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The absolute cliffhanger, Jesus

If there's one thing more dangerous than the pull out game, it's being at peak arousal with a wishing stone in your hand. Really hope this doesn't go south for Jon. At least not permanently, heh

Also,

"Also, being Goth isn't genetic, it's cosmetic so Zoe would have been disappointed anyway, unless she could use the Psychic bond to influence the Zoefied Jon to trying out the Goth look. I am enjoying your contributions though, keep 'em coming, it encourages me to write more knowing how much of a kick folks get out of this."

I was thinking about this but forgot to address it when I first replied.

I feel it is a question of Nature vs. Nurture but in this case we have both. John's nature would have changed to match Zoe's; maybe not 100% but probably 80%+. Genetics influences everything. With Zoe manipulating him along the proper lines I don't doubt he would become a Goth Girl. If he'd contracted it as an adult with a more firmly developed identity the odds would start swinging against Zoe but as a teenager going through massive changes I don't see much resistance being mounted.

Aiko is still around, at least in my version of events. If she weren't I'd be writing myself into a corner pretty hard given the stone's range limitation.

Also, thanks for the compliment. =-)

Also, being Goth isn't genetic, it's cosmetic so Zoe would have been disappointed anyway, unless she could use the Psychic bond to influence the Zoefied Jon to trying out the Goth look. I am enjoying your contributions though, keep 'em coming, it encourages me to write more knowing how much of a kick folks get out of this.

Ah Gawd, that made me laugh out loud! Poor Zoe. Is Aiko still around or has she left for Japan? This is going to cause psychological stress for them both until they can be together

lol this is cascading wonderfully out of control.

Hahaha, poor John, doomed by triple whammy.

Thanks for your kind words. It goes without saying but I'll say it anyway, anyone is welcome to continue this. I won't be upset if someone has one idea to continue it and I have another. I've seen that sort of thing even though we can tack new branches on wherever.

A fine addition, I liked the comedy moment of Karyn and Zoe arguing over who got to Imprint Jon, I look forward to seeing how Jon deals with is need to be with his new Twin

ooh, very nice.

I'm glad you like my take on the branch. There's a lot of things I've thought about doing with it that I wanted Karyn in on, and some other things i don't. Thanks for the positivity, I'll do my best to update weekly.

Loving this story line

I love how you focus on everything beyond the initial idea of the branch just as well for the authentic experience. Even though this was a little too much in too little time/text imo, it still warms my heart to read :D Going through a rough patch right now and this story here is helping me smile even then, I mean it. Thank you :) Looking forward to more, as always. Can't wait to see how Jon's fantasies will play out now that Karyn is in the game as well!

yeah, i have no idea how to write this stuff, lol

That will be changed soon ;3

Ah fair enough, thanks for letting us know. Looking forward to new stuff :)

Nice reference to some of my Christmas stories with the Santa thing.

Sorry, uni is back in my life with a vengeance. I've got writing time this weekend though!

I'm excited to see someone continuing Tobias' multibreast story line. Good luck with this man, hope you will continue.

Big shame that Jon is so indifferent/opposed about his new equipment

Good episode!

I don't know about eight heads, but two heads and six arms would probably do just fine. :D

Just do whatever you like. The whole point of having a branching storyline is that you can branch a story, from any point, in any direction you like. You won't get in another author's way because they can always just ignore you and keep extending their latest story.

:D

And Zoe is.... [rolls dice]

also meta, i had to include some meta

Yay! More of this excellent branch!

"have i overused bell sound effects?"
"nah"

Yo are we gonna see a new chapter soon? The wait is KILLING me!

I’m enjoying this branch quite a bit! Keep up the good work~!

The pictures of Jay/Jade are of people clearly over 25, were there no teenage nerd pictures available? :)

Why did I even write this episode: I have no idea, I should have just skipped straight to lunch....

up next: an episode where I go too deep into something that could be skipped with 2 sentences.

Did he specify that he wanted to be a human girl?

Heh, why do I have it in my head that a "Karyn" Jon would ask Jon to become another "Karyn" Jon?

Some interesting possibilities here, I wonder if the insta-change thing goes both ways? Perhaps Jon can realise that she can change Pete into her ideal lesbian lover?

I've been enjoying this storyline, looking forward to future episodes.

An intriguing dilemma, Tom gets what he wants as long as he is prepared to have his brother suffer, oh and let's not forget crazy demon chick no doubt amusing herself at their expense as well.

Thanks! I'm proud to have made it onto your list on reddit.

By the way, the title of this episode is a reference to the "Star Trek: TNG" episode "A Fistful of Datas", where the image of the character Data was replacing all the characters in a holodeck program.

I'm very excited to see this story still going!

Thank you! The thought that anyone looks forward to these makes me happy. I'm really enjoying writing them, too.

I came here to fap and stayed for the unique, very high quality portay of Karyn & Jon as well as writing in general. Absolutely can't wait for the next chapters.

This story is really interesting so far, please continue.

Why hasn't Jon even tried to wish to know what's going on yet?

Exactly which part of the UK does Madison come from? As someone born and raised there I can see elements of several dialects in evidence.

Fantastic work! These types of transformations are all too rare, and your writing skills are excellent. You convey the experience extremely well.

Excellent episode, been waiting for this.

Thank you to petebrown, Moot, Dude22, Paradox, Alex_Ultra, Malekith, Carlsbad, and Winter Rose, to whom I owe a lot of ideas and inspiration.