don't think would work if I had to adapt to what other people write.
You can still make another branch and I might add to it if I have some ideas, but I think I'll keep making my own story at the same time.

I wanted to get to it faster, but I found more and more things I needed to write before the transformations. It shouldn't be very long now.

I'll take B) please

C please

B) for me, please

I'll vote for B) please

Thank you ! I hope you will continue enjoying it. I enjoy reading your work too.