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Fantastic work! These types of transformations are all too rare, and your writing skills are excellent. You convey the experience extremely well.

Excellent episode, been waiting for this.

Thank you to petebrown, Moot, Dude22, Paradox, Alex_Ultra, Malekith, Carlsbad, and Winter Rose, to whom I owe a lot of ideas and inspiration.

I wish this would be continued

I definitely do like it! And short chapters are alright. I'm actually surprised you already got 2 more going on in the same day I wrote my initial comment.

What I really love is that this isn't only about the fetish fiction itself, but also about what the stone can do and how Jon handles everything. I can see how he puts thought into his wishes and doesn't just stupidly make a wish that will change his life for no apparent reason, like it's the case in my other chapters. You have writing talent, so seeing a fiction written for one of my favourite fetishes is delightful. I can't wait to see where this is going, this has to genuinely be the best writing I've seen on this website in the branches I already read through. Keep it up!

Thank you! I'm new to writing, and especially new to writing weird fetish porn, so it means a lot.

Sorry that the chapters are short. What happens is, every time I think of an alternate way that I or someone else might like to take the story, I end the chapter. Hope you like it!

One of my favorite branches, thanks!

Holy fuck, this is great. Please keep it up, I can't wait for more of this

At this point, I actually started using a dice roller to randomize the relative success of Luke/Lucy's actions. The odds are in our hero(ine?)'s favor, but pobody's nerfect; the lower the roll, the more likely it is a faux pas, magic or otherwise, occurs.

All in one sentence btw.

Tried a different link for the image, should work now.

Latest updated Firefox or IE, no second image -- but there is a warming about no hotlinking.

I can see it on my browser, anyone else unable to see the second image?

Second image doesn't work

That was an oversight, the last part should have included slight breast growth. As for them not being inquisitive...umm mix of them being too frightened of stepping out of line and getting too caught up in the moment? ^^;

Interesting concept~ Can’t wait to see where this goes!

I'm very happy to see you build upon my story, and I look forward to seeing more.

Love it

Really hope something goes wrong. Magics great when it’s working. Let’s hope they don’t get stuck... actually...

I like where this is going. Can't wait to see the next chapter

I see what you mean. But I like to think that since she heard it, it works a bit differently. Since they didn’t specifically wish for all her clothes to change with her. Just a little twist for this branch ^^

You switch from past tense to present, best to stick to one.

According to the rules of the stone "Changes made will be as if it has always been so" which means that Karyn's bra's would fit her new chest.

Oooo. This is an interesting idea. Excited to read more~

interested to see where this goes

(also small note, it's cue, not que :3 )

What's Karyn getting back a Jon for? She made the wish that gave her big boobs and blonde hair, it's not Jon's fault she forgot she was holding the stone.

Can’t wait to see the next one!

Poor Biff and his new possible sexuality.

Can’t wait to see where this goes! I check all the time lol

Yay for more catgirls.

I'm glad you keep adding to this story. I'm really enjoying it! Thanks!

I really love it so far! Excited to see where you take it!

Today on FictionBranches, TSW tries to write lewd.

Credit to Kursaal ( https://fictionbranches.net/fb/user/kursaal ) for the first half of this, just wanted to change the swap function for the second test. ;3

Nice

Hey, welcome back. I wasn't sure if you'd ever show up again. You haven't added anything in months.

Didn't see any mention of breast growth in the previous chapter, and was a bit saddened not to see any inquisitiveness or descriptions about them in this one either. They were just there.

Inspired by https://tf.letsgame.ga/RC/repurposing.html

Any new updates to this? Love where it’s going. I remember seeing this back when tf role play was up. Have any more stories from there?

None of your picture links work and seem to lead to dodgy sites.

Suggestion: if you post suggestions on Discord I'm significantly more likely to see them.

Note to self: where'd the Discord link on the front page go? Whoops.

Love this series, loving Biff/Becca

Seconded

I need a subscribe for updates button on this one. What an amazing story. Great concept paired with such execution. I can't wait for the next episode to see how Scott and his father cope.

well, this is just a rambling story I threw together to get back into things, so expect low quality!

Does anybody else have the problem that the picture can not be displayed?

Ha, excellent title.

Can we add more to this storyline???

Man, I was always hoping someone will pick up that plotline eventually... and this was posted on my birthday