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LOL! This has much potential for hilarity

Really interesting stuff in here! Lots of fun ideas to explore, and I love how you described the reality changes in the early chapters. If I could offer some criticism - I found myself starting to get lost by this point. This is the 5th really long chapter of introduction. The characters are great and very well drawn, but there's just so much back & forth, and so much description, that it became truly hard to follow. I don't really understand what the actual bargain is at this point. Is Dave trying to keep Jake from being possessed by demons? And why is Dave also bargaining away his first-born, and Jake giving up his body when he dies? A lot of it feels a bit extraneous. And the descriptions of the objects in this episode were good at first but started to feel murky as it went on. Are there 3 artifacts or 4? Then the demon adds coins and other objects that do... something? I had a hard time following what's what. I'm interested in seeing where this goes, but I think you'd do well to pare things down and simplify a bit. Don't let your ideas get weighed down by your writing, if that makes sense...

This is a great branch! I hope to see more writing from you soon

No I like it. I wonder what trouble we can get them into on day two between us. ;) ;)

If you want me to change what Lauren’s wearing in Lonna’s body please let me know

Poor Biff.

10 years on, I can still think of some new twists ;)

I'm trying to rationalize how the clothes sizes changed in this wish compard to previous chapters when Jon ended up with mis-sized clothes. The only reasoning i can come up with is that in the case of Karyn's bikini, it's a bikini and has adjustable straps (Jon's tshirt was not accommodating his new breasts).

In the case of Mickey and Linda, I was just too lazy to repeat myself again by making a 2nd swap wish for clothes sizes, so perhaps the fact that neither of the two were aware of the swap is the reason that the clothes sizes are right. If neither knew any difference in size, then they would have naturally grown up and bought those sizes that approriately fit their body all their lives. But i could change that. Who knows. It's an interactive :)

hello swapping power shortcut 👀

Have to admit, I was a little bored with this episode myself. Trying to force myself to write shorter ones so they don't feel like novels.

I know that in a previous episode, Mikey's last name was said to be Matthews, but I changed it to Gibson, because ... well, I prefer that last name.

Nice to see you back, and thanks for adding onto my episode.

Wow, you really are good in twinning theme.

Perfect!

Great chapter

3 moms or a leonard+jon mother fusion?

Sorry this went unanswered for so long. Fixing this issue is on my to-do list https://github.com/fictionbranches/fb/issues/17

Intresting.

Seems we have a new player in town.

Very creative and entertaining. Thank you.

So if it's the UV rays that are dangerous for vampires, then a sunblock with a strong SPF should protect them during the day. Problem solved!

OK, sunlight = bad.

So does sunlight kill these vampires or just make them glitter?

I thought vampires had to be invited into a dwelling.

I thought vampires had no reflection.

Great story. Very creative.

Love it that Jon is a buxom elven princess. Can't wait to find out what's in store for him/her and Karyn.

Great story. I hope Jon sticks around long enough to marry the prince, and maybe even produce an heir to the throne. Why not complete his humiliation as Allaria.

Great job with the story. I hope Jon/Allaria is in the book long enough to consummate her wedding. And I do think it is better when they are forced to act and talk totally in character. Great job everyone!

Great job with the story. I hope Jon/Allaria is in the book long enough to consummate her wedding. And I do think it is better when they are forced to act and talk totally in character. Great ob everyone!

I have to say that this is probably my most favorite story to read on FB. I hope you all will continue with this amazing tale. And I hope Jon/Allaria winds up in bed with the human knight - or at least getting to second base. Gotta make the best use of those breasts. Please, please, please.

I have to say that this is probably my most favorite story to read on FB. I hope you all will continue with this amazing tale. And I hope Jon/Allaria winds up in bed with the human knight - or at least getting to second base. Gotta make the best use of those breasts. Please, please, please.

I have to say that this is probably my most favorite story to read on FB. I hope you all will continue with this amazing tale. And I hope Jon/Allaria winds up in bed with the human knight - or at least getting to second base. Gotta make the best use of those breasts. Please, please, please.

I have to say that this is probably my most favorite story to read on FB. I hope you all will continue with this amazing tale. And I hope Jon/Allaria winds up in bed with the human knight - or at least getting to second base. Gotta make the best use of those breasts. Please, please, please.

Nice

Thanks!

Ohh the cliff!

That works better :)

hilarious and brilliant as always.

Great!!

Bunnie: Next to last paragraph of the previous entry, starting with "Jack Struggled..."

interested to see where you plan to take one of my favourite branches ^^

How did he get under 3ft? I missed something.

Lelouch what is your favorite type of FTF swaps? Is there any you’ve wanted me to write about and if so describe what they look like, their attitudes and their names. Maybe I could write something then others could add too

Can’t wait for the next add!

What a historic episode this was for FB—introducing 13 characters! Several of these characters became classics used routinely.

Can't wait to see where this goes, hope Candi gets to make an errant wish about the girls. Great job!

You're alive! love your stories, and on FIctionmania! would love to see you write more or any other stories you've done!

Nice catch...I've decided to retcon that.

Interesting so far but be careful, I noticed that in the previous episode Zoey said she didn't have the stone with her and now she does - did she lie to her friend or did you just forget?

Cool epiaode. As always, I'll try to game-ify this with alternative branches once youre done with it

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