Having started the Family Swap branch almost eight years ago, I was thrilled to see you revive it and take it in a new direction I never expected. This isn't the first time Sarah became Jon's relative -- The Guest made her his mother in this branch -- but that Sarah and this one aren't quite the same. That earlier Sarah seemed warm with an edge. This one strikes me as the reverse: mostly edge with a bit of warmth.
I also thank The Guest for the encouragement to write again. I don't think I've written a thing anywhere since last year. Feels great to be back, to be active instead of merely passive.
A glitch I just noticed: I referred to a hallway in my most recent addition, and to lockers in my second addition (I envisioned Jon not going far to run into Jennifer after Melissa swapped by her locker). But it seems that Nobody14 intended Sarah to be in a parking lot. Maybe the hallway and lockers are at the edge of a building adjacent to that parking lot.
A question about the rules of the Family Swap wish: It seems that some swaps involve teleportation: e.g., Sarah materializing where Linda was and the twins Sarah and Jennifer being replaced by Linda and Zoe. But on the other hand, Melissa mutates on the spot into a blonde girl with glasses. What determines whether females are teleported or not?
