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Oh Noes! Whatever could have happened to dear sweet little Zoe?!!

Yeah no definitely still has a way to go. We'll see how many more chapters her transformation lasts

fun branch

I think this might be my favourite shirts one so far, please continue this story. Curious as to when or if Gwen will remember her old life?

Can never get enough of Jon going goth-girl. May continue on this line soonish.

I love how this branch is going! Keep up the good work!

Interesting prompt. I'm curious to see how this turns out!

Shame this stopped, a very interesting premise

Glad this storyline got revisited!

Everyone has their own style and it may take some time to find one you truly enjoy. I for one have been enjoying it quite a bit so I have no complaints. A mix of well written verse and visual imagery makes for a happy me!

Thank you! I'm still a little unhappy about my writing style, it just does not feel ... organic(?) to me. It feels like a mix of passive scientific paper and casual talking style mixed together, but hey - I just started :-)

And because I hit submit too quick, you are doing a great job of breathing life into old storylines. I really love that idea and perhaps it will convince me to finally make an addition. Wish there was an easier way to collaborate on here.

GREAT addition! Really fun continuation!

Loving this! it's hilarious and sweet at the same time :)

Thank you for the kind words! I was lurking for many years and now I'm trying to give something back. My goal is to add chapters on my favourite but aborted branches and (hopefully) that sparks further additions.

I honestly thought this was a great addition! Photo chapters are certainly my favorite and I would love to see more of thos.

The English itself was great, better then most native writers!

This storyline is shaping up to be crazier than a bucket full of soapy frogs - I love it!

Maybe add hits/views/upvotes counts to the author profile page chapter listing so that you can see the hit count without incrementing it and see how your chapters are received without looking at all of them.

Nitpick on the first paragraph, "But this time he’d gone through with it, for sure!" Should probably read "But this time he’d have gone through with it, for sure!"

Thank you ! I hope you will continue enjoying it. I enjoy reading your work too.

Almost forgot to also mention how much I love stories that involve party games :D

X3 Excited to have hit the idea on the head for sure. It's one of my favorites, but yeah going by your note you've built up quite the interesting premise. With the selection of girls you've gathered, the number of ways this can go for Jon is looking to be fun. Still loving that Tiffany story line from the sisters story, by the looks of things she is a good bit more of a party slut in this one so she has my vote for a Jon partner. Also curious what you mean by the twinning spreading, do more girls merge with Jon and look like him and the first girl, does the group amalgamate between the different girls, or does he spread it so the second girl twins with a third girl making hivemind pairs with Jon being the originator of this "infection"? Several different avenues my mind went when I read that comment.

This is great fun,really like the subtle memory shifts

Pretty much what Ziggu said, although in this story I'm going for a slightly more subdued, big sis teases younger sis ecchi sort of thing for Karyn (at least for now). And yeah, the girl is Akeno from Highschool DxD.

“Ara Ara” is a nonsense phrase used in a lot of anime, especially hentai, to basically mean “I’m going to molest you”.

Could someone explain the reference? I don't quite recognise it

Is that Akeno? Nice!

Sounds interesting, let's see if you can deliver on the potential of the premise :)

Always refreshing to start from the beginning in another character's POV! Keep it up!

This is really good and should be continued.

It'll be explained in the next chapter, I just wanted to keep it a mystery for a bit. I kind of like the stories where unexplained changes happen so I wanted to do something similar (but there is a reason!)

Why does becoming a Tsundere make Karyn Jon's sister? I'm not seeing the connection between those...

Aww thanks cork!

I love the juxtaposition in those last two lines. It's a small thing, but it's just a very well put-together set of sentences.

keep up the good work, like most of your branches, especially the monster world Branch

I decided that if there are moments where Jon or someone is thinking about changing their shirt, to make that a natural stopping point in case someone wants to hop on, add a new shirt for more chaos, or just keep everything unchanged. I have my own ideas still for now, though.

Interesting, please continue

It's a shame this wasn't continued, it was shaping up to be really interesting

Oooh, hoping for some fun stuff with the twins shirt. No idea what Code intends but I know I am equally torn on hoping it ends up hivemind style, or clone style. I think I always end up leaning more hivemind myself though.

agreed

This should be fun, a bit different to being a bimbo or a slut at least

Love the reactions to each individual shirt!

I'm enjoying this, I hope you continue

Love the shirts story lines a ton! I hope these catch on more!!!

hope to see the story continue

Why are story text fields so narrow now? It's like we're back in the 90s when monitor resolutions were in the 800x600 to 1024x768 range.

An option to allow the text to occupy the width of the monitor would be really appreciated.

This is fun, hope you continue it

I was tempted to give Tiffany a new daughter to match the age progression, another newcomer like the manifestation of the school in Lacy, but I couldn’t figure out how to do it. And we needed the Loli Sister (as horrible as it is), so Mikey got the hit because Zoe’s previously accepted personality just didn’t work. I decided to also change the school to be a Japanese high school in appearance and possibly function, otherwise the wish wouldn’t be complete. I’m tempted to have Jon get a new male friend who is a bit more genre savvy to fit the “4th wall Aware comedy sidekick” character, but I’m not sure I could have him do anything besides quote Mother’s Basement “How to survive a Harem Anime” video.

So, including the ones from the previous page, we have:

1. Karyn: Childhood Friend
2. Sarah: Most Popular Girl in School
3. Athena: The Tsundere Witch
4. Mikey (now Michelle): The Little Sister (Why is that a thing?!)
5. Mike Matthews (New name possible?): The Athlete
6. Tiffany: The Hot Teacher
7. Nadine: The Stalker
8. Leonard (Now Leo): The Geek Girl
9. Yuki: The Maid/Foreign Exchange Student
10. Newcomer Lacy Penn: The Ghost Girl

Alright then, we have ourselves a Harem.

interesting.