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Girl World: suggestions

avatar on 2016-01-24 16:39:39

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I've added a chapter which I hope will work towards Jon and Kelli meeting each other. In it they will share an apartment together http://fb.countd.eu/cgi-bin/fbstorypage.pl?page=160124163028sonnyjimjr3&path;=nospamstory

Here are my suggestions for anyone who writes the meeting before I do, the way I pictured it is that Kelli would meet Jon in the apartment with Jon just enetering. I thought that it would be good if Jon was either; dressed ready to head out to a nightclub or bar, or he was about to go and get changed to go out. Either way he invites Kelli to join him and when Kelli sees Jon all dressed up he feels a sense of jealousy and wishes that he could look like Jon.

The other idea is that Jon comes home and is dressed in a leather outfit like a dominatrix and Kelli feels a bit of jealously but also fear when he sees Jon.

Anyway these are my ideas, Of course I can add them myself but I was hoping that they meet a little later in story so if anyone waants this to happen earlier you can use my ideas if you would like, but you can of course add your own.




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