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Really fucking good. Can't wait to read more.

I rewrote this because I felt like there was to much baggage with each option on the first branch of this. This is hopefully more balanced.

I might rewrite this to be much simpler. It's overblown; too much is happening in one branch. We'll see.

What's the wish?

Nice

Peak

Matisguy hasn't updated this in a while but I really liked what they did here. I dunno if I will continue this or they or someone else will but feel free to vote. I will probably write the immediate aftermath. I hope this is a worthy continuation.

Really enjoying this continuation.

Amusing

Interesting, curious what might happen next.

This is fun

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I should say two things. First, this is fictionbranches do whatever. 2. I meant the skirt felt a little unreasonable, like would she really wear something that short? and excuse me if I came off rude. I was actually coming to delete my comment because I changed my mind, but alas.

I enjoyed this but the only thing I will critique is don't get the assumption that she's a whore. I don't think Mikey would find the hot but perhaps approaching that line. She's not a parody of a woman just very hot. It at least that's how I've tried to portray it.

I mighta taken to much Adderall...

I edited it.

This is a very fun branch. Excited to see what's next.

some of the best writing on this website.

This is really good.

Best branch!

I've enjoyed this branch so far but still curious about Sarah reaction or Amber or whatever to the new hair and breasts. Are they driven horny or jealous or both nor neither.

I'm loving this branch

I wonder what would happen if Karyn goes over and Zoë is there? How does she react to Karyn's new endowments?

This is so much fun. Hope to see more of it!

I hope Karyn runs into Amber again.

Bodyswap would be hilarious yeah

This needs to be continued! Such a good branch.

This is fucking awesome. Queen Consort Karyn.

Wonder if Jon would go to the same school run into the other Jon, and Karyn etc.

Fun and sexy!

Fucking brilliant. Can't wait to see more.

Awesome!!!

Brilliant. Excited for more!

Really good. I love this branch and I hope to see more.

I really hope this story gets continued!

Literally, maybe they should have thought of that.

You said Jenni's hair was dirty brown when it's supposed to be dirty blonde.

Loved the chapter. Working on mine right now.

Maybe they have to flirt with neighbor kid(s) that come over to offer to mow the lawn.

I look forward to seeing Jeanne's reaction to the new King Consort and perhaps the whole threesome. Perhaps the secretary flirts with Consort/Linda in front of them. Does Linda give up the stone? Her alter/ego won't let her but it is also seeing how disastrous it has been.

Bi-disaster moment!

I can't wait to see the next chapter.

Exciting!

I'm very much liking this branch so far.

Uh oh

I wrote this a while ago and I haven't made any progress on it so I figured I would post as is.

Interesting

Thanks

I liked this a lot.

Damn he really just built her a whole life in no time.

Am happy Jon is a lesbian with a girlfriend. We need some not half bad lesbian shit.

Or starts swapping with someone else.

Seriously, FB has a discord. Well I will consider it.

How do you do the line breaks between the body and the id card stats?

Funniest anti-climax on this whole website. 10/10

"Magic". Actually I guess its more interesting. And also Athena kind of wished for it with the slip. So at least she would know. I think you could chalk it up as part of the parameters of the wish Athena was forced to make. We never see the full parameters because she only notices it when its 70% burned. Everyone is magically forced not to realize who the exchange student is so there is precedent for it being able to do that. Also its fictionbranches, do you honestly expect people to be consistent on here.