As a reader that has been here for years but not really posted much, I have to agree that the pictures from mranderson have gotten a little out of control.
You are not adding anything to the stories by just posting the pictures with little or no descriptions. If the pictures ever break and they will eventually break, all we get is a broken picture and almost no words describing what is happening.
As for grammar while that does take time to learn, please try to keep the mistakes to a minimum. Invest in a grammar check program, Microsoft Word does some simple grammar checks, it will help with the obvious ones. Just write what you are going to post in Word then copy paste it in when the grammar and spell check is done and corrected.
Since this is story writing now academic writing. Just see how your story flows. You can get away with a little bad grammar and some run on sentences, but if it does not flow it will feel broken.
