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Perfect!

Great chapter

3 moms or a leonard+jon mother fusion?

Sorry this went unanswered for so long. Fixing this issue is on my to-do list https://github.com/fictionbranches/fb/issues/17

Intresting.

Seems we have a new player in town.

Very creative and entertaining. Thank you.

So if it's the UV rays that are dangerous for vampires, then a sunblock with a strong SPF should protect them during the day. Problem solved!

OK, sunlight = bad.

So does sunlight kill these vampires or just make them glitter?

I thought vampires had to be invited into a dwelling.

I thought vampires had no reflection.

Great story. Very creative.

Love it that Jon is a buxom elven princess. Can't wait to find out what's in store for him/her and Karyn.

Great story. I hope Jon sticks around long enough to marry the prince, and maybe even produce an heir to the throne. Why not complete his humiliation as Allaria.

Great job with the story. I hope Jon/Allaria is in the book long enough to consummate her wedding. And I do think it is better when they are forced to act and talk totally in character. Great job everyone!

Great job with the story. I hope Jon/Allaria is in the book long enough to consummate her wedding. And I do think it is better when they are forced to act and talk totally in character. Great ob everyone!

I have to say that this is probably my most favorite story to read on FB. I hope you all will continue with this amazing tale. And I hope Jon/Allaria winds up in bed with the human knight - or at least getting to second base. Gotta make the best use of those breasts. Please, please, please.

I have to say that this is probably my most favorite story to read on FB. I hope you all will continue with this amazing tale. And I hope Jon/Allaria winds up in bed with the human knight - or at least getting to second base. Gotta make the best use of those breasts. Please, please, please.

I have to say that this is probably my most favorite story to read on FB. I hope you all will continue with this amazing tale. And I hope Jon/Allaria winds up in bed with the human knight - or at least getting to second base. Gotta make the best use of those breasts. Please, please, please.

I have to say that this is probably my most favorite story to read on FB. I hope you all will continue with this amazing tale. And I hope Jon/Allaria winds up in bed with the human knight - or at least getting to second base. Gotta make the best use of those breasts. Please, please, please.

Nice

Thanks!

Ohh the cliff!

That works better :)

hilarious and brilliant as always.

Great!!

Bunnie: Next to last paragraph of the previous entry, starting with "Jack Struggled..."

interested to see where you plan to take one of my favourite branches ^^

How did he get under 3ft? I missed something.

Lelouch what is your favorite type of FTF swaps? Is there any you’ve wanted me to write about and if so describe what they look like, their attitudes and their names. Maybe I could write something then others could add too

Can’t wait for the next add!

What a historic episode this was for FB—introducing 13 characters! Several of these characters became classics used routinely.

Can't wait to see where this goes, hope Candi gets to make an errant wish about the girls. Great job!

You're alive! love your stories, and on FIctionmania! would love to see you write more or any other stories you've done!

Nice catch...I've decided to retcon that.

Interesting so far but be careful, I noticed that in the previous episode Zoey said she didn't have the stone with her and now she does - did she lie to her friend or did you just forget?

Cool epiaode. As always, I'll try to game-ify this with alternative branches once youre done with it

We love it tooo

I decided to continue it. Seems there is more interested then I thought. Thanks for the encouragement :)

As someone who identifies as a mult this is immensely relatable. Can't wait to see where this goes!

https://discord.gg/BTNR6F WARNING: there is currently politics in the channel entitled General Bullshit

Sure! How do I join?

Agreed. This chapter was a particularly great mix of funny and sexy. Bravo.

Fantastic episode. By the way I'm on the beaddventure discord if you ever want to talk in a more real time format about kink writing.

Damn man. You weren't kidding about stepping your game up. I mean, your previous entries were good, don't get me wrong. I enjoyed them a lot. But this is still way better. The prose is great, the characterization of Karyn vs. Seraphina is fun, and I love the play on how some old fantasy authors really sucked at writing female characters.

I think it still works. We're already close to but not quite at the edge of where that would go. Might be good to keep in mind for flexibility's sake.

If it's already mandated by the genre, then I'll leave it as is. There is a funny contrast between oversexed characters and fairly pg plotlines--which is all I was gonna pull out of the erotica, of course. Anything too sex-related is a definite no-go, especially when the characters aren't doing it willingly.

That would certainly make sense given where we're taking it so far. Though personally I found a lot of the fairly PG fantasy like Wheel of Time to be sexually charged in a subdued, circumspect way. Character's can't cuss and the women are all aloof but here's a loving description of how great all their tits look in this over-detailed dress design.

I didn't even think about how a potential romance between the two is ruined by their unwanted family dynamic. Crap, that could be hilarious. As for the bookmark, I treating it as taking on as many traits from the one book as possible (because that's all Jon and Karen used it on)... But with a twist. I'm not quite sure how to reveal it yet, but I'm thinking that the bookmark may have "remembered" a few traits from the book its last owner used it on: an erotica.

Hum, i'm curious to see the development.