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Ah Gawd, that made me laugh out loud! Poor Zoe. Is Aiko still around or has she left for Japan? This is going to cause psychological stress for them both until they can be together

By Great Sage - 2019-01-29 06:22:29

On Zoe Races To Greet Her New Sister

lol this is cascading wonderfully out of control.

By avatar Mira - 2019-01-29 01:58:05

On New name, look, and even personality.

Hahaha, poor John, doomed by triple whammy.

By Denkkar - 2019-01-29 01:51:32

On A Foreign Exchange Student Going Home Soon

Thanks for your kind words. It goes without saying but I'll say it anyway, anyone is welcome to continue this. I won't be upset if someone has one idea to continue it and I have another. I've seen that sort of thing even though we can tack new branches on wherever.

By Capt - 2019-01-28 20:00:47

On A Foreign Exchange Student Going Home Soon

A fine addition, I liked the comedy moment of Karyn and Zoe arguing over who got to Imprint Jon, I look forward to seeing how Jon deals with is need to be with his new Twin

By Great Sage - 2019-01-28 17:48:38

On A Foreign Exchange Student Going Home Soon

ooh, very nice.

By avatar TheScienceWizard - 2019-01-28 16:20:53

On Lucy comes up with an idea

I'm glad you like my take on the branch. There's a lot of things I've thought about doing with it that I wanted Karyn in on, and some other things i don't. Thanks for the positivity, I'll do my best to update weekly.

By Literally Noone - 2019-01-27 21:18:41

On Going to Karyn's

Loving this story line

By Great Sage - 2019-01-27 16:10:19

On Jon and Athena go to the mall

I love how you focus on everything beyond the initial idea of the branch just as well for the authentic experience. Even though this was a little too much in too little time/text imo, it still warms my heart to read :D Going through a rough patch right now and this story here is helping me smile even then, I mean it. Thank you :) Looking forward to more, as always. Can't wait to see how Jon's fantasies will play out now that Karyn is in the game as well!

By avatar M3t3r0x - 2019-01-27 08:55:44

On Going to Karyn's

yeah, i have no idea how to write this stuff, lol

By avatar TheScienceWizard - 2019-01-26 19:51:25

On A Little Exploration

That will be changed soon ;3

By avatar TheScienceWizard - 2019-01-26 15:11:55

On Zo'

Ah fair enough, thanks for letting us know. Looking forward to new stuff :)

By avatar M3t3r0x - 2019-01-25 11:27:28

On Will out

Nice reference to some of my Christmas stories with the Santa thing.

By Anonymous51 - 2019-01-25 11:11:07

On Hat of names: A surprisingly normal morning at school

Sorry, uni is back in my life with a vengeance. I've got writing time this weekend though!

By Literally Noone - 2019-01-24 23:25:34

On Will out

I'm excited to see someone continuing Tobias' multibreast story line. Good luck with this man, hope you will continue.

By avatar Mira - 2019-01-24 15:52:24

On Well, compared to Karyn...

Big shame that Jon is so indifferent/opposed about his new equipment

By avatar M3t3r0x - 2019-01-24 13:52:19

On Zo'

Good episode!

By avatar M3t3r0x - 2019-01-24 13:25:36

On On toward Lunch

I don't know about eight heads, but two heads and six arms would probably do just fine. :D

By avatar Mira - 2019-01-23 13:54:07

On Wish it

Just do whatever you like. The whole point of having a branching storyline is that you can branch a story, from any point, in any direction you like. You won't get in another author's way because they can always just ignore you and keep extending their latest story.

By avatar Phoenix - 2019-01-22 18:46:21

On Hat of names: Staking claims


By avatar Mr. C - 2019-01-21 18:52:50

On After School

And Zoe is.... [rolls dice]

By avatar TheScienceWizard - 2019-01-21 18:39:10

On After School

also meta, i had to include some meta

By avatar TheScienceWizard - 2019-01-20 17:23:38

On Last Lessons

Yay! More of this excellent branch!

By bigbustgazer - 2019-01-20 16:10:21

On Jon focuses on his plan

"have i overused bell sound effects?"

By avatar TheScienceWizard - 2019-01-20 15:39:25

On Last Lessons

Yo are we gonna see a new chapter soon? The wait is KILLING me!

By avatar M3t3r0x - 2019-01-18 13:24:48

On Will out

I’m enjoying this branch quite a bit! Keep up the good work~!

