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47. Sadly, I do...and it isn't goo

46. New episode

45. Yes

44. Oh, I know

43. I suspected

42. Hehe

41. I'm relieved

40. Hmm...

39. well..

38. But anyways

37. Well

36. oh and.

35. To be sure

34. plan

33. Also

32. Okay...

31. Lemons into lemonaid

30. Well

29. Sorry

28. Also

Sadly, I do...and it isn't good...

on 2012-04-22 23:20:25

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Errr, about your new episode, I have a bit of a complaint.

Normally, I like the direction of the story that you are 'painting', you come up with some interesting ideas. However, after looking at that episode...I'm sorry, but I am afraid that I have just facepalm'ed at it. I don't mind the characters interaction, the idea of Lucas healing the physical scars is a nice idea, and I got a slight laugh at the whole Lucas's hidden rage part...but, you're messing with a natural-flowing character development, with the whole healing internal scars, and I need you to stop. That was a very taboo move on your part, and most likely will ended up as a same result with using any other character in the story.

And, I am to presume that this happen after school, because it wasn't clear on that. If so, that mean that I'm doing a bit of a flashback, which isn't the first time I did something like that. I don't mind doing that, so don't worry about that.

...Speaking of which, I really need to get back to work and released that bloody episode of mind. If this thing with my movitation kept being a problem with me...I don't really know what I will do, but I may have to do something that I'm uncomfortable with, but a necessary one.




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