Having thought about it, I have gone back and added a new chapter which I hope is more to your liking http://fb.countd.eu/cgi-bin/fbstorypage.pl?page=160122212309sonnyjimjr3&path;=nospamstory I have done a bit where Jon changes Kelli's personality a bit hopefully making him more feminine in his behaviour. You can always comeback and change Kelli's personality a bit more or even his body. Again I hope this is more in line with what you had planned.
Editting Kelli's Personality
on Return to Parent Episode
Jump to child episodes
Jump to comments