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OK, sunlight = bad.

By Elron - 2020-02-11 16:54:20

On Jason Makes It Back Safely



So does sunlight kill these vampires or just make them glitter?

By Elron - 2020-02-11 16:49:56

On Steve's First Feeding



I thought vampires had to be invited into a dwelling.

By Elron - 2020-02-11 16:45:33

On Steve Dawson, Next Door Neighbor



I thought vampires had no reflection.

By Elron - 2020-02-11 16:44:07

On Jason is a Vampire



Great story. Very creative.

By Elron - 2020-02-11 16:41:22

On Inanimate swap



Love it that Jon is a buxom elven princess. Can't wait to find out what's in store for him/her and Karyn.

By Elron - 2020-02-11 02:30:41

On The changes have only just begun



Great story. I hope Jon sticks around long enough to marry the prince, and maybe even produce an heir to the throne. Why not complete his humiliation as Allaria.

By Elron - 2020-02-11 02:08:56

On escape for the morning



Great job with the story. I hope Jon/Allaria is in the book long enough to consummate her wedding. And I do think it is better when they are forced to act and talk totally in character. Great job everyone!

By Elron - 2020-02-11 01:41:31

On The Answer



Great job with the story. I hope Jon/Allaria is in the book long enough to consummate her wedding. And I do think it is better when they are forced to act and talk totally in character. Great ob everyone!

By Elron - 2020-02-11 01:40:19

On Meanwhile, in the real world



I have to say that this is probably my most favorite story to read on FB. I hope you all will continue with this amazing tale. And I hope Jon/Allaria winds up in bed with the human knight - or at least getting to second base. Gotta make the best use of those breasts. Please, please, please.

By Elron - 2020-02-11 01:19:27

On An accidental meeting in a garden.



I have to say that this is probably my most favorite story to read on FB. I hope you all will continue with this amazing tale. And I hope Jon/Allaria winds up in bed with the human knight - or at least getting to second base. Gotta make the best use of those breasts. Please, please, please.

By Elron - 2020-02-11 01:12:11

On Jon gets stuck with Allaria's best friend



I have to say that this is probably my most favorite story to read on FB. I hope you all will continue with this amazing tale. And I hope Jon/Allaria winds up in bed with the human knight - or at least getting to second base. Gotta make the best use of those breasts. Please, please, please.

By Elron - 2020-02-11 01:11:18

On Show me your moves



I have to say that this is probably my most favorite story to read on FB. I hope you all will continue with this amazing tale. And I hope Jon/Allaria winds up in bed with the human knight - or at least getting to second base. Gotta make the best use of those breasts. Please, please, please.

By Elron - 2020-02-11 01:10:47

On Bookmark: Method Acting



Nice

By Magaso - 2020-02-08 14:28:09

On A Jogger's Vagina



Thanks!

By Enjeubleu - 2020-02-05 12:35:05

On Show me your moves



Ohh the cliff!

By Goryu - 2020-02-04 16:44:50

On Dinner and a Plan



That works better :)

By Great Sage - 2020-02-01 11:52:47

On The changes begin



hilarious and brilliant as always.

By Count Sparks - 2020-02-01 11:45:49

On Show me your moves



Great!!

By TheodoriusIII - 2020-01-30 03:29:56

On Jon gets PMS



Bunnie: Next to last paragraph of the previous entry, starting with "Jack Struggled..."

By avatar LimitedPower - 2020-01-23 16:23:10

On Was It Good For You



interested to see where you plan to take one of my favourite branches ^^

By avatar TheScienceWizard - 2020-01-22 16:39:34

On Jon's not borrowing the whole body 2



How did he get under 3ft? I missed something.

By Bunnie - 2020-01-21 01:49:30

On Was It Good For You



Lelouch what is your favorite type of FTF swaps? Is there any you’ve wanted me to write about and if so describe what they look like, their attitudes and their names. Maybe I could write something then others could add too

By Switcher - 2020-01-19 17:13:18

On Thank you to those who write in the drafting board



Can’t wait for the next add!

By Switcher - 2020-01-19 15:49:56

On Home for the evening.



What a historic episode this was for FB—introducing 13 characters! Several of these characters became classics used routinely.

By avatar ZamZam - 2020-01-17 21:29:32

On school testing



Can't wait to see where this goes, hope Candi gets to make an errant wish about the girls. Great job!

By avatar MaryPear - 2020-01-16 11:52:15

On Apologies



You're alive! love your stories, and on FIctionmania! would love to see you write more or any other stories you've done!

By Pillas - 2020-01-13 13:18:43

On Mrs. Harris Has a Fancy New Vagina



Nice catch...I've decided to retcon that.

By avatar ZamZam - 2020-01-12 22:00:49

On Later, at lunch...



Interesting so far but be careful, I noticed that in the previous episode Zoey said she didn't have the stone with her and now she does - did she lie to her friend or did you just forget?

By Great Sage - 2020-01-12 09:04:10

On Later, at lunch...



