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not dead! just a lazy and banged up author. hopefully will be back to updating soon!

Well thought out, well written horny posting is what we're all here for after all. And this definitely fits the bill. Can't wait to see Karyn get the stone with this mindset!

If I had a musical budget, I'd probably ask for this to be the theme to my cool-ass Bond-esque intro-
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d1_7kpjHwdE

What do you mean what's my budget? What's your budget? How about I budget you?

Fun read and great bit of world building! Those Fatale sure seem like a carton of bad eggs and I feel like you're really going to end up giving a different meaning to flatfoot by the end. Let's hope our detectives can get to the bottom of this without having to cut out little ear holes in their fedoras or tail holes in their trench coats. And if they do... oh well. Forget it Jake, it's Chimeratown.

Trying to not let stories get stuck in editing hell anymore. Apologize for the mistakes. I'll probably revise it some here, but at least this way, I have to move forward. Hope y'all enjoy! I'll post some more ai slop on my da of this thought-line.

Haha, never forget. Also hope the implication isn't this chapter is Illinois poo water.

Top tier episode title

What an amazing love letter to so many contributors and amazing stories. Just in awe of it all. Really appreciate being included and thanks for taking such a fun snapshot of all us goofs writing on here. You're the best!

Preach! I know how it goes. But this was definitely worth waiting for! Love Linda's whole attitude and vibe and can't wait to see what goal the king is working towards. Awesome as always!

Thank you for the comment. Needed that!

The return! Love it already, great foundation, can't wait to see how this plays out!

I love the dynamics between Joanna, Zoe, and Karyn in these last chapters and the little twist with the aging there. Really appreciate the quick updates too and excited to see what's next!

Awesome branch. This is really hitting a stride and I'm here for all the paces. Great writing!

This was a fantatic chapter and was really happy there was so much to read here. Love how the wishes and the situation seems to be snowballing out of control. Cannot wait to see how Mikey tries to come up with a way to cover this up with Jon. Always very excited to see your posts!

Always love a good costume story and this is wonderfully set-up! Really like how you're writing Karyn so far and looking forward to seeing what sort of trouble they get cornered into! Great work!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jCxgUPFVFkA

Fantastic, fantastic episode! Love how you laid out Karyn and gave a lot more depth to her motivations. This ended on such a good cliffhanger too, can't wait to see what wishes come from Karyn's mishandling!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yq5t_TBZq1I
I know it's taking forever, it's getting there, I promise!

https://www.deviantart.com/marypear/art/Zoe-s-Mom-A-Cover-Shot-1090271141

Yeah, AI. Haven't been great at keeping them completely consistent but just using the bing AI generator. I might post some on my DA with the prompts if anyone is interested in tweaking or playing with them.

Choosing this for the song- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_bna2ni6h4c.
Hoping I can build a bit of momentum from here!

Hot damn this is a great chapter! I already love how everyone is talking to Jon! And his little verbal ticks are going to make these last few wishes really interesting. Really love the direction you're taking this in, please keep it up!

Going to try some more mixed media stuff, so going to include a song to go with the reading. The chef recommends https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Fwh7c6UT0U
Also trying out some AI art. I'll probably still use real life pics when necessary. The only thing I can promise is that I won't be consistent in the least bit.

This is just a fantastic showcase of mindset through dialogue. I love how you wrote Jon here and can hear this conversation so crystal clear. Everything is I did this, I broke up with him, but Biff cheated on you. I'm betting if Jon got to expand on that statement, he'd be sure to let Sarah know there was no chance of that happening if he was in the driver seat sooner.

Another fantastic piece of writing, you always nail the little details. Can't wait for the next add!

Absolutely delightful build up to that end of chapter wish! Your characterization of Linda and her internal 'queen-ness' is so enjoyable to read and I can't wait to see how it manifests in future chapters as I'm loving her authoritative and stern posturing. And that's not even the best part! I really hope Jon enjoyed that because I'm pretty those are the last empty carbs he'll be eating for a while! Great great great update, can't wait for more!

This is an absolute blast and a really enjoyable ride so far! Can't wait to see where this goes and I love your personification of the stone. Seems like you have a really fun character to play with!

What a great addition! Love the way you wrote Jon 'perking' up before our eyes and doing a bit of social media training is a devilishly little fun idea that has me kicking myself for not thinking of something sooner! Amazing piece of writing, can't wait for more!

Absolutely did hear the music! What a great use of the concept, really love the song you wrote here and the dynamics between Jon and Karyn. Their back and forth was great. Plus I'm always a sucker for the 'shaming someone for cursing before they say the line', that got a good chuckle out of me. Really, really enjoyed this. Excited for the reprise and the big villain introduction number.

How the turn tables! Great chapter, loved to see that little dip into Jon's past after such a big change, a little hint of an emotional outburst, and Jon's realization that this step backwards may have just unlocked the ability to take some giant leaps forward. This is one of my favorite threads on the site and I'm so happy to see it return from its absence without missing a beat. Very excited to see what happens next!

