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I like the idea for Karyn to be dominant towards Jon. It could be fun to mess with their relationship dynamics.
I'm using NovelAI to generate all the images I use.
On At the mall
Some rather big inadvertent changes for Jon. Not sure if i want him to become fully female eventually or not... If you have any ideas or suggestions for changes that could be made to Karyn, or Zoey, or even the world at large in the next chapter, I'd love to hear them!
On At the mall
I'm trying something new with this one, I'm making AI images to pair with changes in the story. I feel like images can enhance a story if used right. Let me know what you think, or any thing I could do differently.
Fantastic chapter, I'm loving the mental changes Jon is going though. Makes me wonder if by the end of the 48 hours he'll even want to go back to his old life
I'm glad you liked it :) By all means continue it, it is your storyline after all
On Shower TIme
Feel free to give suggestions
On Shower TIme
Are you going to continue this storyline, or would you mind if I added a few chapters to it?
If there was a wish for his family coming back, there would need to be a reason for Joan to be in their house. Maybe by making Joan the sister of one of Jon's parents, or she's a family friend, or even something more "spicy" like she's in a polygamous realtionship with Jon's parents. If Jon wants his MILF life to be pornographic, that definitely would fit in well.
On Time Alone
IMO these chapters are the perfect length and level of detail.
As for her schedule, she might have to do things like get her hair/nails done, go shopping for new clothes, go to the bank, perhaps theres an issue with her minivan so she has to take it to a shop, or she gets a call to go visit a friend. All relatively mundane things, but with the wishes made so far (and any new ones of course) could have potential for fun and sexy scenes.
(Also i hope my suggestions so far aren't making it feel like I'm telling you how to write your story, I just really enjoy it so far and am excited to see where it goes!)
This is such a hot story so far. Perhaps an inadvertent wish could be that when around people like the neighbor boys, Jon starts to act a little clumsy and ends up in sexy teasing situations (e.g. bending over a little too far so they can see down her blouse. Or accidentally spilling the lemonade down her cleavage)
Also maybe at some point Jon's family could come back home but a wish makes them believe Joan is supposed to be there instead of Jon.
On Time Alone
Loved the idea of Jon getting horny every time he saves money at the store. Having such a mundane thing be come exciting for him is great. Things like that could be a reward for him to make him more willing to slip into the MILF lifestyle. Like a wish that every time a task is completed he has an orgasm would be fun in both making him like what's happening and having to hide the orgasm if there's anybody else around
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