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True, I wonder if Jon and the rest of the family still perceives him as the younger brother or if that’s changed too

Well Mikey wish was “I wish I didn’t have to go to school”, so I don't think they percieve him as a kid, since that was kinda a specific wish, but not sure how they will percieve him.

So would everyone else perceive Mikey still as 10 year old kid but with an adult body or would they think Mikey is an adult with a childish mind?

I like where you’re taking this!

In any case, this is inspired by the site "TV Tropes" and its listing of tropes in entertainment. The Alpha Bitch is one such trope, as the character is an archetype of several stories set in high school. You see this sort of character in several movies and TV shows, usually as an antagonist.

I assure you, this is NOT written with some program. Every word was typed by a human being.

Interested to see more of this branch

Interesting. So he will join Athena and the group into figuring who is behind this. How much does he remember from the old reality?

More!

Thanks to Perri for help with some of the Korean translations. If I have still managed to get it wrong let me know and I will go back and fix it.

have played hs girl fantasy story enough w gpt to recognize this style

Children are also much more difficult to write just in general, honestly.

Actually, in other branches he is older.. in this one he is 6ish. In most branches I write him as 10... but in most branches Jon's mom is Linda, not Laura. We live on the multiverse I guess.

It doesn't seem to matter what branch I read Mikey is always established as being 9 or 10yo but authors always write him as being treated like is 5 or 6yo

I am loving your additions, and the changes are fantastic

Very interesting concept, wouldn't mind seeing more of this

This is a fun idea!

Congratulations! What a great achievement!

I really hope this story gets continued!

There certainly are. Really enjoying it.

I think there are some fun differences I tried to add between the two.

I always love reading your chapters for this. Keep up the good work

Yes... versus the other branch where she kept the blonde hair... but wishes can only be reinterpreted...

I'm trying to figure out what's happened here. So did whatever changed the family dynamic also basically change things as if Karyn's wish for blonde hair and big breasts never happened?

I’m personally a fan of a fair competition, but with the quality shown here I think you can make either direction work

Thank you so much! I have another chapter planned, but I'm not 100% sure if it would be better for Jon to step up his game to make the competition a little more fair, or if it would be better for Karyn to absolutely own him over and over.

Glad to hear people are still enjoying it

Omg I absolutely loved this. Great work!

This took me a bit, but this is such a good premise I couldn't resist adding onto it.

The best thread on this site. glad you're still writing

Great chapter! I really like the idea that Gwen can reshape herself faster with practice. Hope you don’t mind if I use that when I get back to them in my own thread.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jCxgUPFVFkA

After some further thought I altered the trigger to remove 'no more fakes' and made it more ambigous. Hopefully a nice way of setting it in Xanadu

Hope to see more of this branch

Nice. Curious to see if Linda makes more wishes or maybe even Zoe and Mikey get a turn with the stone. Since the stone was not mentioned in the morning plenty of opportunity for them to use it

On time this week

Thanks. Also thanks for showing the difference between Xanadu and NMF… I’m at a bit of a loss though because I don’t want to start with a full animal tf of a main character. There might be some but I don’t know so I’ve hybridised it a bit.

Perfect example of thoughts make the costume

"just a plot hook for other people"

Ah, good idea!

As for the weird looks from Athena, currently it is just a plot hook for other people. I have no plans for her right now.

I honestly did not think of his sexuality at all. (being pan probably influenced that a bit)
I guess he would bi-curious at most, he still mainly likes women but since his main crush shifted from Karyn to Harry he started to feel more than nothing towards other men. (But a lot towards Harry)

Tbh the only thing I didn’t like was Jon not having a crush on Karyn anymore, he could still have one while still liking Harry more. Though did you make Jon gay, bisexual or straight with Harry being the exception?

I wasn't originally going to add to this branch, but Sabrina's rant popped into my head and would not leave me alone until I wrote this episode. I'll admit there's more use of the F-word here than in many of the episodes I write, but Sabrina strikes me as the sort who doesn't hold back on using it much. Especially when she's calling people out on their B.S.

Paradox's cheerleader story also acknowledges that football season is over, but in a different way. The twist at the end of the episode is mine. Of course, given the fact that magic is involved and certain wishes can lead to the intervention of other people with magical powers or resources (such as Ms. Holloway), it's not too difficult to reset the school year back to the start.

Well that's one way to make sure no one would make fun of his torn skirt. :) It also seems like Athena might have some degree of awareness, if those "weird looks" are any indication. Curious to see where the wishes made in this chapter will lead us, whether it's Jon's responsibility or his new body.

Forgor💀 to post for 2 weeks so here are two chapters at once.

@Lucus Rose - Please do take this story and have fun with it! This website woudn't be called fictionbranches if it didn't have any branches.

That's the prompts apart from a few lines done. Now its time to try and continue this as a story.

love the zoe branches

It's FTM Friday!

I've given Sarah and Nicole their due in other story branches, so I thought it was okay to have them here as victims of the one-week Alpha B's wishes.

Did someone overhear that wish and rush back into the cafeteria? Maybe. Or maybe it was Jonnie's imagination. I can think of several people who might have overheard it. So many I'm not sure who to pick. I just know that different people might respond differently if they DID overhear it.

And here we get the "I wish" cliffhanger, where several possibilities are likely. Barring possible interruptions, there are a number of possibilities. I have one in mind myself.

Ah, this is one of those scenarios where someone under the influence of a time-limited wish could do a lot of damage within that time limit. I have a few new ideas for this one.