Please see https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/21205. Jon’s last name was already established to be Gibson, not Madison in a chapter branch that was a direct ancestor of your parts. Refer to the earlier chapter “2. Jon’s (perverted) fantasies”. You also call him Jon Madison in the next chapter after that one. I was adding to this story and would like there to be no gross inconsistencies so perhaps you would edit your parts since it doesn’t actually matter to the story whether his name is Gibson or Madison but it is just ugly to call him one and then call him the other. Even though this was written 2 decades ago, you have recent chapters and are listed as a moderator so maybe you will see this. Is there a private messaging system here? I can’t find it if there is.