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I pick A), since I'm curious of the end result.

I vote for C) Stereotypes are fun! Very interested in this~ keep up the good work!

a)Blood has been spilled

sad you decided to quit, but good luck in the future

Well, dear audience. What are your choices?

My next advance in reviving my favourite storylines. I got inspired by the story "The Penal Game" from fictionmania, please check it out, it's awesome.

I think them both unknowingly developing some of each others traits might be fun.

Hey There Mr C. There's no way to delete an account.

I’d like to add more. How would you like their personalities to be? Like would you like Lauren having a hard time and Lonna loving it or vice versa. Also like things like do you want Lauren to unknowingly have some of Lonna’s traits?

nice to see this back up, always liked this thread

I'm delighted to see more of this, please continue

May this thread never die.

Oh Noes!!! Poor Zoe!

Now THIS is a scary concept! And if our mysterious stone-switcher knew precisely which stone it was instead of just picking a stone at random, then clearly we have to wonder just what they were thinking. (But of course the great thing about Fiction Branches is that each of us can eventually sort out the motive later on in the story).

For the purposes of this storyline, I'm going with: The shirt exhibits its effects once put on for the first time. Taking it off does not undo the effects. You'll see some more of this a bit later.

She took off the shirt? What does THAT do?

Fair point. I was thinking in terms of 'supernatural' being a physical change into something that doesn't exist in real life. I was just specifying because The Guest was asking, though. If someone adds to this they can feel free to do whatever they want.

So what counts as "realistic" changes, and what is "supernatural"? Given the sort of scenarios here, the lines between the two feel blurry at best.

I have been enjoying it. It has been very unique.

I do indeed have a plan for that, so stay tuned. Ultimately, I'm planning on the changes to the cast to be mostly realistic, with a couple of supernatural exceptions (and the world will change accordingly, because I'm a sucker for reality changes)

In my head, I was imagining that Gwen only met Jay during high school, and that the goths never associated with Zoe since she quit that phase early. So at the very least, nobody that Gwen talked to would know her. But even so, I have a place I want to take Zoe's story so I was just trying to make the explanation up until now at least...plausible. Hopefully you can look past this part when that part comes. :P

Wouldn't people at school remember her even if she left school?

Curious what might happen... the Maid uniform is a question mark for me because real maids don't dress like that... so is Jon becoming a real maid or not? If so, is the world changing to make this normal?

Would you like to add?

I'm trying to start a side story that will be in shorter chunks to my tsundere story, maybe it'll convince some people to jump in while I work on it. I'm also planning to actually use different points of view and switch between characters in this one like a lot of other branches do. Here's the maid outfit in question.

Thanks!

I always intended to continue it, looking back on this one now, a lot of what i wrote was flat out embarrassing in that I could write it so much better, but I appreciate the sentiment.

One day i'll finish the story.

while i love the branch, i quite dislike Roland and am happy to see stuff go even more wrong

Curious to see more of this.

Lawl, I expected as much of a reaction. I'd say don't lose hope yet...

That seems like such a crappy existence for Zoe. Poor Zoe. :(

Enjoyed Krystren's branch off this, and love to see this storyline revived, but was curious to see what would happen if, rather than being able to simply use the stone to reassert control of the situation, thing's got even more awry for Ronald. So I pitted the popular, overt jerk against the unpopular, secret jerk.

Sherry is being an utter bitch in this episode, how could any mother be this horrible to her own child?

So now what? You might have written yourself into a corner

I REALLY enjoyed this branch, twice now.

Thank you for the great additions!

You can't add a sister without losing one. That is the law of sibling conservation.

Intriguing, this could get very interesting.

👀

Now I REALLY want to know what's up with Zoe? Is she deformed? Is she mentally ill?

Look forward to seeing some of that. I quite enjoy the potential of this story, but I'm terrible at advancing story branches solo.

You do realise she is now well into the range of being mentally handicapped now? Not a big fan of destroying people's intelligence to this extent. Well, it's your story so do what you like.

Oh Noes! Whatever could have happened to dear sweet little Zoe?!!

Yeah no definitely still has a way to go. We'll see how many more chapters her transformation lasts

fun branch

I think this might be my favourite shirts one so far, please continue this story. Curious as to when or if Gwen will remember her old life?

Can never get enough of Jon going goth-girl. May continue on this line soonish.

I love how this branch is going! Keep up the good work!

Interesting prompt. I'm curious to see how this turns out!

Shame this stopped, a very interesting premise

Glad this storyline got revisited!

Everyone has their own style and it may take some time to find one you truly enjoy. I for one have been enjoying it quite a bit so I have no complaints. A mix of well written verse and visual imagery makes for a happy me!