Honestly, much of what you write is too extreme for me (I really don't like transformations that leave people crippled or with parts in the wrong places), but that's a personal preference. How about adding something to this. It's set up so you can do anything without having a villain who caused it, and maybe if you add things other people will too.
http://fb.countd.eu/cgi-bin/fbstorypage.pl?page=111218152955Hikaru&path;=nospamstory
