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13. Sleep Tight Sweet Princess

12. Like Oh... My... GOD!

11. Valley Girl Paradox

10. Oh Calm Down

9. Jen

8. Man...

7. Revenge is a dish best served.

6. Too Late

5. Does Substance abuse cover Wis

4. Adventure

3. Is there hope?

2. The Origin of the Rock.

1. You Are What You Wish

Karyn DOES Care.

on 2008-11-11 04:47:20

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"Alright Karyn, calm down. Loki said that this would all wear off when we landed. So I will have to make sure that the time we spend flying seems as short as possible for Jon." Karyn said to herself.

Karyn took a deep breath in and let it out. She regained her composure and walked out of the bathroom.

Jen looked back at Karyn and smiled a big grin. Jen had undone the French Braid while Karyn was in the bathroom. Her hair was now hanging down to just below her shoulders.

"You You look good with your hair down." Karyn said to Jen.

"Thanks!" Jen said smiling.

"I wish that Jen wouldn't hear this wish or the next wish I make." Karyn said. The stone grew warm quickly and then returned to normal.

Karyn sat down in the booth with Jen.

Jen looked back at the TV. The news was on.

"I know I know but like I couldn't find anything on." Jen said to Karyn.

Jen leaned back in the booth and watched the TV.

Karyn stared at Jen. She could still see her friend was in there somewhere. Karyn knew that Jon always liked to keep up on the latest news and suspected that a "Valley Girl" would have no interest in the news.

"I wish that Jen would sleep until we landed." Karyn said to herself. The stone glowed warm and Jen yawned.

"You know Karyn. You like totally the greatest friend a girl could have." Jen said as her eyes grew heavy.

"And you a great friend too Jen." Karyn said hesitating on the Jen part.

"I'm like pretty tired." Jen said to Karyn yawning again.

"Ya? Let me get you a pillow." Karyn said.

"I wish that Jen had a comfortable pillow." Karyn said.

The stone again grew warm and Karyn shielded her eyes from the light and Jen, too tired to cover her eyes lazily closed them. She opened them back up barely when the light passed. A pillow was lying on the table.

"I think I'll just get a little cat nap in on our way there." Jen said closing her eyes. She lay her head on the pillow and drifted off to sleep.

Karyn sat there next to her friend. She stared at Jen and thought about how peaceful she looked.

Even though Jon was Jen Karyn still saw her friend in this girl. Karyn had always wanted to have a closer more intimate relationship with Jon but never wanted to ruin what they had together. So, instead of ruining their friendship Karyn always kept the two of them friends. If only Karyn knew that Jon felt the exact same way about Karyn. The two were destined for each other but they may never realize it.

Karyn then worked the sleepy Jen out of the booth. She went to pick her up and bring her to the bed in the back room of the jet and realized that Jen was fairly light. She couldn't be over 110 pounds and even 110 would be pushing it. Luckily Karyn played Volleyball at her school so she had some decent strength in her arms which made lifting Jen easy. Karyn carried her friend to the back of the jet and laid her down on one side of the bed. Karyn then opened up the other side of the bed and lifted Jen again. She then took of her pink tennis shoes and pulled the covers over her.

"Sleep tight Jon." Karyn said in a whisper. Karyn kissed Jen on the forehead and left the room.

Karyn then shut the door and left Jen to sleep peacefully in the bed. Karyn went into the booth that her and Jen had been sitting in previously. She then took the pillow and placed it up against the wall. Karyn laid her head into the pillow and drifted off to sleep.

(Hey guys, I'm sorry no real action happened in this one. Feel free to shoot this down with low marks . I will understand. I wanted this one to be more serious and have a different mood to it. I have come to realize you guys like transformations and abuse of the rock but I ask you to look at this story, not from your preferences, but instead out of how the story is executed. Look at the character development. Look at key elements. Rate it based on THAT not on how it lacked a quick joke or some abuse of the rock. If you rate it on that and STILL feel that it deserves a low mark then I will understand. Also, please send me an email. I really wish to hear from other on their opinions of my work. I wish to know how you feel I did. Please, it would mean more than you could imagine just to see that somebody cares more than just a quick reading to actually take the time to drop me a quick 1 or 2 line sentence on your approval or constructive criticism. My email again is the_mosque@yahoo.com.
Thank You,
The Mosque.)




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