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Based Jon.

Jesus, that's brutal.

Damn, it's almost been 2 years, fuck me man

Ah well, understandable. Not really up to date on that stuff, but crossing my fingers for you. Education comes first

You okay dude? Just busy or...?

Man I hope we get a new chapter soon

Excellent once again! I really appreciate the detail of Karyn asking Jon for consent beforehand. You wouldn't read that elsewhere, but this is why that's easily my favourite story of this kind.

I can only wholeheartedly second DreamerDreaming's comment. We're lucky to have someone so talented write this type of rare stuff.

I mean, from his perspective is what I'm saying

Awesome chapter as always. Personally I would prefer to have Jon's perspective depicted like the first and second time he wished to be a pussy, it's what makes the whole thing really hot imo

It's not like you have to stick to one storyline, Fiction Branches gives you the option to split the story here, imo just continue writing and if you dislike the outcome, start another branch from here

The absolute cliffhanger, Jesus

If there's one thing more dangerous than the pull out game, it's being at peak arousal with a wishing stone in your hand. Really hope this doesn't go south for Jon. At least not permanently, heh

I love how you focus on everything beyond the initial idea of the branch just as well for the authentic experience. Even though this was a little too much in too little time/text imo, it still warms my heart to read :D Going through a rough patch right now and this story here is helping me smile even then, I mean it. Thank you :) Looking forward to more, as always. Can't wait to see how Jon's fantasies will play out now that Karyn is in the game as well!

Ah fair enough, thanks for letting us know. Looking forward to new stuff :)

Big shame that Jon is so indifferent/opposed about his new equipment

Good episode!

Yo are we gonna see a new chapter soon? The wait is KILLING me!

I came here to fap and stayed for the unique, very high quality portay of Karyn & Jon as well as writing in general. Absolutely can't wait for the next chapters.

Excellent episode, been waiting for this.

I wish this would be continued

I definitely do like it! And short chapters are alright. I'm actually surprised you already got 2 more going on in the same day I wrote my initial comment.

What I really love is that this isn't only about the fetish fiction itself, but also about what the stone can do and how Jon handles everything. I can see how he puts thought into his wishes and doesn't just stupidly make a wish that will change his life for no apparent reason, like it's the case in my other chapters. You have writing talent, so seeing a fiction written for one of my favourite fetishes is delightful. I can't wait to see where this is going, this has to genuinely be the best writing I've seen on this website in the branches I already read through. Keep it up!

Holy fuck, this is great. Please keep it up, I can't wait for more of this