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And I would like to talk to Goryu

By FidishagtidizbV - 2020-04-09 00:12:19

On Contacting authors



I love this addition and spin on things, I would love to just see where this goes. :)

By HelixFeather - 2020-04-06 00:25:23

On 'Erin' goes to work



Good to hear! I’ll give it some thought and might add to this chain tomorrow. Want to give it the right spin. I tend to write the disaster rather than the human stories inside of the event. I should slow down and give that more of a shot.

By HelixFeather - 2020-04-06 00:20:16

On School Daze



Wonderful.

By Goryu - 2020-04-05 22:35:29

On Tim chooses



@doclock: Hey, don't worry too much about my style. Write what you like! Your additions are great so far, I'm just a sporadic writer. But for the record I tend to go for personality & clothing changes and reality warping weirdness. Physical changes can be fun but aren't always a priority. I tend to prefer having my characters go through a big change and then live with that for a bit rather than a rapid series of change after change after change.

By wokka - 2020-04-04 11:56:15

On School Daze



I think I’m starting to get your style Wokka. Looking for clothes swap and personality more, maybe other parts changing later? Just trying to figure out how not to drive you away when I add :)

By HelixFeather - 2020-04-03 23:16:52

On School Daze



Ok.. you got my atention, i'm curious and confuse.

By Goryu - 2020-04-03 18:26:24

On School Daze



Thank you for adding! Im looking forward to what else happens!

By DatWeirdOne - 2020-04-02 17:56:33

On Get Cheered Up



This is the Grade A FB content I come here to see

By HelixFeather - 2020-04-02 16:02:15

On Get Cheered Up



Thanks for the compliment

By Jedilord - 2020-04-01 18:41:45

On May is pissed



Probs gonna be a few more chapters before we find out who gets the bottle. At least from me. In the meantime.... https://www.strawpoll.me/19673727 Here's a poll cause I haven't decided yet might ignore the poll all together but curious what people think anyway.

By Jedilord - 2020-04-01 18:39:44

On David's First



Now it's time for some movie.

By Goryu - 2020-04-01 18:00:01

On ex boyfriend arrives



Ohh good use of the note. Slow tranformation is one of the best twinning.

By Goryu - 2020-04-01 16:23:41

On ex boyfriend arrives



Wow, this one is one of the most detailed storys here.

By Goryu - 2020-04-01 16:23:03

On May is pissed



Leaving this one open to outfit choices for the writers who continues it, as well as where they go.

By HelixFeather - 2020-04-01 13:44:55

On Audreys plan to go out



I see what you did there.

By Kylo - 2020-04-01 09:58:52

On Fixing the Broken Chain



Amazing o.o

By Goryu - 2020-04-01 08:37:35

On SECOND SUBJECT ACCEPTED. . . COMMENCING TRANSFER



You guys are on fire!

By Goryu - 2020-04-01 08:17:01

On Audrey minded Josh



I'm really curious now o.o

By Goryu - 2020-04-01 00:01:23

On Later



Wonderful, this open a lot of possibilities.

By Goryu - 2020-03-31 17:49:21

On TWIN NOTE



Hey, keep encouraging and I’ll keep writing when I can. :)

By HelixFeather - 2020-03-31 17:29:39

On Twinning Sarah: Method of conversion



Hear me out. what this story needs is a direction to eventually end in, a device which allows the mystery to be understood by the characters and then acted in, the Athena branch is my attempt at adding in this device.

By Kylo - 2020-03-31 13:54:40

On Danielle Puts On a Skateboarder's Knee Pads, and Gena Shares a Memory of a Weird Experience With Sarah



This story is the one i'm most curious. Nice chapther.

By Goryu - 2020-03-30 20:10:15

On Mind-Mirror Mosquitos: Spreading through the office



Nice one, remember me of the life merge.

By Goryu - 2020-03-30 17:49:50

On Mike no more...



Hey you guys are on fire, nice chapthers.

