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Leaving this one open to outfit choices for the writers who continues it, as well as where they go.

I see what you did there.

Amazing o.o

You guys are on fire!

I'm really curious now o.o

Wonderful, this open a lot of possibilities.

Hey, keep encouraging and I’ll keep writing when I can. :)

Hear me out. what this story needs is a direction to eventually end in, a device which allows the mystery to be understood by the characters and then acted in, the Athena branch is my attempt at adding in this device.

This story is the one i'm most curious. Nice chapther.

Nice one, remember me of the life merge.

Hey you guys are on fire, nice chapthers.

A "twinning" death note where she can put how the transformation will happens.

This story is really interesting.

Great job on this! Please continue

Add another please

Yes. It's really weird...

Would you mind adding?

Nice pack of chapters too.

Wow, nice "pack" of chapters.

I’m gonna try and add more in a bit too.

That’s fine, I’ll add more when I can

Apologies for the short one readers.

Slight continuity error her mind was copied in last, but I’m willing to run with this error as it makes things go a bit more interestingly.

Keep it coming!

I thought it would be interesting if someone just stayed put and called. And if someone else couldn't change.

Great chapter.

Great job! Keep adding please.

To be honest, this is set in the spring, so many people will have had a birthday in the year. But I think we're on the same page.

Yeah, where I live, it's K-5 for Elementary, 6-8 for Middle School, and 9-12 for High School too.

I'm not sure you can trust your friend to know how to count properly. He does have a Florida education, after all.

(I can make that joke, I lived in Florida for all of K-12)

It depends if you are going from starting to ending age. Elementary here is Grades K-5, Middle 6-8, High School 9-12. So, a 12 year old in the Spring, which is supposed to be, would be 11 at the start of the year. I asked a friend of mine in Florida, and he said Middle School in his area is 5-8. So, it may vary. Someone once set Lake Point near PIttsburgh. I checked. In the suburbs of Pennsylvania, it is also 6-8.

HMM curious.

For me, middle school (or junior high school) was 12 to 14 years old. Then high school was 15 to 18. But ages could vary.

Haven't I been punished enough?

That was me. I didn't do the cheerleader branch though, that was churl.

Please continue!

I guess you'll have to be punished.

Oops, that's my fault.

Actually, Linda already got inside the house in a previous episode, using a spare key. (Musical Closets Variation: Yes, Jon is Stephanie's Friend)

It might take me a while but I will get there eventually. Work permitting, which I still have to go to in the middle of everything that is going on.

Bunnies or rabbits? Those are the same thing.

Normally, I don't think a person affected by the wish would be able to reach their destination so quickly, so I just figured that Zelda must live very close to the school.

With a little surprise that I was thinking that Mary had set up for her friend. It might get Lauren a little distracted and before they do go back.

Lauren might have a reason for not wanting to be a teenager again.

Sorry, I guess I missed that.

I said 'Ms. Wright' in the last branch. Can change it though.

I tried my best to look up the word Elutian, but I can't find it anywhere.

I added a few more chapters and look forward on where you take it. If there is something you’d want to happen let me know. Can’t wait to read what you add

Famous last words.

Hey i know this story, was you then Wokka who post this one and the cheerleader?

Thank you for the critique and the kind words.
I shared the feeling that the intro was too long. I had a shorter one already written up, but wasn't sure how to make alternate intros work with he structure of this site.
Did some rearranging that will hopefully offer a smoother experience.
I'll go over the long intro in the next few days and see what belongs on the cutting room floor.