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This story was inspired by SitriAbyss's still ongoing comic over on Deviantart, go check it out!!

To be honest, more curious to see what happens.

In the prior branch, it says TSA queues

I actually realized that mistake as soon as I hit "submit," but there isn't an edit option on comments, and I didn't feel like adding another post. But yes, passport control is definitely CBP, and it was a silly mistake for me to make.

Also, hate to nitpick, but CBP, not TSA.

I wonder if this happens in other countries too.

That TSA agent sounds suspiciously British. I don't know if that was intentional, and I don't know if you intend to bring her back later in this story, but I actually kind of love that. Like, a stereotypical, prideful American, but for some inexplicable reason she speaks like Olivia Coleman.

That's it. I've decided this TSA agent is Olivia Coleman.

This reminds me of my story Jon's Wonderful Wish, in which Jon became a Selkie, Thanks for picking up the torch on some Scottish folklore Catprog, I look forward to seeing where this goes.

@chicha Mainly the pacing. I think the changes are definitely going at a great pace! Also the length of the chapter!

Thanks. Anything in particular catching your attention?

A bit new to the website, but I’m in love with this branch! Please continue ^^!

Good Question. Maybe Petra would give birth to a baby, which rapidly ages to 20 after birth, maybe Petra's body turns itself into a car. I don't know, it's just what came to my mind ;-)

If someone says they want a girlfriend, does she give birth to one? What if someone asks for a car? Can people ask for things that don't exist now ("I want a wishing stone")?

Okay, so why has no one ever continued this? X3

Short, but would love to see some follow up to this.

I did consider she's clever enough, so probably ADD/ADHD

That's a good point. We should use that. I never thought she had dyslexia.

A real teacher that gives a damn might refer her to a Child Psychologist to test her for a Learning disability like Dyslexia or ADD, there seems to be a biological or neurological cause for Tiffany not being a good student, I don' think she is actually stupid, but there is something wrong there. - IMHO

Hope you like what I added and will add to it soon

I am imagining that somehow Biff ends up with a donkey as the wish get twisted.

I’d love it if you’d add Lauren’s reaction and her slowly turning into ms Tran more

Sometimes work gets in the way. That and writers block but I have added again. Enjoy

Try this branch I started today
https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/1756767

So that answers that question, he's swapping with Tiff

Cool! This has some real potential

Interesting, looking forward to more

I'm very curious to see who he is swapping with, I suspect Tiffany Saunders as in the other version of this story. I do like this version

AN Epic Scale addition to this fascinating story, Well done!

I love how it's going

Yes, now that I'm getting back in to writing, I will be adding new chapters to Fictionmania. So stay tuned

Feel free to hop in yourself

Will you do anymore stories on fiction mania

hope to see this continued soon

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I was thinking makeup and jewelry, nail polish, but not hair, thinking it would be interesting to see guys do to style there short hair, while girls just let there long hair be plain

Are things like makeup and hair included in the swap, or do they stay as is?

B I think...

D.. I rhink

Gotta be A)

I'll take B) please

Well, I will be interested to see where you take this.

I haven't implemented any kind of account deletion, but even if I had, it would only delete your email address and password hash, not your episodes (as doing so would be unfair to any who have contributed to your branches). If you wish, I can delete your email manually. You will permanently lose access to your account.

Mary Marvel? LOLI am looking forward to more of this - will Sarah become Dr Sarah Silvana?

A, that could be interesting, especially if the main character already had a girlfriend

B- let’s get some girl love in this business

Yes, the story I'm working on is quite big so it's just taking a while to write up.

Will you be adding new chapters to your newest FictionMania stories anytime soon?

Also for some comments on this Ep, loved the Miss Worldwide effect. Constantly changing race and stereotypical behavior is adorable as hell. Love that setup you gave it.

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C, lets go with an all time classic