"You wanna go for a swim?" Jon asked.
"No. Let's get some tans first, then we'll swim. We've got plenty of time," Karyn replied.
While they tanned, Jon decided to pop out of the story to make a few more changes to the story, to make things more interesting. He was thinking of adding a tidal wave or a shark attack, like that movie Jaws.
But when he returned to the real world, he got a shock. He still looked like a blond beach bimbo. Wait a minute, I thought all the changes would stay in the story, he thought, but then he remembered when he came back from the test world, wet with rainwater. He shivered in the cooler air, while looking around at the people who were staring at him, as his bikini was very skimpy. He picked up the notebook, which had fallen to the ground, and ran back to his house.