By Goryu - 2020-03-30 17:44:42

On Audrey makes her move



A "twinning" death note where she can put how the transformation will happens.

By Goryu - 2020-03-30 16:24:27

On Twinning Sarah: Method of conversion



This story is really interesting.

By Goryu - 2020-03-30 16:21:18

On Mind Mirror Mosquitos: Todd begins to change



Great job on this! Please continue

By FidishagtidizbV - 2020-03-30 14:36:03

On Mike no more...



Add another please

By FidishagtidizbV - 2020-03-29 16:50:35

On Josh panics



Yes. It's really weird...

By Lowless - 2020-03-28 09:20:34

On You Are What You Wish



Would you mind adding?

By FidishagtidizbV - 2020-03-27 20:15:07

On Josh loses his mind more



Nice pack of chapters too.

By Goryu - 2020-03-27 19:35:44

On Josh loses his mind more



Wow, nice "pack" of chapters.

By Goryu - 2020-03-27 19:34:45

On Josh begins to “grow”



I’m gonna try and add more in a bit too.

By HelixFeather - 2020-03-27 00:04:05

On knowledge transfer complete



That’s fine, I’ll add more when I can

By FidishagtidizbV - 2020-03-27 00:01:40

On knowledge transfer complete



Apologies for the short one readers.

By HelixFeather - 2020-03-26 23:59:15

On knowledge transfer complete



Slight continuity error her mind was copied in last, but I’m willing to run with this error as it makes things go a bit more interestingly.

By HelixFeather - 2020-03-26 23:27:40

On Audrey has an idea



Keep it coming!

By FidishagtidizbV - 2020-03-26 22:52:24

On Mind and Outfit



I thought it would be interesting if someone just stayed put and called. And if someone else couldn't change.

By The Guest - 2020-03-26 21:35:53

On Jay Stays Put and Tim Walks Home



Great chapter.

By Goryu - 2020-03-26 21:28:03

On Audrey squeezes the remote in anger, accidentally triggering it. But what were the settings?



Great job! Keep adding please.

By FidishagtidizbV - 2020-03-26 18:51:19

On Audrey squeezes the remote in anger, accidentally triggering it. But what were the settings?



To be honest, this is set in the spring, so many people will have had a birthday in the year. But I think we're on the same page.

By The Guest - 2020-03-26 18:01:14

On Age is But a Number



Yeah, where I live, it's K-5 for Elementary, 6-8 for Middle School, and 9-12 for High School too.

By avatar Anonymous51 - 2020-03-26 17:02:14

On Age is But a Number



I'm not sure you can trust your friend to know how to count properly. He does have a Florida education, after all.

(I can make that joke, I lived in Florida for all of K-12)

By avatar Ms. Cork - 2020-03-26 02:23:34

On Age is But a Number



It depends if you are going from starting to ending age. Elementary here is Grades K-5, Middle 6-8, High School 9-12. So, a 12 year old in the Spring, which is supposed to be, would be 11 at the start of the year. I asked a friend of mine in Florida, and he said Middle School in his area is 5-8. So, it may vary. Someone once set Lake Point near PIttsburgh. I checked. In the suburbs of Pennsylvania, it is also 6-8.

By The Guest - 2020-03-25 21:06:13

On Age is But a Number



HMM curious.

By Goryu - 2020-03-25 20:10:09

On ...an office full of employees.



For me, middle school (or junior high school) was 12 to 14 years old. Then high school was 15 to 18. But ages could vary.

By avatar Anonymous51 - 2020-03-25 19:57:31

On Age is But a Number



Haven't I been punished enough?

By The Guest - 2020-03-24 18:19:16

On Linda is Much More Athletic



That was me. I didn't do the cheerleader branch though, that was churl.

By wokka - 2020-03-24 16:54:49

On An exhausted but still attractive single mom of two, who could really use some help around the house...



Please continue!

By hello - 2020-03-24 11:47:02

On My recent additon to Beautiful Genes






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