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13. Studying the Map

12. Sarah Creates a Replica of Jer

11. Whatever They Create is Perman

10. Jeremy Dreams Up a Couple of B

9. Thought Becomes Reality

8. Sarah Wants to Know Where They

7. Swimming Pool

6. Something Rises Out of the Des

5. They Hear Something

4. Alien Desert

3. Portal

2. And now for something complete

1. You Are What You Wish

PORTAL: Studying the Map

avatar on 2009-06-29 21:42:38

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"Okay, that's enough of that," Jeremy said, pushing Sarah and his replica apart. "Do it any longer and I think I might get sick," he whispered to himself.

Sarah blushed and smiled, looking at Jeremy's replica, who was now throwing kisses to her. This version of Jeremy seemed to be very romantic, but only towards Sarah.

"We need to focus here," Jeremy said, breaking Sarah's gaze.

"Huh?" she asked, just now noticing that Jeremy had the map she had "wished up".

Jeremy laid out the map next to the pool. Most of the map was blank and labeled DESERT. In the very center, though, was a blue rectangle labeled THE POOL.

"That's it?" Lizzy asked, leaning over the map as well. "It's just one big desert?"

"That's what it looks like," Jeremy said. "Hmm, I wonder."

"Wonder what?" Lizzy asked.

Jeremy concentrated and said "It would be really nice if there was a hotel with this pool. Then we could cool off and maybe get some rest."

Suddenly, the ground began to shake, much like it had when the pool appeared. But this time, it was much more violent, causing waves to form in the swimming pool. Seth's two new friends jumped out of the pool and started screaming. And shortly after, Seth joined them. Then a giant sinkhole appeared not too far from the pool. But its existence was short, because a few seconds later, a three-floor hotel popped up from underneath the desert. Half the swimming pool was covered in its shadow.

"Holy crap, man!" Seth yelled. "Tell us before you do something like that." He turned and tried to comfort the two bimbos.

"Sorry," Jeremy said. Then he turned back towards the map. It was just as he thought.

Now, in the center of the map, there were two things listed. The blue rectangle was still there, but now it was joined by a brown rectangle, this one labeled THE HOTEL. Apparently, anything they create (that's grounded) will appear on the map.

Jeremy looked up from the map and saw that Seth and his two girlfriends were back in the pool, laughing as if nothing had happened, and Sarah and his replica were off to his right, kissing again. But where did Lizzy go?




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