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I'm not on Discord. What can I fix to make this less confusing?

I was probably just tired, but I couldn't really figure out what I wanted to do with this chapter. I knew the beats I wanted to include, but I don't think it worked.

Great start. Maybe a different branch for each person's box? And of course something unexpected has to happen.....

If it helps any, I was just making stuff up as I went along. I figure as long as everything's internally-consistent, it's not too important how well my made-up magic system tracks with real-life traditions.

Really enjoying this branch from Cork. Had some ideas of my own - I don't normally go for the "realistic" wiccan-style magic stuff so hopefully this sort of fits.

how to ruin an exciting story...

Thanks! Your encouragement is very motivating, and I'm really glad you enjoy my stuff. :) I've actually been around. I post a bit on chyoa.com, and I recently published a game on tfgs. I still keep up with FB, I just don't post as much as I used to. I'm looking forward to your own additions!

Nice to see you back Perri. I enjoy your work a lot. Hoping to be able to add to some of it when college is finally finished in a few months. Keep up the great work!

Yeah that helps Claire. Will this be a story line you will be continuing?

Added a few chapters to what you requested for Anna and Amy. I hope you like what I wrote.

I'm really enjoying this FM, please keep it up

I'm enjoying this, even if it's confusing. Are you on the FB Discord at all?

@Mira Thank you! For better visualization of the 4th shirt, think of the hem of the top is slanted in the , as I had a more 80's style in mind. So it shows some skin on the left side and about half the navel, while covering the right side. Hope this helps!

Really love the transformative shirt theme and cool to see you continuing it. Also nice to add in the bit on making more shirts. I do like 1 and 4 the most for myself though I did have a bit of a hard time visualizing what option 4 looks like.

Why did his voice change?

I'm looking forward to see how Sarah reacts to the new (and probably slightly nerdy/tomboyish) addition to the cheerteam.

I just want to clarify something about how other people react to the change, in that they will have one! people will notice that things have changed. They won't think it's too strange, but say a close male friend of Jon's might ask him what having boobs is like, or if he saw Jon getting changed for gym and realised Jon has a vagina might even ask him about that if he felt like it wouldn't be too awkward a thing to do.

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Well, not bad thoughts for a chapter of the early 21st century. Yes, the plague made Europeans realize that our life is rather short. But it was curiosity and more rational thinking that created science.

Nice chapter.

What a twist...

This chapter explains a lot about Karyn...

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He can be anything he wants to be. And she's controlling what he wants to be. Except it sure doesn't sound like he wants to be this.

Emit is just asking for cosmic retribution.

Well spotted. I think I noticed at some point that "Falcon" and "Fusion" were both 6-letter names that started with "F" and ended in "on," so in a world in which cars are fusion-powered, it's more likely that Ford would have revived the "Falcon" name in the U.S. at some point.

Ha, good question. I'll try to take that into account if I ever get inspired to write more in this storyline. (Wow, 2018... imagine if this was taking place in 2020!)

So once they crossed the 'border' Sarah would no longer be attracted to nerds like Leonard, right?

I love that comment at the end. The car that is not fusion powered is called a Fusion. Brilliant!

if you mean the outline or tree that is on CYOC, there already is one. It's in the links at the top of every chapter. "Outline from here".

Ok. Thanks for your answer.

Harem time?

He knows. Start protocol delta17.

Nice, i notice the part "oh ok, madison family into sarah" but i also notice the change you decided to do. Well i think this will make everyone happy xD

I think my two favorite things to do on FB are to change people into Sarah, and to change Sarah into other people. Honestly, this story started out as very Jon-centric in my head, and Sarah wasn't going to change at all. But then I decided to treat it more as a Sarah story, so it's going to get the best of both worlds. I've got a few Jon elements that I definitely want to insert into this narrative, but Sarah's definitely getting more attention than she was originally going to.

And now the effects of the wish are on a rampage.

That's a really intriguing story, it's sees Sarah is gonna absorb more and more of the madison family at the same time she gonna try to manipulate then.

That's really intriguing. I'm anxious to see more of this

This seem really interesting.

But he just said "you're Jon and you're a guy!"

Enjoying this story path, interested to see where it goes.

So has Emit gone off the path that would get him human?

It may be frelling late, but here's one: http://old.bearchive.com/~addventure/game1/docs/recents/

Welcome back.

No worries! I've been thinking of continuing this but I wasn't sure if anyone would actually enjoy it so I'm glad to hear you'd be up for reading/writing(?) more!

I completely forgot about that. I'll try to fix it

I don't know if you want to use this element of the plot or not, but in this branch, Jon only remembers the stone as a faded dream, and the stones whereabouts are unknown. Perhaps the stone isn't really missing, but Jon isn't aware of it.

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