Wow! That was a really fun chapter and I can't wait to see how Jon manages the dirtier details and all the extra responsibility of his swapped life. Also really loved the phrasing of 'the voice that came out of his lips was liquid,' what a great little phrase! Amazing work, can't wait for more!

I do love me some mandatory milf as well, but better genes is such a great environment and interesting re-imagining of Jon. I second the 'no wrong answer' here. Also, I guess I'd be more likely to contribute to milf since it's more episodic and I don't think I'd be stepping on the toes of a narrative, but chances are really slim that I'd add to either.

Great addition and can't wait to see where this goes! Always love to see how you toy and tinker with the existing relationships, Jon and Biff especially, and this mother-daughter experience looks to be quite eye opening for the both of them. Can't wait for the next installment!

I'm a big fan of the images and using the AI tools is pretty brilliant. Really unlocks a lot of possibilities when used right and can't wait to see what else you do with it. Great work!

Always excited to see another one of your chapters and amazing as always! Feel like the wishes come nicely and progress sensibly, every moment serves a purpose. And you do a good job of giving that teetering feeling, like these wishes or always just on the edge of going rapid fire and slipping totally out of control. So excited to see what's in store at the mechanic. Just for my own fan fiction, I'm hoping they have old yearbooks or high school photos in the waiting room, for as beautiful as Joan is, I'd love to see her reminisce and want the figure she had back when she was a teenager. Keep up the great writing!

I thought I could use the mis-phrasing as a way to show Zoe's mindset and how she feels about Jon's role in a given moment, showing that she's changing and finding it harder and harder to see her Jon in there.

Really love this thread! Great job! Can't wait to see what this all ads up to for Jon and how significant him waking up on his mom's side of the bed turns out to be. Amazing chapter!

Great chapter! Amazing imagery and deep dive into what should be a simple chore. Really showed how Joan isn't a hunter anymore, she's a gatherer and takes delight in it. It's a social event also with real stakes. Really fun read.

As for a suggestion, maybe Jon gets roped into hosting a book club or wine tasting night with the other mom's at the PTA night which is just an excuse to drink and gossip, complain about their kids, and swap stories of their sex life. Jon could wish he wouldn't be so bored about it and becomes enthralled and captivated by these lady's stories of passionate sex, possibly fantasizing about more of an exhibitionist streak with his husband. The wish possibly giving him vivid memories of his own bedroom escapades so he has something racy to share with everyone else?

I like what you've set up. Can't wait to see the extent of this whole family shake up!

Really like where this is going! I love the frantic pace and how Jen is immediately thrust into a 'mom' situation. Can't wait to see more episodes!

Great opening! Can't wait to see where it goes, bring on the synth, big hair, and neon colors!

What a ride! Look at Zoe making the mature decision, but still not thinking it through. Who knows how many more episodes Jon, er Sandra, might have over the next week.

Awesome addition! Always love a thicc, submissive Jon. Can't wait to see the next addition!

Hey I like your chapter too, I just had my own take in mind for it

Caaaarl!

I love this episode and hope to see more continuation on it. I'm wondering how this wish plays out, with some situations where Jon admires her mom more and wants to be like her? A change of scenery basically? She's a good mother and gives him the okay to take a little time off school to help adjust and give him some breathing room. Pretty mucha beach episode where Jon is free to embrace his inner woman without judgment instead of all the glares at school? And a chance for Jon and mom to make more ill advised wishes. Idk, it's great and really hope it continues.

Yeah, these are always fantastic adds and an amazing story. I hate trying to pitch ideas to an author who has AMAZING ideas and writing, but it could be fun to see more characters added to the story. Zoe as the babysitter, his mom supervising a sleepover, Mikey as the bully at preschool who's just a year older, Jon not caring about using his diaper in front of Biff to show he's becoming more complacent.

But wherever the story goes, I'm on board. Great job! It's a blast!

My spelling of John is all over the place, which is the canon one?

Hey, I might try and add to this soon if you guys don't mind! Love your work! My idea is to have Jon wish that his new husband, mother, Karyn, and Zoe know he really was Jon and not Sue, either from some imagined accident or intentionally. I think it adds to the humiliation if people know Jon isn't a horny milf, but can't help but act like one. And it gives him some directive as his family might try and help them out but judge him for being so lewd. I think this would establish the husband as the antagonist, who has the stone, who isn't willing to give up his amazing life and wonderfully, sexy wife. I think Karyn should be the friend who wants to help, mom be the type of person who secretly enjoys it since she has a new friend, and Zoe who just finds it hilarious after the full effects kick in. What do yall think?

This is a really fun arc, you're doing amazing writing it. Can't wait for the next segment

Can't wait to see where this goes, hope Candi gets to make an errant wish about the girls. Great job!