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Next bit will be two episodes with Jon, then I'm spent for now.

Hell yeah! Go for it. I'm excited to see what you have planned.
EDIT: I didn't see your latest comment from last episode until now--I think you should write the next one. I have a few plans to further develop Karen's perspective, but they'd fit best in the lunch scene.

Hell yeah! Go for it. I'm excited to see what you have planned.

Well I was actually planning to introduce the love interest and an old bad-fantasy cliché about female leads when I first started writing.

Well geez. This is, quite frankly, amazing. Looks like I'll have to step up my writing game to maintain this level of quality. May I ask what scene you were hoping to do next? I just got started with writing Allaria's romantic rendez-vous, but will gladly hand the reigns over to you if you have something in mind. The only scene I feel particularly attached to writing is the initial interaction between Jon and Karen--I have some fun plans for that one.

Posted. I dunno if you want to do the next one or if I should.

Alright I should have something in a bit. Here's hoping it works. It's been awhile.

Thanks Unity! @ThePro, I have a vague idea for Jon, but by all means, please feel free to post whatever you want to post. Not only would I very much like to see what you have to write, but this IS fiction branches. The plot either goes as expected, or there's a fun new route to work with.

I think I might actually have something here but I don't want to derail you too much if you've already got a Jon/Allaria ep coming up or in progress.

I’m LOVING this idea so far! I think the way they are forced to speak yet keeping what they want to say above it is perfect! Along with that, how they control their body, yet can’t do anything out of character, it’s a very enjoyable concept ^^ Keep up the good work!

You're dead on. It's a weird feeling, trying to make something both clichéd and predictable, yet somehow not boring. I'm not gonna lie, I'm having a lot more fun writing this than I expected. If I get too invested, I just might have to make a full-fledged story out of it for some other platform.

I'm enjoying that this appears to indeed be a tedious and clichéd book. Following from that, I get the feeling that this version of the Princess is probably a carefree little sprite that likes to cavort in the gardens and dream of far-off places in contrast to her ice queen mother. And of course, probably a forbidden romance coming up.

I’d like to have Jon and Karen realize that since elves don’t have weeks in their calendar, they’d be stuck there quite a bit more indefinitely than originally anticipated. They’d try to figure some other way to make it out, which might be possible, considering they’re in a magic setting. Problem is, the story keeps pushing them into different directions then what they’d need to do, and they’re stuck acting as characters who—while caring about one another other—REALLY don’t get along. (Please feel free to contribute; I only have this general idea, and would love to work with other people and their own takes on the story)

Well you're doing a better job than I did back in the day. Would you be interesting in sharing your plans, if you have any in particular?

It's funny that you say that, because I was honestly trying to follow your writing style! The bookmark/fantasy world storyline has been my favorite on the site for years, and I've always been bummed to see it receive as little attention as it does.

Not only did someone add to one of my ancient poorly written episodes, it was the one with my favorite concept; and the episode was far better than what preceded it.

I love it. Can't wait to see where you're going with it.

The easiest way out of this would be hair. That would be the easiest to disguise, and I would love not have to ever shave again.

Thanks Denkkar I believe I have corrected all of the name errors.

Good addition but the "Kathryn" vs "Karyn" mixup was very distracting.

Always a fan of these 2 turning into cheerleaders. Excited to see where the story goes.

Count me in as well as to help contributing, love these ideas...but this site doesnt have the traffic it used to have

Love the drafting board, absolutely.

Chompy I'll continue this story if you won't. I love The Mist...

I did enjoy it.

Due to lack of interest I am discontinuing this story. Thanks for enjoying it if you did.

I'm happy to collaborate.

I don't have a grand vision for this one. Usually I plan out all the major beats of a story, and have a general emotion I want to capture. For this one, I just wanted to enjoy it as it devolved into chaos, to be ultimately resolved by some deus ex machina. The ending still doesn't quite put things right, but lets everyone be content and enjoy their new lives.

I'll email you some spoilers of some of my broader ideas, if you'd like, otherwise feel free to add whatever comes to your mind.

Hi Perri, I'm really enjoying this thread. Reality modifications are some of my favourite transformations out there. There are just so wonderfully and terrifyingly... complete. The victims really can't escape at all. Do you have a vision of where you'd want this story to go or do you mind me joining for a little collaboration?

Duplication was what I was planning. Love the idea of spreading identity in a benevolent way like that.

Good one electric zeal. I vote for duplications or the identity reality options.

Sorry for not updating MM in a while. I had family issues IRL come up. They're sorted out now and I'm ready to flesh out this whole story!

I didn't have anything else planned.

Really like the ideas behind this branch. Are you looking for collaboration, or is this a project you'd prefer to handle on your own?

Good chapter, i'm becoming really curious.

Kinda short....hope someone does this idea for real

Omg please continue this!

I kind of hope someone would continue with just a sub-story about nudist Zoe.

This option can be fun. I wonder just how much of their minds they would share. Would it be a hivemind, or just a shared identity?

<3 Fusion, Conjoinment, and Multiple Bodyparts with reality alteration even all rolled into one simple device. Love it! I hope we can get to see a lot of what this device can do.

Sorry about the wait! Writer's block and life's been hell lately.

Very intriguing concept, I'm curious to see where you go with this but hope you don't engage in too much identity death. It's also very well written.

I'm curious with this aproach.

Nice.
An alternative I could see is that the wish made Jon instantly swap everything that was left to change. Since everything was swapped, it would stop the swapping

Hi there and welcome! Some consider it an honour for their story to be added upon. ;)

Lions are not endurance runners, only sprinters.

Dogs do have color vision. They just don't see as many as we do. You should definitely Google dog vision. It's pretty cool.

I tried to delete and re-enter the comment to fix the typo (Fo vs Go), but got a: "javax.persistence.PersistenceException: org.hibernate.exception.ConstraintViolationException: could not execute statement"

Don't be concerned about adding to existing stories. The branch you create is entirely independent. It doesn't commit to a direction or theme and can be followed or not at whim. The same is true for branches that may be added to yours. Fo for it!

hello!

very cute, love it.

Yay for at least friends again.