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22. Krystal tells all

21. Jon takes action

20. Krystal gets the stone.

19. And by find, I mean take...

18. No, read that contract careful

17. Back to the club!

16. Get Out of There Jon!

15. After a week...

14. Girls just wanna have fun!

13. Another dancer

12. The girls get new names

11. More than a week

10. Dancing for pleasure

9. Didn't hold on

8. Uh-oh. Thinking out loud means

7. Dance with me

6. Becareful what you say!

5. Becoming unstuck

4. He's carrying all right!

3. Boys will be boys

Louise is far nastier then Jon first thought.

on 2005-06-12 11:42:33

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Jon watched in horror was Krystal started to talk, "You say, I wish - then anything after that comes true." Krystal turned away from Jon, and went up to snuggle with Louise, her lips smiling as she did so.

"No!" Jon screamed, knowing that if he didn't do something quickly, then Louise would make his move. He rushed forward again, but this time Louise was ready.

"I wish Jon couldn't move until I command it." He said quick and there was a flash of light. Jon felt time seem to stop around him, and while he could still look at the two figures before him, he couldn't move a single inch. In fact, he couldn't feel the ground beanth him, and he realised with a fear that he was not suspended in mid-leap, both legs in the air, arms outreached, frozen like a statue.

Trying to call out for Krystal to fight, Jon felt despair come over him as he watched Louise run his hands over Krystal's large breasts and smiled to her. "First, I think I need to do something about the contracts. I wish that as of now, all my dancers are my submissive slaves and wish to be my slaves and do anything I ask until I personally release them. I wish that I no longer need contracts, and from now on all I have to do is ask a girl to 'dance for me' and they will become my submissive slaves like all my other slaves."

Again the rock glowed and there was another flash. When Jon's eyesight came back, he looked at Krystal who was standing there with her eyes glazed a moment, then she giggled, and knelt down before Louise. "Master, thank you so much for keeping me as your girl and dancer, I will make you so proud of me."

"Even if I don't have you as the headline?" Louise spoke, testing his new found powers.

"I just wish to be your slave, Master, to do anything you wish. Anything you ask." She purred back to him, and Jon felt sick as he watched his best friend, the woman he loved acting like some bimbo slave for this idiot.

But he was a idiot with the rock, and that made him a very dangerous idiot. And Jon felt even more sick as Louise looked up from Krystal towards Jon. "So, now you my dear boy. Krystal, I want you to remove Jon's clothing for me please."

Krystal was up and started removing the t-shirt and jeans that had appeared on Jon when he had changed back into a man. Removing his boxer-shorts she stepped away from the naked Jon. Jon couldn't believe that Karyn was doing this to him, but she didn't seem to be the girl he once knew, and he wasn't sure he wanted to know why she had this really kinky smile on her face.

"You going to make him a girl like use, Master?" She smiled, looking over to Louise.

"Maybe, I'm not sure how I want to do this yet. This young man has been a big thorn in my ass, so maybe I should make sure he suffers a while. If I make him like you there will be no, challenge, no, maybe I have something else in mind." The evil smirk on his lips made Jon fear the worse.

"I wish that Jon will need to follow my orders, and will have not choice but to do as I say. He will not be my slave however until I have sex with him when he is fully a biologically female."

Jon saw a flash of light as the stone seemed to accept that wish, and funnily enough Jon didn't feel any different. He just continued to hover there as he had before. The wish got a giggle out of Krystal however, until Louise raised his hand for quiet, and she instantly was quiet again.

"I wish that when Jon dances he slowly changes into a woman, but this is a slow process and will take at least ten full dances for him to be fully a girl and while he is changing physically, slowly his personality will change, and he will find himself becoming more submissive to me, and more desiring to submit to me."

Once again the rock blinked with bright light and Jon was blinded, and once again Jon didn't feel anything different, but could see that Louise was a lot more a vindictive person, and nastier then he originally pinned the man to be.

"I also wish that Jon will not be able to harm me, or any of my other slaves, and that he can not touch the rock without me saying he can."

Louise once again breathed, and the rock flashed again, and this time Jon felt again no different. He was starting to wonder if no of this was in fact working, but he was about to find out as Louise stood to the side and smiled, "Jon, you can move again now."

Jon felt his momentum of his original lung thrust him forward and he past Louise and hit the desk. But he managed to catch his footing and turned quickly with a fist in a swing and suddenly stopped. He tried to hit Louise again, but couldn't, every time he did it was like his body just stopped him. "Fuck you!" He screamed, and tried to uppercut the man, again unable to do so.

Louise just laughed and slapped Jon around the face, "I order you to NEVER talk to me like that again!" He growled, as Jon rubbed his burning cheek.

Jon went to tell the man to fuck off, but his voice caught as he did and he gasped Then he realised he couldn't because Louise had just told him not do to it, and Jon had to do as he was told. "Look, please, Louise just let me go, I won't be a problem for you." Jon stuttered realising very quickly that the only way to get out of this was to probably beg his way out.

Louise smiled and nodded, "Oh yes my dear boy, you won't be causing me any trouble, you see I order you to never try and escape. I'm not going to force you to like being here, but you will not try and escape this place, do you understand?"

Jon closed his eyes, and all his plans of escaping seemed to be pointless suddenly, it was like they were still here, but he just felt they wouldn't work, they would all fail, he couldn't escape . . . . "Yes." He muttered.

"Yes what?" Louise smiled, "You are not my slave yet Jon, but I expect you to show respect, or I can force you to."

Jon swallowed, "Yes . . . Sir."

Louise nodded, "Good, and just so you know." He held the rock out to Jon.

Jon instantly reached out for the rock, and just as trying to hit Louise had been, his body just wouldn't allow him to touch the rock. He closed his eyes and moaned, whispering to himself, "Damn."

"Yes, Jon, you are damned. Now, I want you to go get ready for the next dance. Krystal can you please go make Jon as pretty as he can be . . . for a man."

Jon tried to stop himself moving, but his body and even a part of his mind had no choice but to follow behind Krystal, before Louise said, "Stop. Before you go, Jon, I just thought of something. I just realised that many of my customers won't like a man dancing on the pole, so, I wish that until Jon is fully biologically female, that all my patrons are just excited seeing Jon dancing up on the stage still a man, as they are seeing the girls dancing up there."

Jon sighed and hung his head, Louise was a evil bastard, and he had to figure out a way to escape the man's control, even if it wasn't to escape the building, Jon knew he had to defeat this man somehow.




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