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36. The Rest of the Trip

35. So Smooth...

34. To The Mall

33. Morning Surprise

32. The Game

31. Betrayal!

30. Cheer Practice

29. Hot Potato Wish

28. Getting the Stone?

27. Decisions Decisions

26. Sarah's first day.

25. Turnabout's Fair Play

24. Meanwhile at Sarah's

23. Karen's not Happy

22. Back to Jon

21. A New Friend, a New Savior?

20. How could this happen?

19. Let's get these things off!

18. 12 hours Later...

17. Same day, different perspectiv

Brace Face: The Rest of the Mall Trip

avatar on 2017-02-18 23:00:19
Episode last modified by Perri on 2018-04-16 20:12:35

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((I may come back and write more content here, but right now my focus is really on concluding the story I intended to write, so I will be brief and use more exposition than I'd prefer otherwise.))

Karen was waiting outside for Jon and with a wink slipped in immediately after him. She was taken away to have her hair shampooed, then to be doted over by another lady who seemed entirely enthralled with her own gossip. By the end of it all Jon found herself gazing into a mirror to meet the eyes of a rather fetching, if plump, girl. Her hair was no longer frizzy, but rather lightly twisted and full bodied. Where it previously lacked any luster, now it practically shined, and of course her brows now gave her that dramatic gaze. She scoffed a little. No matter how hard she tries to change it, her face always looked a bit surprised.

The shopping trip that followed wasn't nearly so bad as Jon feared. The girls seemed to respect her more conservative preference, but still prompted her to get more fashionable clothing. Karen was always encouraging, but it was Montanna who took the lead role this time. She always seemed to know just what to get, and before long Jon was tripping over the bags of clothes and accessories. Karen, to Jon's surprise, still preferred darker, and more alluring clothing. "The Wish," She began, "Affected more than my style... I'm still me. I just really like these clothes now..." Her voice drifted off as she inspected a lacy number. "I feel so sexy, so powerful wearing this sort of stuff."

Jon could only smile. "As long as you're happy!" She stated optimistically.

The trip ended with frozen yogurt. Karen and Montanna had hit it off extremely well, which surprised Jon. Not only were they quite different from the original reality, but they were even more different in this newly wished reality. It seemed however that Monatanna had a bit of a misfit in her that prevented her from shining back when Sarah was on top. That gone, she could more confidently let her freak flag fly, and Karen loved it.

Jon returned to the beaming smile of her mom, who forced her to at least show off the outfits, even if she didn't get changed. A little while later, her mom turned the expander, she slipped in the mouth piece, and enjoyed a restful night. The day really hadn't been as bad as she feared...




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