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Due to lack of interest I am discontinuing this story. Thanks for enjoying it if you did.

I'm happy to collaborate.

I don't have a grand vision for this one. Usually I plan out all the major beats of a story, and have a general emotion I want to capture. For this one, I just wanted to enjoy it as it devolved into chaos, to be ultimately resolved by some deus ex machina. The ending still doesn't quite put things right, but lets everyone be content and enjoy their new lives.

I'll email you some spoilers of some of my broader ideas, if you'd like, otherwise feel free to add whatever comes to your mind.

Hi Perri, I'm really enjoying this thread. Reality modifications are some of my favourite transformations out there. There are just so wonderfully and terrifyingly... complete. The victims really can't escape at all. Do you have a vision of where you'd want this story to go or do you mind me joining for a little collaboration?

Duplication was what I was planning. Love the idea of spreading identity in a benevolent way like that.

Good one electric zeal. I vote for duplications or the identity reality options.

Sorry for not updating MM in a while. I had family issues IRL come up. They're sorted out now and I'm ready to flesh out this whole story!

I didn't have anything else planned.

Really like the ideas behind this branch. Are you looking for collaboration, or is this a project you'd prefer to handle on your own?

Good chapter, i'm becoming really curious.

Kinda short....hope someone does this idea for real

Omg please continue this!

I kind of hope someone would continue with just a sub-story about nudist Zoe.

This option can be fun. I wonder just how much of their minds they would share. Would it be a hivemind, or just a shared identity?

<3 Fusion, Conjoinment, and Multiple Bodyparts with reality alteration even all rolled into one simple device. Love it! I hope we can get to see a lot of what this device can do.

Sorry about the wait! Writer's block and life's been hell lately.

Very intriguing concept, I'm curious to see where you go with this but hope you don't engage in too much identity death. It's also very well written.

I'm curious with this aproach.

Nice.
An alternative I could see is that the wish made Jon instantly swap everything that was left to change. Since everything was swapped, it would stop the swapping

Hi there and welcome! Some consider it an honour for their story to be added upon. ;)

Lions are not endurance runners, only sprinters.

Dogs do have color vision. They just don't see as many as we do. You should definitely Google dog vision. It's pretty cool.

I tried to delete and re-enter the comment to fix the typo (Fo vs Go), but got a: "javax.persistence.PersistenceException: org.hibernate.exception.ConstraintViolationException: could not execute statement"

Don't be concerned about adding to existing stories. The branch you create is entirely independent. It doesn't commit to a direction or theme and can be followed or not at whim. The same is true for branches that may be added to yours. Fo for it!

hello!

very cute, love it.

Yay for at least friends again.

Can’t wait for next episode

I don't know. Seems WAY too easy an 'out'.

Excellent back-to-back posts!

I like the premise and quality of writing, Well done!

Moved from the You Are What You Wish branch.

I can move it. It would fit better over there.

Excellent back-to-back posts!

I just saw this branch. It seems like it should be in the "Drafting Board".

Nevertheless I like the premise and quality of writing, Well done!

Yay for more changed.

I really like the core idea behind this branch, and it's very well written! Great chapter!

I particularly like a storyline that allows for leveraging of restrictions.

I won't be adding regularly to it, I think, but every now and then I'll do some work on it.

always liked this branch, hope it continues

Please keep this going!

Thank you for the feedback!!!! I'll try to improve as I go, and plan on writing more!!!

Really curious to see where this could go.

Loving these!

Well done. Interesting twist with the mother loving it and the father hating it. Makes sense and can add a lot I think. The writing itself is quite good as well, shows a lot of potential. There's some issues with tenses here and there but that's just down to obsessive editing. Also the perspective and exposition could maybe use a bit of polish, since it took me awhile to figure out what was a Real Karyn thought and what was a Sarah Karyn thought. Although it may have been meant to be deliberately ambiguous and I'm just pretty stupid at the moment.

In any case,I really enjoyed this. Thanks for adding. I'd love to see more.

<3 This is a story line that could happily be picked back up. Thanks for giving it another chapter.

Fantastic addittion, cant wait for more.

"Holy son of fucking a biscuit maker!"
10/10

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Far past time for me to complinment your concept and execution. Thank you.

Love it! Hope you continue