It's a great chapter, I myself 10d it and it's perfectly workable. It's not hard to fathom Melanie being able to "pick up" some details on the nuts somehow and, in point of fact, that minor mistake you made can actually be used as a platform for something interesting... I have an idea or two. ;)
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