By avatar Mr. C - 2019-01-17 17:51:02

On Lunchtime

The pictures of Jay/Jade are of people clearly over 25, were there no teenage nerd pictures available? :)

By Great Sage - 2019-01-17 14:49:01

On Jay and Jon are converted

Why did I even write this episode: I have no idea, I should have just skipped straight to lunch....

By avatar TheScienceWizard - 2019-01-17 09:40:27

On On toward Lunch

up next: an episode where I go too deep into something that could be skipped with 2 sentences.

By avatar TheScienceWizard - 2019-01-17 09:30:42

On Gym class

Did he specify that he wanted to be a human girl?

By Catprog - 2019-01-11 18:38:03

On The demon is summoned

Heh, why do I have it in my head that a "Karyn" Jon would ask Jon to become another "Karyn" Jon?

By avatar Mira - 2019-01-09 17:55:18

On I wish Karyn had clothes that fit her new body

Some interesting possibilities here, I wonder if the insta-change thing goes both ways? Perhaps Jon can realise that she can change Pete into her ideal lesbian lover?

By Great Sage - 2019-01-09 05:38:30

On Jon's mother takes him shopping

I've been enjoying this storyline, looking forward to future episodes.

By Pavlov - 2019-01-08 21:01:14

On How Karyn's spending her day

An intriguing dilemma, Tom gets what he wants as long as he is prepared to have his brother suffer, oh and let's not forget crazy demon chick no doubt amusing herself at their expense as well.

By Great Sage - 2019-01-07 14:04:49

On The demon is summoned

Thanks! I'm proud to have made it onto your list on reddit.

By Literally Noone - 2019-01-04 21:02:34

On Will out

By the way, the title of this episode is a reference to the "Star Trek: TNG" episode "A Fistful of Datas", where the image of the character Data was replacing all the characters in a holodeck program.

By Anonymous51 - 2019-01-04 09:28:34

On Everyone in Jon's Family is Zoe

I'm very excited to see this story still going!

By DreamerDreaming - 2019-01-03 04:04:51

On Will out

Thank you! The thought that anyone looks forward to these makes me happy. I'm really enjoying writing them, too.

By Literally Noone - 2019-01-03 01:52:17

On Will out

I came here to fap and stayed for the unique, very high quality portay of Karyn & Jon as well as writing in general. Absolutely can't wait for the next chapters.

By avatar M3t3r0x - 2019-01-02 20:47:30

On Will out

This story is really interesting so far, please continue.

By Great Sage - 2018-12-21 10:36:31

On Dennis prepares for Scott's day

Why hasn't Jon even tried to wish to know what's going on yet?

By bigbustgazer - 2018-12-20 05:12:22

On The Principal is waiting for Biff

Exactly which part of the UK does Madison come from? As someone born and raised there I can see elements of several dialects in evidence.

By Great Sage - 2018-12-16 14:34:14

On Lunchtime

Fantastic work! These types of transformations are all too rare, and your writing skills are excellent. You convey the experience extremely well.

By DreamerDreaming - 2018-12-13 15:07:56

On Taking it further

Excellent episode, been waiting for this.

By avatar M3t3r0x - 2018-12-08 20:13:27

On Taking it further

Thank you to petebrown, Moot, Dude22, Paradox, Alex_Ultra, Malekith, Carlsbad, and Winter Rose, to whom I owe a lot of ideas and inspiration.

By Literally Noone - 2018-12-08 15:10:16

On Taking it further

I wish this would be continued

By avatar M3t3r0x - 2018-12-05 17:59:13

On Fulfill his wish

I definitely do like it! And short chapters are alright. I'm actually surprised you already got 2 more going on in the same day I wrote my initial comment.

What I really love is that this isn't only about the fetish fiction itself, but also about what the stone can do and how Jon handles everything. I can see how he puts thought into his wishes and doesn't just stupidly make a wish that will change his life for no apparent reason, like it's the case in my other chapters. You have writing talent, so seeing a fiction written for one of my favourite fetishes is delightful. I can't wait to see where this is going, this has to genuinely be the best writing I've seen on this website in the branches I already read through. Keep it up!

By avatar M3t3r0x - 2018-12-02 17:40:43

On Now what?

Thank you! I'm new to writing, and especially new to writing weird fetish porn, so it means a lot.

By Literally Noone - 2018-12-01 21:34:38

On On the bus

Sorry that the chapters are short. What happens is, every time I think of an alternate way that I or someone else might like to take the story, I end the chapter. Hope you like it!

By Literally Noone - 2018-12-01 21:25:38

On Now what?

One of my favorite branches, thanks!

By Literally Noone - 2018-12-01 19:45:31

On Karyn goes home

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