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Present Tense

on 2012-02-08 00:21:50

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That chapter was badly inconsistent between present and past tense (and writing in present tense at all is weird).

Also, the previous chapter left with it being an open question as to who gets the stone and so did this one, so it felt that nothing happened.




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