To be honest, more curious to see what happens.
By The Guest -
On Born in the USA: Passport problems
In the prior branch, it says TSA queues
By The Guest -
On Born in the USA: Passport problems
I actually realized that mistake as soon as I hit "submit," but there isn't an edit option on comments, and I didn't feel like adding another post. But yes, passport control is definitely CBP, and it was a silly mistake for me to make.
By Ms. Cork -
On Born in the USA: Passport problems
Also, hate to nitpick, but CBP, not TSA.
By The Guest -
On Born in the USA: Passport problems
I wonder if this happens in other countries too.
By The Guest -
On Born in the USA: Passport problems
That TSA agent sounds suspiciously British. I don't know if that was intentional, and I don't know if you intend to bring her back later in this story, but I actually kind of love that. Like, a stereotypical, prideful American, but for some inexplicable reason she speaks like Olivia Coleman.
That's it. I've decided this TSA agent is Olivia Coleman.
By Ms. Cork -
On Born in the USA: Passport problems
This reminds me of my story Jon's Wonderful Wish, in which Jon became a Selkie, Thanks for picking up the torch on some Scottish folklore Catprog, I look forward to seeing where this goes.
By Great Sage -
On Seal Skin
@chicha Mainly the pacing. I think the changes are definitely going at a great pace! Also the length of the chapter!
By Unity -
Thanks. Anything in particular catching your attention?
By chicha -
A bit new to the website, but I’m in love with this branch! Please continue ^^!
By Unity -
Good Question. Maybe Petra would give birth to a baby, which rapidly ages to 20 after birth, maybe Petra's body turns itself into a car. I don't know, it's just what came to my mind ;-)
By Krystren -
On The last transformation of the show
If someone says they want a girlfriend, does she give birth to one? What if someone asks for a car? Can people ask for things that don't exist now ("I want a wishing stone")?
By Hikaru -
On The last transformation of the show
Okay, so why has no one ever continued this? X3
By Mira -
Short, but would love to see some follow up to this.
By Mira -
I did consider she's clever enough, so probably ADD/ADHD
By The Guest -
On The teacher has some advice for Jon
That's a good point. We should use that. I never thought she had dyslexia.
By The Guest -
On The teacher has some advice for Jon
A real teacher that gives a damn might refer her to a Child Psychologist to test her for a Learning disability like Dyslexia or ADD, there seems to be a biological or neurological cause for Tiffany not being a good student, I don' think she is actually stupid, but there is something wrong there. - IMHO
By Great Sage -
On The teacher has some advice for Jon
Hope you like what I added and will add to it soon
By Switcher -
I am imagining that somehow Biff ends up with a donkey as the wish get twisted.
By Catprog -
I’d love it if you’d add Lauren’s reaction and her slowly turning into ms Tran more
By Switcher -
On The other side of the desk.
Sometimes work gets in the way. That and writers block but I have added again. Enjoy
By Ms-Scarlett-Raven -
On The other side of the desk.
Try this branch I started today
https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/1756767
By Oil o -
On Steve and Karyn talk while Jon discovers a problem with his locker
So that answers that question, he's swapping with Tiff
By Great Sage -
On Steve and Karyn talk while Jon discovers a problem with his locker
Cool! This has some real potential
By Great Sage -
Interesting, looking forward to more
By Great Sage -
I'm very curious to see who he is swapping with, I suspect Tiffany Saunders as in the other version of this story. I do like this version
By Great Sage -
AN Epic Scale addition to this fascinating story, Well done!
By Great Sage -
On Greg gets caught up in trouble...
I love how it's going
By Yuyu -
Yes, now that I'm getting back in to writing, I will be adding new chapters to Fictionmania. So stay tuned
By Maddie -
Feel free to hop in yourself
By chicha -
Will you do anymore stories on fiction mania
By Oil o -
hope to see this continued soon
By Spirina -
D Question Mark
By Mira -
I was thinking makeup and jewelry, nail polish, but not hair, thinking it would be interesting to see guys do to style there short hair, while girls just let there long hair be plain
By VeronicaZ -
Are things like makeup and hair included in the swap, or do they stay as is?
By Tenkuu23 -
B I think...
By bigbustgazer -
D.. I rhink
By gigi love -
Gotta be A)
By z0rfl4k -
I'll take B) please
By Soitu -
Well, I will be interested to see where you take this.
By Great Sage -
I haven't implemented any kind of account deletion, but even if I had, it would only delete your email address and password hash, not your episodes (as doing so would be unfair to any who have contributed to your branches). If you wish, I can delete your email manually. You will permanently lose access to your account.
By Phoenix -
On Deleting?
Mary Marvel? LOLI am looking forward to more of this - will Sarah become Dr Sarah Silvana?
By Great Sage -
On Acceptance!
A, that could be interesting, especially if the main character already had a girlfriend
By asdf -
On What is that transformation?
B- let’s get some girl love in this business
By Glass Teapot -
On What is that transformation?
Yes, the story I'm working on is quite big so it's just taking a while to write up.
By Maddie -
On Heading Home
Will you be adding new chapters to your newest FictionMania stories anytime soon?
By Anonymous51 -
On Heading Home
Also for some comments on this Ep, loved the Miss Worldwide effect. Constantly changing race and stereotypical behavior is adorable as hell. Love that setup you gave it.
By Mira -
On What is that transformation?
d
By g khjb -
On What is that transformation?
C, lets go with an all time classic
By Mira -
On What is that transformation?
d... but what is pansexsual? lol
By gigi love -
On What is that transformation?
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