Cool epiaode. As always, I'll try to game-ify this with alternative branches once youre done with it

By Ez - 2020-01-11 22:20:01

On Here comes Coach



We love it tooo

By Magaso - 2020-01-08 17:26:42

On Biff uses her power again



I decided to continue it. Seems there is more interested then I thought. Thanks for the encouragement :)

By Chompy - 2020-01-08 16:02:14

On Biff uses her power again



As someone who identifies as a mult this is immensely relatable. Can't wait to see where this goes!

By Ez - 2020-01-07 22:30:02

On Three Sets of Feet in One Pair of Shoes



https://discord.gg/BTNR6F WARNING: there is currently politics in the channel entitled General Bullshit

By ThePro - 2020-01-07 20:00:41

On More Followup



Sure! How do I join?

By Enjeubleu - 2020-01-07 19:26:10

On More Followup



Agreed. This chapter was a particularly great mix of funny and sexy. Bravo.

By Count Sparks - 2020-01-07 16:47:30

On On a time limit.



Fantastic episode. By the way I'm on the beaddventure discord if you ever want to talk in a more real time format about kink writing.

By ThePro - 2020-01-07 16:20:06

On More Followup



Damn man. You weren't kidding about stepping your game up. I mean, your previous entries were good, don't get me wrong. I enjoyed them a lot. But this is still way better. The prose is great, the characterization of Karyn vs. Seraphina is fun, and I love the play on how some old fantasy authors really sucked at writing female characters.

By ThePro - 2020-01-07 16:18:12

On On a time limit.



I think it still works. We're already close to but not quite at the edge of where that would go. Might be good to keep in mind for flexibility's sake.

By ThePro - 2020-01-06 19:31:34

On Back to Karyn



If it's already mandated by the genre, then I'll leave it as is. There is a funny contrast between oversexed characters and fairly pg plotlines--which is all I was gonna pull out of the erotica, of course. Anything too sex-related is a definite no-go, especially when the characters aren't doing it willingly.

By Enjeubleu - 2020-01-06 18:53:03

On Back to Karyn



That would certainly make sense given where we're taking it so far. Though personally I found a lot of the fairly PG fantasy like Wheel of Time to be sexually charged in a subdued, circumspect way. Character's can't cuss and the women are all aloof but here's a loving description of how great all their tits look in this over-detailed dress design.

By ThePro - 2020-01-06 18:46:00

On Back to Karyn



I didn't even think about how a potential romance between the two is ruined by their unwanted family dynamic. Crap, that could be hilarious. As for the bookmark, I treating it as taking on as many traits from the one book as possible (because that's all Jon and Karen used it on)... But with a twist. I'm not quite sure how to reveal it yet, but I'm thinking that the bookmark may have "remembered" a few traits from the book its last owner used it on: an erotica.

By Enjeubleu - 2020-01-06 18:43:47

On Back to Karyn



Hum, i'm curious to see the development.

By Goryu - 2020-01-06 18:29:28

On Three Sets of Feet in One Pair of Shoes



And yeah love what you're doing with the contrast between Jon and Karyn's characters. And the excerpt from the awful fantasy novel. Personally I was never sure if the world the bookmark generated should match what it was used on 100% or just the essence of it. But I think you're getting a lot out of it being a specific setting.

By ThePro - 2020-01-06 17:42:00

On Back to Karyn



I was always a sucker for the adolescent romance overtones of the first chapter between Jon and Karyn, to be honest. Although you could do a similar thing if Karyn was bi thus eliminating the choice for her while leaving that subplot open as a possibility. Alternatively, could just screw the both of them again. They're blessed by a fertility goddess right? Meaning, breeding. Maybe other elves are just fine with what anyone might get up to sexually, but the royal family is always 100% straight.

But really, I trust you to come up with something good. I'm quite eager.

By ThePro - 2020-01-06 17:40:57

On Back to Karyn



Thanks! I'm pretty satisfied with this chapter; per the tell-not-show rule of all good-bad literature, none of the skills Edea was listed of having will ever be made relevant. As for Karyn, I'd thought I could make her a good contrast to Jon. If one’s gonna be the passive female protagonist with the agency of a lamp, the other’s gonna be a ridiculous self-insert with infuriatingly little personality. I’m also considering having Karyn be queer, just to bully her with the “only straight white people in fantasies” trope. What are your thoughts?

By Enjeubleu - 2020-01-06 16:05:30

On Back to Karyn



Which is not to say that you should rush to that scene. I'm enjoying what you're doing and this characterization of Karyn. If you have something more planned here I'm also eager to see it. Or if you want to continue Jon's romantic interlude. Great job.

By ThePro - 2020-01-06 14:09:09

On Back to Karyn



Good stuff. Seraphina is a biiiit of a Mary Sue I see. Can't wait to see what you had in mind for the meeting with Jon.

By ThePro - 2020-01-06 14:05:17

On Back to Karyn



I like where you seem to be going with the edits but it really wasn't necessary. And thanks for the praise.

By ThePro - 2020-01-06 08:55:14

On An accidental meeting in a garden.



Can’t wait to see how you write Lauren’s night in her new body and what you do with Lonna exploring her new boyfriend!

By Switcher - 2020-01-05 23:05:33

On Meanwhile outside in the corridor






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