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Absolutely delightful build up to that end of chapter wish! Your characterization of Linda and her internal 'queen-ness' is so enjoyable to read and I can't wait to see how it manifests in future chapters as I'm loving her authoritative and stern posturing. And that's not even the best part! I really hope Jon enjoyed that because I'm pretty those are the last empty carbs he'll be eating for a while! Great great great update, can't wait for more!

This is an absolute blast and a really enjoyable ride so far! Can't wait to see where this goes and I love your personification of the stone. Seems like you have a really fun character to play with!

What a great addition! Love the way you wrote Jon 'perking' up before our eyes and doing a bit of social media training is a devilishly little fun idea that has me kicking myself for not thinking of something sooner! Amazing piece of writing, can't wait for more!

Absolutely did hear the music! What a great use of the concept, really love the song you wrote here and the dynamics between Jon and Karyn. Their back and forth was great. Plus I'm always a sucker for the 'shaming someone for cursing before they say the line', that got a good chuckle out of me. Really, really enjoyed this. Excited for the reprise and the big villain introduction number.

How the turn tables! Great chapter, loved to see that little dip into Jon's past after such a big change, a little hint of an emotional outburst, and Jon's realization that this step backwards may have just unlocked the ability to take some giant leaps forward. This is one of my favorite threads on the site and I'm so happy to see it return from its absence without missing a beat. Very excited to see what happens next!

Wow! That was a really fun chapter and I can't wait to see how Jon manages the dirtier details and all the extra responsibility of his swapped life. Also really loved the phrasing of 'the voice that came out of his lips was liquid,' what a great little phrase! Amazing work, can't wait for more!

I do love me some mandatory milf as well, but better genes is such a great environment and interesting re-imagining of Jon. I second the 'no wrong answer' here. Also, I guess I'd be more likely to contribute to milf since it's more episodic and I don't think I'd be stepping on the toes of a narrative, but chances are really slim that I'd add to either.

Great addition and can't wait to see where this goes! Always love to see how you toy and tinker with the existing relationships, Jon and Biff especially, and this mother-daughter experience looks to be quite eye opening for the both of them. Can't wait for the next installment!

I'm a big fan of the images and using the AI tools is pretty brilliant. Really unlocks a lot of possibilities when used right and can't wait to see what else you do with it. Great work!

Always excited to see another one of your chapters and amazing as always! Feel like the wishes come nicely and progress sensibly, every moment serves a purpose. And you do a good job of giving that teetering feeling, like these wishes or always just on the edge of going rapid fire and slipping totally out of control. So excited to see what's in store at the mechanic. Just for my own fan fiction, I'm hoping they have old yearbooks or high school photos in the waiting room, for as beautiful as Joan is, I'd love to see her reminisce and want the figure she had back when she was a teenager. Keep up the great writing!

I thought I could use the mis-phrasing as a way to show Zoe's mindset and how she feels about Jon's role in a given moment, showing that she's changing and finding it harder and harder to see her Jon in there.

Really love this thread! Great job! Can't wait to see what this all ads up to for Jon and how significant him waking up on his mom's side of the bed turns out to be. Amazing chapter!

Great chapter! Amazing imagery and deep dive into what should be a simple chore. Really showed how Joan isn't a hunter anymore, she's a gatherer and takes delight in it. It's a social event also with real stakes. Really fun read.

As for a suggestion, maybe Jon gets roped into hosting a book club or wine tasting night with the other mom's at the PTA night which is just an excuse to drink and gossip, complain about their kids, and swap stories of their sex life. Jon could wish he wouldn't be so bored about it and becomes enthralled and captivated by these lady's stories of passionate sex, possibly fantasizing about more of an exhibitionist streak with his husband. The wish possibly giving him vivid memories of his own bedroom escapades so he has something racy to share with everyone else?

I like what you've set up. Can't wait to see the extent of this whole family shake up!

Really like where this is going! I love the frantic pace and how Jen is immediately thrust into a 'mom' situation. Can't wait to see more episodes!

Great opening! Can't wait to see where it goes, bring on the synth, big hair, and neon colors!

What a ride! Look at Zoe making the mature decision, but still not thinking it through. Who knows how many more episodes Jon, er Sandra, might have over the next week.

Awesome addition! Always love a thicc, submissive Jon. Can't wait to see the next addition!

Hey I like your chapter too, I just had my own take in mind for it

Caaaarl!

I love this episode and hope to see more continuation on it. I'm wondering how this wish plays out, with some situations where Jon admires her mom more and wants to be like her? A change of scenery basically? She's a good mother and gives him the okay to take a little time off school to help adjust and give him some breathing room. Pretty mucha beach episode where Jon is free to embrace his inner woman without judgment instead of all the glares at school? And a chance for Jon and mom to make more ill advised wishes. Idk, it's great and really hope it continues.

Yeah, these are always fantastic adds and an amazing story. I hate trying to pitch ideas to an author who has AMAZING ideas and writing, but it could be fun to see more characters added to the story. Zoe as the babysitter, his mom supervising a sleepover, Mikey as the bully at preschool who's just a year older, Jon not caring about using his diaper in front of Biff to show he's becoming more complacent.

But wherever the story goes, I'm on board. Great job! It's a blast!

My spelling of John is all over the place, which is the canon one?

Hey, I might try and add to this soon if you guys don't mind! Love your work! My idea is to have Jon wish that his new husband, mother, Karyn, and Zoe know he really was Jon and not Sue, either from some imagined accident or intentionally. I think it adds to the humiliation if people know Jon isn't a horny milf, but can't help but act like one. And it gives him some directive as his family might try and help them out but judge him for being so lewd. I think this would establish the husband as the antagonist, who has the stone, who isn't willing to give up his amazing life and wonderfully, sexy wife. I think Karyn should be the friend who wants to help, mom be the type of person who secretly enjoys it since she has a new friend, and Zoe who just finds it hilarious after the full effects kick in. What do yall think?

This is a really fun arc, you're doing amazing writing it. Can't wait for the next segment

Can't wait to see where this goes, hope Candi gets to make an errant wish about the girls. Great job!