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I added a leg to one of your stories

on 2017-06-22 14:07:15

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I wasn't sure the best way to attack them. Despite their simplicity and open-endedness, they were strangely limiting in a way. Like for instance with the one where Jon swapped with Sarah, I kind of wanted to twist that into Karyn trying to stop Jon from swapping back because to her, Sarah was a guy and a guy she hated and didn't want her best friend to look like a person that she hated, and would try to talk Jon into staying that way, or wishing it. But you had to go and have her remember things as they were before after having it pointed out to her, and I didn't see a way to make it quite work. The one where he switches bodies with the dog except the head, and then switches back but still has the dog head, that's also kind of limiting because the only way out of it I see is that he wishes for his head to be back and for the "interesting" thing to be something else, and that's just boring, that defeats the purpose of the whole digression, and it's just too ridiculous an end state for it to be believable that he would come to want to stay that way.




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